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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

Ooommmggg ❤️ I just love this part... Speechless

Maan-Geet missing each other Awww doori Se piyar barhta hai its so true
Just love their interaction.
Pinky 😆 bleed to death Hahahaha... She only need a reason to eat more and made Geet conscious too... And she missed Her Maan more. Actually I am glad pinky asked her doubts esi liye tu Geet went n slept in Maan's room 😛
Maan and Dev Understanding twins and Cool Dadi 👍🏼 maan came for his mishty to surprise her and his return gift was already in his Bed sleeping and moaning his Name 😃 Awww loved that scene sweet, adorably cute and Romantic Too ❤️
Amazing Part and thank you for such long Valentine's treat and PM
Loved it so much

Thank you. Glad you loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

Ufff..what an update..my heart went thud thud throughout the update...beautifully written...felt i was actually watching the show.
The romance,the longing,the desperation..can go on on...Wonderful update Avi
...
But evil Avi stopped and left us desperate for the next update...
Have a wonderful valentine day ahead

😈 😆 kuch blog ke liye bhi rakh lu, hai na?
Thanks for the wishes. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

iss update padne ke baad main comment doon mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aarahi hai avi patha nahi kitni baar padi main yeh update the longing to be near ur loved one and the most dev and dadi understanding the plight of maan and geet's longing just lovely. Geet thinking of maan and sleeping on his bed and maan reaching hp wants to give surprise instead he received a sweet shock surprise by having geet on his bed and she thinking about him just made maan to love her more and more and without wasting time he just came beside her and geet thinking as a dream just went in flow with what ever maan did😆poor souls kitna tadap rahe hai ek doosre ko paane keliye


just mindblowing avi and thank u for such a lamba wala update


lakshu banner tho mast banayi tune editing was just superb👏👏

Valentine special tha toh dil se deni thi gift tum sab ko..😃
Glad you liked it so much Priya.
Banner is really lovely too.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

Hey Avi

I am extremely and terribly sorry for not commenting for the last 2 updates. As I told u before I had fractured my hand and it jus got allrite. And anyways enough of my sorry puran and coming to the updates they were brilliant and mind blowing and exceptionally good. U know wat I did I fell in love wid ur story so much that I have read all ur updates all over again and wat more can I say simply beautiful. Eagerly waiting for more
Abinaya

Thanks Abinaya. Hope your hand gets better soon.😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Chapter 70 -

Seriously Avi...things you write. They are so realistic and hilarious...you really know how to be romantic and funny.

Mujhe yaad nahi tha what you were talking about.. had to go and re-read.. 😆 Likhte hi bhul jaati hu..

Loved Dev's teasing which finally garnered him the BMW keys though the plan changed. But seriously - aankhon aankhon mein baat hone do...it was too funny... I come from a family of naughty people.. My Mom used to be just like Daadima, naughty CID. She was a barrel of fun, no matter how sick, she was she always made people smile. So its in the genes so to speak..

Maan I guess is so thinking like a guy...sometimes it is so hard to write like that but you just pull it off brilliantly - dress pehni usne, and besharm mein...waise bhi besharmi ki kahan hai abhi...Poor guy, kuch karta nahi phir bhi tag de diya..

I love Bryan Adams...and this along with some other of his songs make him my favorite singer...very good song choice once again Avi....Thank you. Our song choices coincide a lot.😃

Chapter 71 -

What a sensual bike ride...but before that what struck me were so many conflicts running inside Geet's head. Life is so complicated...so many things going on and so much less time to talk and express all...I think this is natural for some girls. I know because I used to be like this, shy, reserved, not able to express anything. I drove my husband crazy..😆

All of it culminates into their night at beach...what a beautiful update. She has been restrained for so long and finally she is trying to flutter her wings of love. She adores him and today she just showed him how her passion and love matches his in every sense. Yet there are strings of society and morality with which she has grown. And he accepts her as she is...perfect for him. He has loved her as she is and that is what matters...

Yes I think Maan's character comes out in moments like this. He does not force her or coerce her but accepts her.

After so much pain and separation, they have managed to be together and their happiness truly touches my heart...awesome update...

Chapter 72 -

Yeh duri...haye yeh duri...

Awesome update once again Avi...

Fight over kids...their little naughty and little serious talks...so much like two lovers who are exploring their world...They are building their dreams now.😃

Brij's history was dark and I hope he gets caught very soon and no harm comes to Megha. She has already suffered a lot along with everyone in Thakur family. There is more on that front. That much I will promise is no women will get hurt in the process. Even if I try I won't be able to write that.😕 Some of my own limitations as a writer.

Daadima did a good job of making Maan understand his responsibilities towards Geet's family as well. Daarji should have same place in his life which he expects Geet to give to Daadima. I also loved when he actually asked is she was ok with Dev-Tara's decision. That was a wonderful and sensitive thing to do. She has to wait along with him for the engagement delay, so it was the right thing to do.

Thanks Ritzy for the support.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sriif

awesome update dear...

poor souls finally met after thier cravings to be together...
poor pinky literally scared geet ...
romance was awesome dear

Thank u😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: srikrithi

Loved it loved it loved IT!

Maan geet both scenes were HOT!
Dev understood maan & geet's plight.
Pinky's question threw me off. Ha ha ha!
Now that Mann is in HP I am little relieved as Brij can't hurt geet.
Continue soon.

Thank u😃 Yes Brij ki dhulaai ka time aa gaya hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bbindu

fabulus update!!

The romance and the distance between Maan and Geet- wow!
so romantic when Maan sees Geet sleeping in his shirt and dreaming about him.
will be waiting for the next part eagerly.

Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nihatri

Now a bit of Tara n Dev side of story

😆 Yeh McDonald's hai kya? 😆 Ek burger ke saath side order of French fries..😆
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks😃😃

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