THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 35

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

awesome part... u know when i read d teaser part, i was in a restaurant having lunch with my family! i had to literally control my expression not to LOL or keep smiling crazily... it was too goooddd

haha... devil dev!!!
n maans 101 seduction plan... i mean gel-shel n all just for dinner at home...isn't he making it too obvious... haiz... guess that wat it means crazy in love!

Yes I agree😆 but it is for his "Giit"

dev's singing n dadi was too good
n chotu's part...haha

all in all, i was laughing throughout d update

n dev is too smart... maan's BMW in exchange for maan spending time with hs beloved giit...
always wanted to ask u, y u use giit instead of geet for maan???!!! 😕

I think GC said it like that once or twice on the show, where he stressed the word so it sounds like Giit instead of Geet. I liked the sound of that so I put it in here.😃

maan imagining or dreaming of geet in d dress! d whole part was so passionate, seductive as well as funny!
bechara besharam ban gaya without doing anything😆

dance n disc part was awesome but im more interested in d precap!
i mean maaneet alone, at night n champagne... definitely not a good combo 4 unmarried maaneet but a definitely awesome combo for us readers!!!! haha

will they or one of them end up drunk! hopefully geet is d 1...she'll b 2 cute 2 handle after all maan is looking irresistible n definitely kuch kuch hoga... well waiting 4 that kuch kuch

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

an another magic from avis maaneet magical wand😳

dinner ke liye ithna saj dhaj ke tho ladkiyaan bhi nahi jaathi hogi😆 but maan is on the seduction mssion... as if he needs them to do... bambi tho wase hi clean bowled hain😉Yes, but idea accha hai na. I mean let the guy do some work too😉

hayee dev... but mujhe aur chahiye... ye tho teasing waala tha... i want them more and more... Bhelwala😲

atlast maan ki dimaag ki bathi jali... and he came to know that devs chotu is none other than his precious giit!!!😆

my heart to pound harder than Shiv Mani's drums⭐️ how much i love his drums yaar and the way he just rotates the sticks ... hayeee

Rajdhani bohut baar aa chuki... socha drum roll ho jaaye.. I have seen him when he came with A. R. Rahman in concert. Amazing guy.

I am going to dream about you in this dress ... kathilaana waar tha woh😆 bambi bechaari... maan in seductive mode and avi dono peeche padh gaye hain😉 Kuch kar nahi sakta toh verbally seduce toh kar sakta hai na..😆

dance waala part was also too lovely... Thank you. I am not good at some parts so it is hard for me to write such scenes. I am glad it came out good enough that you guys liked it.

Dont pressure urself for not writing more on maaneet... all love it ... just bring it on babes... we r here to read it... we can read them on and on and on... 😳

Originally posted by: muskanp

Awesome song Avi
I love this one

Just amazing update loved it

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

One of my all-time favorite songs. You really have a way with songs and use them so well in the story. All 3 couples are in the happy content mode and full of love for each other. The song totally conveyed the mood and feeling.

Loved the Dev-Maan interaction. Bargaining with BMW, good choice Dev!

Dev's humming reminded me of Dev teasing Tara during initial days. And the bike ride went back to their college times. Thanks for bringing back small links to the past.

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

finally mere Devtara wapas aa gaye..

haaye Mera Dev- Maan ki kya bajayi.🤣.

Originally posted by: spvd

part 70
awesome dear...
excellent...
hahaha Maan and his ways are sometimes so funny...
but so sweet and loving...
Dev is honestly too much...
such a tease...
even Maan was tongue tied...
oh ho Maan u are gonna regret alter for saying yes to Dev...
Geet darling is all shy and nervous...
well cant blame her having a lover like Maan its difficult...
hahaha the look on Maan's face was too good...
but he has his ways to make it his way...
and Dev never gotta know this side of his till now...
some moments like this between Maan and Dev would be very interesting...
oh Sameera and Dave and Dave is smart like Maan...
the dress scene was so beautiful...
lovely update dear...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: SonalikaSingh

avi, i am horrified about the thought that u want to end this story. this is my stress buster. there is no hurry, sweety. these sweet moments is what make life. stories r not only made of heavy emotional and practical stuff.

the way u write describing every small moment so beautifully is what i am addicted to. pls continue this story for as long as u can.😛😛😛

Originally posted by: valli30

nice part

dev teasing poor maaneet😆

maan ye kya apne pair par khuladi mar rahe ho

dev ki chotu app ki giit hai 😛

poor maan jab ye patha chala tho he was shocked😆

they went to disc to meet sameera

geet ne short dress pehna aur maan lost in her

hehe salwar diya pehne ko 😳😉

loved it

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Finally Maan ki tube light jali..😆 Dev. he is really devil.. BMW ke liye kitni nautanki..😆😉 But he is most fun loving person... love him too.. ❤️ But love Maan more..😛❤️ Geet in western outfit.. Sam n Dave met Maneet.. Last song sequence... Loved it.. Saiyara is coming up..😳