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Posted: 11 years ago
nice👏👏


hope maan reach on time😕


update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Girls r drolling over maan and geet feel jealouse now geet in trouble hope maan sahi time par pounch jaye waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
meri jaan di ur baby kalse pagalon ki tarah waiting for the update lekin di update nahi mili😭 di plzzz aajawo na ur baby dying for the update like hell😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb updates.. girl were drooling on maan and geet didnt like it and tern=minated one girl ... oh god geet is in danger and cant contact maan ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Girls flirting with Maan. Geet super duper angry. N one girl acting to be ill. Bechara Maan toh gaya.

Usko double mehnat karne padegi to manofy Geet. Girl is thrown out.

Geet opposing to the custom of village. How can the females do that to another girl. Geet now target of them.
Maan searching. He has to rescue her n make them understand.

Continue soon.
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Originally posted by: lovesia

wow didu one more update

jaldi do me waiting
didu mujhe kasoor ka bhi update chahiye
its 11 month since the time u updated last😭😭



wil update for sure i am on a spree to finish mitwa and bekasi dont worry dedongi ro mat😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
kidhar ho meri jaan di ur baby is getting scared di 😭😭😭 di pichle two days se waiting for u aur di jab aap aise gayab hote ho tau mujhe buhut dar lagta hai di plzzz jaldi se aajawo na ur baby is waiting for u dyingly😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



wil update for sure i am on a spree to finish mitwa and bekasi dont worry dedongi ro mat😆


rona padta hai aapna ab mere didu nahi rahe now u r ghost didu kab aate ho kab jaate ho aap hi jaano😡
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Originally posted by: lovesia


rona padta hai aapna ab mere didu nahi rahe now u r ghost didu kab aate ho kab jaate ho aap hi jaano😡



yaar yehi rehti hoon kam rehti hoon baba gussa mat kar mereko darr laging 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 9:


He decided to check the way towards home, probably that was the only thing he could do now. He began to walk looking her route ... after fifteen minutes he stood in front of a temple with mob of ladies ... he huffed standing there, and then found something under his foot. He looked down, that was his wifey's nuptial chain ... How come it was lying there??



He picked it up and ran upstairs towards the ladies ... Didn't know why it was his gut feeling that Geet was being surrounded. He was the only man present there ... A girl was sitting on the floor crying, and he had to push a huge crowd so that he could reach to see who was there.



Kya hua?? why are you crying sitting here?? He seemed to be restless, not understanding what to do among so many women and probably answering his questions the girl directly spoke ... Woh these women are taking revenge on me, hamare yaha jo koi bhi ladki pyar karne ki galti karti hai usse aise sazaa milti hai and I am unable to do anything, woh ladki ko ... yeh log, she began to cry with hiccups fumbling with words trying to speak out her agony.



Kaun ladki? Maan felt like the earth shaking around, what if it was his wife who was trapped for helping??



Both of them heard a woman shouting for help on top of voice, and then she began to walk forward holding her through her throat with a knife in hand. The girl who was standing beside Maan was shocked ... more than her Maan was shocked. His wifey was so strong, by then he understood the situation. Those women messed up with his sherni, he smiled looking at her as she walked further.



Geet handed the knife to the girl and pushed the lady on her ... yeh lo, do whatever you want to with her ... sabko pata bhi toh chale ki har ladki itni bhi kamzor nahi hai jitna yeh samajhti hai.



The girl smirked looking at the woman, she truly felt like stabbing her for killing girls on the name of honor. But then stopped ... she pushed her, the woman had anger in her eyes ... like a loser.



By then the police arrived and the case got registered, she thanked Geet ... Aapke bina main lad nahi paati inn sabse, meri galti yehi thi ki maine pyar kiya ... jisse pyar kiya inn logone usse maar diya aur ab mere saath wahi karne jaa rahe the ... ill fight in the court too, inn sabko sazaa milni hai for their honor killings.



Maan's respect on his wife has raised to the peaks, she was not just a beauty but beauty with brains. She knew how to stand up for herself not just self but for the people around. He proudly covered Geet with his shirt making the women to gape at him. Maan was so lost in his wife that he failed noticing them but Geet was. She pulled it out and gave it back to him spitting fire ... main nahi pungi nahi hoon, toh aap hi pehenlo yeh



She was an enigma ... he had to learn of his wifey. He always believed he knew her very well but this was something beyond his mind ... She not that simple to understand.



Lifting the stand she sat on the scooty ready to go back home, Maan became a little conscious with her appearance and her zid to drive ... she was dipped in that haldi, milk whatever and she was least bothered.



Maan was lost in Geet while she was lost in the moment when she saw him in vest in front of the women who were drooling on him. She turned to look at him ... kya aapko yehi rehne ka iraada hai?? Shirt pehenlo aur peeche baitho ... She ordered



He didn't get her anger ... why was she angry, all that he could do was to sit behind her holding her through waist as she started the vehicle. She raised the accelerator and he almost fell on Geet making her gasp.



Aap par lag jayegi sab kuch Maan, cant you sit properly?? Ya aap chance maar rahe hai??



He buried his face in the crook of her neck and replied ... Maine bhi iss liye shirt diya tha tumhe ki tumpar lagi ... aur



Aur kya?? She asked cutting him off ... Aapne shirt iss liye diya taaki sab log aapko dekhe ... nange punge,






He didn't know why he didn't like her thinking so wrong and mean about him. He was trying to sort out things here and she was messing them even more. He wouldn't have felt bad if she said something else apart from him showing interest in ladies. Even in the morning she had the same problem with him.



He withdrew his hands automatically from her and straightened himself which Geet failed to notice. The thing that began to hammer him was her illusions about him ... does she takes me to be a pervert?? Or is she taking me for granted just because I am following her?? He got down in a dazed state ... Will her thinking about him will ever go straight he wondered. His ego was hurt, he changed so much for her ... and here she was only misunderstanding him.



She freshened up and came back to see Maan busy with his phone, a difference in his behavior ... what is it?? She changed into the nighty and waited for him. Geet went into the kitchen to prepare something, and by the time she came back Maan slipped into sleep. Her senses were saying ... something was definitely wrong.



She couldn't have alone so decided to wake Maan and when she tapped him ... he snapped away, she blinked her eyes ... for the very first time her husband was behaving this way. But still she gathered herself and said ... Maan I prepared the dinner, thoda sa kha lijiye aur so jayiye



I am not hungry Geet ... let me sleep I am tired, he replied showing his back to her. Geet's heart went heavy for the way Maan was struggling to sleep on the floor. She binned the food and slipped next to him ... her mind wondering what went wrong!! So wrong!!



The next morning she left for office finding Maan still sleeping, it was odd ... He doesn't sleep for so long and here he was all awake, not bothered to glance at her.



If it were in their own house Maan would have definitely gone so wild for mistaking his intentions. He cant even go home leaving his wife alone, Maan sighed controlling his anger.



Precap: Ab manane ki baari biwi ki hai!! yaar dono kab sudrenge!!


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago

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