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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Amazing update👏👏 Someone trying to attack when Maan doing his practice...Geet killed that person and saved Maan...Maan question her...Geet give Maan one chance to win her heart...Will he solve the riddles???loved it so much😳 waiting eagerly for the next update Thanks for the PM dear😳

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Auchi

@Auchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Thanks for the PM & Nice update.

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sanam1234u

@sanam1234u

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

amazing update ...i realy realy realy like this story sooo sooo sooo much...

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

after so many days u update this story

awsum yaar

me thinking dodno ek num k ziddi hai koi apni zid nahi chorey ga

ek sher toh dosri sherni

waiting for next

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

awesome update
loved geetanjali's challenge to maanveer
looking forward to read more

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

24

uff i hav lost the track of it..
need ti read again..

geet saved maan..
she had to...hes her husband
not only her suhaag bt tht of other queens in out there in his kingdom..

and maans perception abt women changed...
well it had to
as it was really wrong...
now the challene thing is intresting..
lets see wht maan does..

ps : i knw the ans to ur paheli 😛
i cracked it 😉

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

hi Mitu

one more story of urs ..daring story i read ..

i enjoyed reading it ..

its different story ..kingship times ..

king maanveer and his rani gitanjali ..

i love the charactersketch of the story ..specially geet one ..

she is just 17 but so brave ..

ready to do all things for her loved ones ..she sacrifice herself for her family ..she doesn't like maan much but still care of him thus saving him ..

i am very much waiting to know how maan veer going to win his rani geetanjali ..

waiting for next update soon ..

p.s...i read this story in one go and tried to put like on every part ..still IF didn't allow me to put like on 3 parts irrespective of my trying so hard ..so plz i will try to like those three chapters later on..

second .i noticed with every update ..ur update was getting short in length ..plz don't do this..

third ..mitu plz don't care for likes too much ..post the parts for ur writer's satisfaction and for ur readers who put comment and like on ur stories...we all love u..and wait for ur awesome updates ...

thank u for lovely story

waiting for next

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: mirror1521
24

uff i hav lost the track of it..
need ti read again..

geet saved maan..
she had to...hes her husband
not only her suhaag bt tht of other queens in out there in his kingdom..

and maans perception abt women changed...
well it had to
as it was really wrong...
now the challene thing is intresting..
lets see wht maan does..

ps : i knw the ans to ur paheli 😛
i cracked it 😉

i too want to know the answer ...can u tell me

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#600

who attacked Maanveer...u just ended the conversation midway...

Geetanjali saved him from attacker...

Maanveer is attracted very badly towards Geetanjali that is why he is trying to come close to her on pretext of challenge...Geetanjali on other hand is very angry with him...first because of his blackmailing and ego and second because of his punishment to her for disobeying him...

she gave him riddle to solve...Maan will be able to solve that or not...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...