MG SS: MENTAL LOVE updated part 16 on page 87 on 22.09.15 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Awesome update..

Loving it..
Please continue soon...
Thanx for pm dear...




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😃😛thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

part 2
phewww finally here i m di commenting after so long 😳
awesome update
geet to maan ka picha kar rahi hai 😆
ek baar maan ka sapna dekh k ye haal ho gaya geet 😉😆😆
oh no phir se geet k sapno me maan aaya
rahul ne geet ko jaga diya
geet in dics
pari wanted to make fun of geet 😡
maan aur geet mile dhakka khaya geet pe juice bhi gira
uff ye log normally nahi mil sakte kya!!!
nats😡 jaanbujh kar drink giraya geet pe
wait what pura maan geet ka milna dream tha kya geet ka 😕😕





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Thanks for liking n commenting for part 5

Edited by angelic_cute - 11 years ago
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Hello Friends

this is the 6th part of Mental love

Hoping you all will like it

thanks for the commenting n liking it

Please see the reply on page 28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37

Part 6 :

Pari invites her classmates and Maan few of his frnds, Yash invites few of his gfs...

Pari : hey guys enjoying the party ? w will be having few of the games and dances after words.. so keep urself charged whole night..

Pinky : vow yr Geet, maja ayega naa...

Maan : hey guys, u cn join the dance floor..

Maan was again seeing all and enjoying his drink and chatting with his frnds... he is not the full on party animal..

Maan notices Geet dancing with her frnds.. she was enjoying but he couldn't see one thing that her eyes were searching someone..

Geet (st) : yaar ye Maan kaha hai.. kabse dhundri hu but vo hai ki gaya hai.. honge kisi chudail ke sath.. chudail to aise chipakti hai naa ki aisa lagta hai mai unn sabke Baal kaat dalu.. control Geet control...

Yash : hey beautiful, may I danc with u?

Geet looked at him..

Geet : but I dnt kn u.. so I dnt think I ll dance with u...

Yash : I think ur pari's frnd rt ? I m yash khurana.. brother of pari..

Geet : ohhh hi yash..

Yash: so may I kn ur beautiful name ?

Geet : ummm Geet, geet handa...

Yash : so shall we proceed ?

Geet laughed and joined him for dance..

They were dancing casually n not so close but still Maan was noticing them..

Maan (st) : hey Maan, he is ur brother and she is just dat silly n mad girl.. no one imp.. cool and enjoy..

Frnd 1 : maan dat girl with ur bro is beautiful and dances very well..

Frnd 2 : ya evn I would love to dance with her.. let se if I hv any chance..

With the word chance, Maan got angry.. he dint show his expression but his blood was boiling...

Geet finally saw Maan standing at a corner.. her eyes glittered seeing him.. he was not with any girl..

Geet (st ) : kuch aisa karna padega jisse Mai aur Maan dance kar paye..

Ummm soch Geet soch.. tera tedha dimaag kab kaam ayega.. idea soch Geeto...

Nuts brought Maan to dance floor.. nw they both were dancing...

Geet made her way close to them.. now Geet and yash and Nuts and Maan were dancing back to back..

Yash excused himself and brought drnks for both of thm...

Geet got an idea...

Geet started dancing jerkily and dropped her drnk on nuts..

Geet : so sorry Nuts.. I dnt do it purposely ... really...

Nuts : Geet u r dead.. u hv dropped Drink on me twice.. nw God can also not save u.. jus beware...

Geet smiled and said " whatever "

Yash took the chance went with Nuts to help her clean her dress...

Maan : u seriously hv some prob with drinks rt ? last time in disc also u were wett. Nw this time u r making others wett..

Geet smiled at him and said : I m helpless Maan... I dnt do things purposely.. it jus happens ..

Then Nuts again joined them for dancing...

This time Geet hav to do something more good..

Geet with a jerk pushed Nuts this time.. nuts Got a puch and she falls.. this time Geet turned her position quickly and made yash stand there...

