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Originally posted by: _GoldenStarz_

Updating today, anyone waiting??

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Part 11


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@Zaara2212: Sorry for the mistake and thank you for letting me know dear😃


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@All: Thank you for supporting me and enjoy the present i will soon reveal the past.



"I want ice cream" asked geet. "No way geet, its so cold here" told maan. "Please maan" requested geet. "Geet, you will sneeze the whole night and you will get fever too. So no I don't want to take any risk" told maan. "You know maan in these 10 years no one asked me not to eat ice cream and I always use to think if you are with me then you never allow me to eat" told geet. Maan looked at her and sighed. While dev too became sad. It's not the time to be sad and think about past thought dev and smiled at geet who is looking outside sadly. Maan too didn't talk anything. "Bro, I want to ask you something" told dev. "Yes dev" "Bro, how many years is geet elder to me?" asked dev. "What, just 10 days" answered maan confusing. "Just 10 days na, iss ladki ne college mei mera image damage kiya. And she tells me that I should call her di. I should take her aashirvaad on my birthday. Oh god, just image bro me and taking aashirvaad, chiii" told dev and made a yucky face. "Sharam aani chahiye dev tumk sharam, chi chi chi babaji kya zamana aagaya. Tumko pata bhi hai maan, yeh tera bhai jaisa dikhta hai waisa nahi hai. Yeh sab tumare liye drama kar raha hai. jab bhi koi assignment hota hai na wo mere paas aata hai and he calls me "GEET DIDI, PLEASE HELP ME IN THIS ASSIGNMENT" and assignment ke baad wo mujhe itna satata hai ki pooch mat. Isko full marks aate the wo bhi mere wajah se aur yeh janaab ek thanks tak nahi bolta. Tumko pata hai maan, ek baar iss kutte ne mujhse jagda kiya, uss waqt exams the aur yeh mere help ke bina padhai ki the and as a result he failed in a subject. And he blamed me for that; I didn't helped him that's why he failed in the exam. Waise yeh sach hi tho kaha tha mere help ke bina yeh pass tak nahi hota and chote bachon ki tarah rona pada. And from that time he never fought with me as he was scared of failing" completed geet with a smirk on her face.

"Don't lie geet, you just helped me once" retorted back dev. "Will you both shut your mouth for some time and please let me concentrate on the road" shouted maan. Geet glared at dev and sat silently. But is that possible for geet to stay quiet for long, she started her bak-bak with both maan and dev simultaneously while they both rolled their eyes listening to her talk. Soon they reached National Park, they roamed every inch of the park, clicking pics in group, few in single and few maneet. They grabbed food when they are tired. By the evening there is no energy left in them. Dev and Geet collapsed in the car while maan drove back to home. "Maan, I am tired and I am hungry too" told geet rubbing her stomach. "Same here bro" told dev. "Ok, we will go home and have something. Rest for sometime then we will go out for dinner" told maan. "Good idea maan" told geet and rested her head on his shoulder. By the time they reached home geet is sleeping. Maan smiled at her and without disturbing her, he got down of the car and took geet in his arms from her side and went in. Dev smiled looking at both of them "Made for each other" thought dev and he too went to his room and hit the bed within minutes he is fast asleep.

Maan placed geet on the bed and tucked her with duvet. He kissed her forehead and stared at her angelic face for some time. A small smile which is playing on her sleep even when she is sleeping, the hair which has fallen on her cheek. He caressed her cheek and tucked those tendrils. Maan smiled and got up but couldn't move forward as geet is holding his collar in her fist just like a small baby. Maan again sat on the bed bending towards her. "Ab tumko darrne ki koi zaroot nahi geet, mai tumko chodke kabhi kahi nahi jaunga (No need to worry geet, I will never leave you)" whispered maan. He released his collar from her fist and left from there. When maan closed the door geet opened her eyes and got up. "I know maan, whatever happens this time you are not going to leave us. But there is something which I have to find out" thought geet.

In National Part few hours back

Geet, maan and dev are tired of roaming the whole day, they sat on the grass in the park. Maan and dev lied down on the grass, while geet is seeing the pics which they clicked. In one of the she clicked she found someone and zoomed the photo. Due to the small screen she couldn't see the pic clearly. She took out the memory card and copied those photos into her tab using card reader. When she zoomed that photo she found sameera and a man with her. "I saw him somewhere before but where?" thought geet. She is thinking and that time dev told "We should go now" Maan agreed and they both collapsed in the car.

Present

Geet is pacing in her room; she is not able to remember where she saw that man. She saw him in India. "Why do I have a feeling that something is going wrong? I never had a good impression on that sameera but she is maan's friend and as far I know him he never allows anyone so easily and he sent that sameera for my security. That means sameera knows about our past? And maan told her or someone who knows about our past. Who knows except arjun" thought geet, she sat on the bed not understanding anything. "Whom should I ask about this? Maan or arjun? No I should not ask maan, he is already suffered a lot. I will find out myself" thought geet. She rested for some time and came down getting ready. She found no one in the hall, she went towards maan's room and opened the door. She found him shouting on someone on phone. Geet rolled her eyes and silently sat on the couch. "You guys are totally useless, by tomorrow I want the work to be finished otherwise you can search for some other job" shouted maan and cut the call. He turned back and found geet on the couch. "Maan, kitna chillate ho tum. Calm down and work will be completed don't worry about that" told geet. "Geet when it comes to office work no compromise and yeah it applies to you too. You will be working in our company" "Oh hello, I am not a kamchor like you. I will do my work with dedication" told geet raising her invisible collar. "Let's see" retorted maan.

Trio got ready and they went to a restaurant for dinner. They ordered their food and is talking with each other. Seeing the great MSK in the restaurant everyone came to him asking for photographs and autographs. Girls are drolling over him while geet burned seeing them so close to her maan. Maan's bodyguards cleared everyone and didn't allow anyone near them. "Wah ky fan following him, tu ek business man hai but not any superstar that they came for photographs" chided geet. "Bro someone is burning with jealousy" teased dev. Geet glared at him while maan gave a teasing smile to her. Geet downcasted her eye lashes not able to bear his teasing smirk. Their food have arrived maan and dev fed their first spoon to geet and vice versa. It's their habbit when ever trio dines together. Geet too fed to maan and dev and continued with their dinner. When they completed the food, server served dessert to trio. Geet smiled widely seeing the ice cream in front of her that too her favorite. "Ummm yummy" eat enjoyed her every spoon and at last she thanked maan for the ice cream. Trio waited for their car to arrive, geet is looking here and there and saw the same person whom she saw in the park with sam. But this time sam is not there with him. Suddenly geet held maan's hand tight, maan looked at her and asked "Kya hua geet" "Kuch nahi maan, bas bohot tand hai" told geet and tried to smile at him.

They reached home and geet couldn't sleep the whole night, she is pacing in her room. "I think I am thinking too much, might be its just a co-incidence" thought geet and tried to forget that man, but she couldn't and she is not feeling good whenever she sees him.


Here is the next part of Tera Saaya, waiting for your response.


Love

Chinni

Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow me first
awesome update
loved geet and dev's fight
geet is a chatterbox 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me 2nd
awesome update
loved geet and dev's fight
LOL geet jealous of maanu's fans😆
Waiting 4 next
update soon

Edited by KINGKHANFAN - 11 years ago

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