THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 53

Originally posted by: punam2712

WHAT ROMANCE

IT FEELS I JUST DIED AND WENT TO HEAVEN - MAANEET ROMANCING

IT WAS HOT TOO - ALL MAAN'S FEELINGS WERE EXPRESSED

AND GEET TOO BECAME BOLD AND MADE HER MOVE

LOVED THE RIDE - IT WAS SO SEXY

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely emotional touching update..te way geet ki talli state and te way she carving to hold my maan but her kife style stopping her was lovely e motional..te way geet driving te bike and my maan stopping her by holding making her to faint in his desire was lovely cute.. te way geet ki freeze game making my maan to stood numb and his geet teasing him with her touchs and kisses making him to burn was lovely emotional touching.. te way my maan kissing his geet and both drowning was lovely.. te way my maaneet craving for each other but their heart stopping them was emotional touching.. te way geet was in pain thinking 2mor she is leaving my maan and struggling to say tat was lovely emotional...te way my naughty maan deciding to be in beach with his geet for keeping dadi's promise was lovely cute...i love te update

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

Uff...such a toe curling update...so beautifully written..One of the most romantic update I have read...The flow of emotions...Giit dilemma...Wanting to shed her inhibitions...So well written...Very well written... 👏 👏 [=D>t
The whole update just had few kisses but had a whole sensual feeling without even an ounce to crudeness...
Awesome work...
Thanks for filling us will regular doses of Maneet...
Happy to note to u have only planned a small seperation...After this update will not be to read a seperated Maneet
Kudos to ur writing skills again... 🤗

Sorry i missed your lovely comment as it fell between the replies i was giving. Thank you. I focus on romance in my story more than descriptions as you noticed.

Another part with so much deep feelings of maaneet love
You always touch my heart with ur beautifull written emotions⭐️
geet wanted to express him which she cudn't do like others...well thats why she is GIIT na😉
luved how maan understands her problm and nvr forced her😳
luved the bikeriding and their passionate romance☺️
maan is so clvr keeping his promise and enjyoing with his talli giit😆(not actually tally😉
awesome update👏
waiting for hp scenes😃

i wish maan too follow geet and we can get maaneet scenes in HP

🤗

you did not pm me for this update though i commented on previous update.

part 71
awesome dear...
excellent...
Maan need not worry about his passion coz Geet too loves him to that extent...
oh Geet was trying to get bold...
she didnt tell him yet...
hope she will stay safe...
that romance was so lovely dear...
cont soon dear...

One of the most mesmerising updates of urs.Loved it to core.Geet's way of expressing her love left me speechless.She didn't speak but her action spoke louder.Maaneet's closeness seemed heavenly.In between her dilemma of telling Maan d truth nd expressing her,the balance was superb.

Loveliest part.Thanks for d password.

Originally posted by: Shruti_Goyal

Another part with so much deep feelings of maaneet love
You always touch my heart with ur beautifull written emotions⭐️
geet wanted to express him which she cudn't do like others...well thats why she is GIIT na😉
luved how maan understands her problm and nvr forced her😳
luved the bikeriding and their passionate romance☺️
maan is so clvr keeping his promise and enjyoing with his talli giit😆(not actually tally😉
awesome update👏
waiting for hp scenes😃