Nuts : yash.. I got a push from u..

Yash : I dint do it baby...

Nuts : I dnt mind even if u do it purposely...

Yash smiled naughtily coz he got the hint from her...

Yash : r u hurt baby ? may I help u?

Nuts : yeah... take me out from disc... baby..

Maan and Geet saw at her were feeling disgusted of her behavior..

Then suddenly a fire and excitement to dance with her hottie grows inside Geet.. she bends down on her knees and asks him for a dance...

Maan was with a shock expression as he hv never seen a girl on her knees...

" bolo naaa, itne bhi der nahi baith sakti, ghutne (knees) pain karre hai.."

" shit, get up Geet, ofcourse I would love to dance with you"

Geet jumps out of excitement and hugs him..

Her every curves touches him and she was totally glued to him..

An unknown feeling comes across both of them.. Maan was jus quiet wanted to Feel it for some more time but pari comes nd distract them...

Pari : waah Geet , ye hui na Baat.. kamal kiya tumne.. ghutno pe baithke dance ke liye pucha aur vo bhi bhai se.. THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA.. ye to mera dream tha, but its ok,, I got guts thru u.. chal enjoy

" party on my mind..."

For sometime Maneet dances and then all of them joins them...

..

It was high time to go for everybody.. but Geet dint want to leave the party.. ofcourse why will she,she got a chance to dance with her dream boy, hottie.. what not...

Everyone starts to leave...

Suddenly someone catches her hand.. she stops by.. his aroma was filled overall, she could easily guess, it was her Maan...

Maan:" mat jao naa Geet, I want to dance with u.. only with u.."

Geet:" even I dnt wana go Maan, but then u wil hv to drop me home"

Maan" m ready to do anything for my princess"

Geet:" so yes , I wana dance with u.. aur vo bhi close close wala"

He touches her waist and keeps her hand on his shoulder.. then he holds her close.. with a jerk she was glued to him..

Both shivers with each others touch..

Then he turns her round and takes her in his embrace.. now his chest was glued to her back and his hands were across her...

They were moving with the music and were lost in one another..

Maan touches her cheeks and then moves down to her ear.. he blows in her ear, make her feel out of the world..

She was shock to feel that, coz she always have crazy dreams of Maan and this is it..

Then she feels wet...

Precap : chudail se aamna saamna...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
pari invites her classmates...
maan is feeling jealous watching geet to dance with some one else...
maan's friends are talking about geet...
maan became angry ...
ye chipku nuts 😡
humesha maan se chipalti rehti hai
really geet dropped the drink on nuts!!!!
pyar logo se kya kya karwata hai 😆
again geet pushed nuts n changed her position with yash 😆
poor yash abhi usse nuts ki baate sunni padegi
nuts 🤢
geet bends on her knees n asked maan for dance 😲
sachi me geet pyar me kya kya kar rahi hai
maan kissed geet!!!!!!!!!
di next update ne shock doge kya ki ye sab ek dream tha
mujhe na yaha dream aur real samajh nahi aata itna blended hai ki main kho jati hu 😳
loved it very much di...
Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ye kya di double posting 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
Maan was feeling J seeing geet dancing with yash nd his friends commenting on geet but usse yeh sab abhi tak samjh nahi aaya pata nahi kab samjhega that he loves geet now
geet really u r so innocent u don't do anything intentionally iss liye ek nahi do do baar drink giraya woh bhi nuts pe hi
eww nuts is so cheap, ek ke saath toh reh hi nahi sakti hai dance floor maan ke saath aayi thi aur bahar gayi yash ke saath
haayee geet was bending on her knees nd she asked maan to dance with her
nd when she hugged him in excitement both felt current pass through them
hope last wala part firse geet ka dream na ho humesha jaise
waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsemmm update geet so cute maan not understanding his love for her
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hope maan bhi geet k peche pagal ho
Then kya ...
pura circus banjayaga!😆
Waiting for the next!

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