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Posted: 11 years ago
maan found geet interesting
and she threw her arms around his nech and hugged him - does she also find him interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago


For you Nisha Di šŸ¤—


Your sweet sa scrap I thought when I first saw it but your brilliance gobsmacked me. I want to share your amazing talent to make anything and everything into a masterpiece. So here's it:


Silly name for a movie I thought,
'UNHEARD TALES OF AN ANTAGONIST'
But what do I care.
I'm here just to take a stab at the biggest antagonist of my life, 'time'
I cant kill this endless entity, but a movie will surely allow me to dent it a little.
The empty seat beside me fills up as soon as the movie starts. We bump our hands a little too forcibly and I turn to apologize, a polite smile plastered on my lips.
I freeze.
How I searched for you far and wide, in every face that came into my life
And now I,
FINALLY FOUND YOU right here beside me.
I couldn't let go of you, neither could I move towards you,
Still caught up in this tangled WEB OF LOVE, though to you, it was never even a story of yesteryear .
Then in the flickering light of the theater I see them in your hands, the dog eared, tear stained 99 NOTES. a blazing testament to my unrequited love. I am hot and cold all over, a million thoughts clamoring through my head.
Why did I stop at 99, I have always asked myself? To me this has ultimately been, THE CURIOUS CASE OF THE UNSOLVED MYSTERY.
And then you grab my palm and I feel a ticklish sensation as you scribble something on it.
I take it close and joy starts flowing down my eyes.
I know now, the 100th had to be from you.
It reads,
100:
To love and to cherish; from this day forward until death do us part.

-The Beginning-


(Written by Nisha Di/ Susegad)

Edited by ChandlerBing - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Is not general incivility the very essence of love?
Thoughts to ponder upon.

His Highness is mellower. Noticing the eyes, the hair 😃 was taken aback by the screechšŸ˜†

She seems out of it.. Why? Was she not having juice?

A leisurely walk.. sounds like fun.

Thanks for updating😃


Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
YAY!! mera naam dkha😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Nisha😃
Read it late after I read the part so sowie for that.
We had those days.. when you were a Brat and I was on Cloud9... nights spent chatting over bowls of Maggie, wondering if it wasn't for that night, putting together the torn pages of a diary, pondering on the dichotomy of love...
To new beginnings...
clinking imaginary glasses..😃
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Awesome Nisha😃

Read it late after I read the part so sowie for that.
We had those days.. when you were a Brat and I was on Cloud9... nights spent chatting over bowls of Maggie, wondering if it wasn't for that night, putting together the torn pages of a diary, pondering on the dichotomy of love...
To new beginnings...
clinking imaginary glasses..😃


Aww Avi, that was awesome.😳

Bratty you really posted it.šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome one...nisha di's work grabbed lil more attention 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome but why such a small wala update.
Nexr time biiig wala update dena
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Passeggiata" I know exactly what this is. My brain often goes on one of these and refuses to come back, even when I beg, beseech and implore.šŸ˜†
Actually there is a Konkani word derived from Portuguese, that is quiet similar to this one.
It's called a Passeia.
And when a person is Susegad, he quiet often goes on a Passeia, and not necessarily out of the zone like Geet.šŸ˜†

So 'Passeggiata' is my new favorite word.😃

He is falling and falling fast...into her😳

Reminds me of the song, 'I'm fallin' for you.'

Well, at least it's the beginning of the falling😳


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X14zTFx7WRg[/YOUTUBE]

As for the title's story, I'm glad you liked it, but I wish I had remembered all the titles of all your stories to incorporate them. šŸ˜›



Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
a dreamy update ...
so much lyked it ...

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