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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

MAHN. 'AAYE HAAYE' UPDATE IT WAS.

Innocent, Romantic and sweet all in one.

it was awesome.

lovely update shika.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

MAAN IS MORE AWARE OF HER THAN SHE IS OF HIM

LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

I went from laughing like a loon, to feeling like a melted gooey chocolate as I read the whole update.

I see so many Bratty glimpses in this Geet, and that is why, it makes me adore her all the more😳

She is a very cheery drunk isn't she, and on top of that she is musically inclined.

I didn't know wheterh to laugh or go aww when she started tearing up. She is totally adorable.

Bholi si surat was perfect for her in that moment😳

Maan ko toh.

Thoda sa pyaar hua hain, toda hain baki.

His whole thought process, his actions, everything gave me butterflies in my tummy.😳

The last dance part was adorable. I had such a scene planned for BT in the future, but I think the way you have written it was just too beautiful and I could never surpass it.😛

Going to re-rad this again.

Bratty meri jaan, aaj toh tune humare dil ke taar ched diye.

This was the bestest best ever and I adored it.😳

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chingaming

@chingaming

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Wow :d what a lovely Ss :D

Xoxox!

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

fab hun.. hmmm geet torturing maan in her own sweet little way.. nice hes helping her.. cont soon hun

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

such a cute update!!!

loved it!!!!

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

superb update...loved da shoe scene...

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fantasy..4me

@fantasy..4me

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

I loveee u deee. Superb how romantic haaaye mujhe bhi Rome jana hai.

Geet playing antankshari with herself 😆 ... Humari Tallli jhallliii Geet.

Thank u for such an amazing update .👏⭐️

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

part 7
excellent...
awesome dear...
OMG Geet is damn funny here...
cant believe her antics...
and Maan hes honestly so amused and amazed to see this side of Geet...
hahaha...
the antakshari...
and her antics all are so cute...
cont soon dear...