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Posted: 11 years ago

#1011

Originally posted by: love2_soma
bhuka sher ko jaga di geet ne...abb sambhalo...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Sher khud bhukha ban gaya

Iss mein Geet ki kya galti hai😆

Thanks Soma.

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1012

Thanks for the Valentine's day update. Your description of the Skype call was so amazing, we could actually feel their longing.

Pinky and her bak-bak! But good that she snores, otherwise Geet wouldn't have moved to the outhouse. Our man really hit the pot! He would've never imagined to see Geet as soon as he reached in HP, and that too moaning his name in sleep!

Loved the banner!

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#1013

Oh I forgot about Pinky.. when she said abt bleeding.. she should eat more for strength.. I started laughing..🤣 🤣n mumma was like that kya hua..? tum karti kya ho PC pe.. itana hasti ho.. meine bola kuch nahi bas yuhi radio sun rahi thi.. toh RJ ne joke mara..😉😛

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#1014

n Maan n Geet ki raat baaki hai. Having a romantic never ending night. Both can't leave each other arms even for a second. N then the most painful part. Their separation. Geet crying so much like it's her vidai. Vidai from Maan. Maan somehow controlling himself for Geet.

Ahh Brij bhi HP ja raha hai. Gadbad na ho jaye. Nahi hoga kyun ki Maan bhi aa raha hai. Skype chat. THUD!!!!! It's turned out to be torturing Maan. Geet ko Aise dekh na n control karna. Uff it's hard for Maan. Ab Maan ki koi galti nahi hai wen he becomes besharam in front of her.

Maan on the way to HP. N seeing Geet in sleeping form awakens his raw desires. Ab aage kya hoga. Me eagerly waiting.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1015

wow lovely touching emotional cute update.. te way geet hide and seek game making my maan to reslteless and wen she said she came from shower and my maan burning in his desire and burning his geet too with his intense look was lovely emotional cute.. te way my maaneet ki separation making both of them restless and te way they cravings was lovely emotional.. te way pinky pouring oil on geet's burning soul and te way she rolling in te bed missing my maan one side and another side my maan swimming missing his geet and showing his frustration on his staffes was lovely emotional touching.. te way my maan cuming to hp and wen he saw his geet blabbering his name in her sleep, wearing his shirt was lovely emotional touching..te way and te way he at once hugged her and both pouring they passion but kissing them was lovely emotional touching.. pls i want tis night to extend some more showing they burning soul ...i love te update

Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 11 years ago

#1016

Beautifully done..
again i am awed...
its like i am getting to learn... everytime i read a good writing i learn and get to know where i lack and this update made me learn in so many ways as writer's perspective

Now as a reader...i just loved it.. ohh the feelings that you have explained, went inside and the scenes could again be felt...

I loved the update to core... its so romantically going and so beautifully done that i am fearing to go back and read the tough parts... but i will.. i guess i have missed a lot

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lily

@LILY111144

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#1017

uff dhak dhak,,,,,,😉

geets longing,,,maan ko chain aa gaya geet ki halat bhi maan jaisee hei

skyp idea s super,,,,,screen pe lag gayee aag,,,,,😆😆

mneet mmnts pe stop,,,,a big no,,,dil maange more,,,,,😳

u r osm avi,,,,,👏⭐️

sowie 4 late cmnt ws nt well,,,,nd like s not wrking,,,,,

Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1018

Happy Valentine's Day dear...

part 73
awesome dear...
excellent...
haye so lovely...
too romantic...
Geet's innocent gestures are too much for Maan to bear...
and both are affected by this passion...
my God Pinky is too much...
no wonder she and Geet are friends...
but Geet madam has gained knowledge now...
thanks to Tara...
and Geet is completely immersed in Maan thud world...
well cant blame her...
Maan is like that...
and the way and depth he loves her anyone would get affected...
poor Geet she couldnt sleep at all...
Pinky snores like this?
bechara Adi...
oh shes wearing Maan's shirt...
and trying to sleep so sweet...
Dev is so nice...
he forced Maan to go to his Geet...
good Dev...
and Maan haye hes coming to HP...
now hes here and he will protect Get from that Brij...
OMG OMG OMG am so hyperventilating...
Geet is his room wearing his shirt and Maan has reached...
the tension is too much to bear...
yaar why did u stop there?
damn i was going with the flow...
and u had to stop there grrr Avi...
now u better update ASAP...
cont soon dear...

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valli30

@valli30

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#1019

lovely update

maan desperate to see geet and geet in dilema whether to on the skype or not😳

maan is totally gone seeing geet 😉

poor souls not able to stay away from each other

upar se pinky ka bak bak😆

bechari geet ki neendh uda diya usne aur khud aram se so rahi hai😛

maan got a sweet surpise when he reached HP seeing his Giit sleeping cutely.☺️

waiting for next part

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Ann

@annbell

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#1020

Originally posted by: dqno1
Thanks Annbell.

i know its natural way to express deir love ..

ur ff has a special place in my heart ..

deir silent love is still lingered in my mind .. wen ever i read deir close moments my mind just wander to dat moments which dey spent silently ..

dey are still fresh dat i couldn't get over it ..

i just compared those with today's moments dats it .. at dat tym i never expected dey would be dis close ..

but ur updates proved me wrong by maan's romantic side n geet's longings to be with him all da tym .. yet shy to express her love for him ...

of course i love to see dem together n deir close moments are really special to me ..

da emotions followed by reading ur update n my comparison lead me to comment like dat ..