Originally posted by: ritzy09
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Seriously Avi...things you write. They are so realistic and hilarious...you really know how to be romantic and funny.
Mujhe yaad nahi tha what you were talking about.. had to go and re-read.. 😆 Likhte hi bhul jaati hu..
Loved Dev's teasing which finally garnered him the BMW keys though the plan changed. But seriously - aankhon aankhon mein baat hone do...it was too funny... I come from a family of naughty people.. My Mom used to be just like Daadima, naughty CID. She was a barrel of fun, no matter how sick, she was she always made people smile. So its in the genes so to speak..
Maan I guess is so thinking like a guy...sometimes it is so hard to write like that but you just pull it off brilliantly - dress pehni usne, and besharm mein...waise bhi besharmi ki kahan hai abhi...Poor guy, kuch karta nahi phir bhi tag de diya..
I love Bryan Adams...and this along with some other of his songs make him my favorite singer...very good song choice once again Avi....Thank you. Our song choices coincide a lot.😃
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What a sensual bike ride...but before that what struck me were so many conflicts running inside Geet's head. Life is so complicated...so many things going on and so much less time to talk and express all...I think this is natural for some girls. I know because I used to be like this, shy, reserved, not able to express anything. I drove my husband crazy..😆
All of it culminates into their night at beach...what a beautiful update. She has been restrained for so long and finally she is trying to flutter her wings of love. She adores him and today she just showed him how her passion and love matches his in every sense. Yet there are strings of society and morality with which she has grown. And he accepts her as she is...perfect for him. He has loved her as she is and that is what matters...
Yes I think Maan's character comes out in moments like this. He does not force her or coerce her but accepts her.
After so much pain and separation, they have managed to be together and their happiness truly touches my heart...awesome update...
Chapter 72 -
Yeh duri...haye yeh duri...
Awesome update once again Avi...
Fight over kids...their little naughty and little serious talks...so much like two lovers who are exploring their world...They are building their dreams now.😃
Brij's history was dark and I hope he gets caught very soon and no harm comes to Megha. She has already suffered a lot along with everyone in Thakur family. There is more on that front. That much I will promise is no women will get hurt in the process. Even if I try I won't be able to write that.😕 Some of my own limitations as a writer.
Daadima did a good job of making Maan understand his responsibilities towards Geet's family as well. Daarji should have same place in his life which he expects Geet to give to Daadima. I also loved when he actually asked is she was ok with Dev-Tara's decision. That was a wonderful and sensitive thing to do. She has to wait along with him for the engagement delay, so it was the right thing to do.
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