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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

This update made me homesick😃 I guess you can take the girl out of Mumbai but not chowpatty beach out of her😆

Armaan fades out and Maan enters.

In a city of strangers she has found a friend.

Her character is being shaped very nicely. I like how you write your Geet's; there are core values in them.

Excited to read more.

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Happy woman Day to u aditi . And lovely update . Again samna with past and present . And great MSk in chowpati for pav bhaji . Miss mumbai aditi . 😔

Kuch Yadein Hai Un Lamho Ki,

Jin Lamho Me Hum Sath Rahe,

Phir Luft Wo Manjar Hota Tha,

hum tum milkar Kar Batein Karte ,

aaj yeh panna suna hai ,

yaadein hai,par tum na ho

par tumhari naam ki parchai hai ,

kismat ka khel dekho jo naam

dard deta hai shyad yeh jeevan ki roshni ban jayegi.

random words . loved the update .

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

WOW!! so they again meet...lovely update...geet missing armaan & her dream signifies that its time to move on...hope geet finds a good friend in maan...😊

excited to read about MSK's pao bhaaji experience...😃

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

nice update

jhalli geet

waiting for next

so update soon

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

superb
finally the stranger is revealed////////
waiting for geet's pav bhaji treat to maan😆
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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

abb toh nehi bataya maan magar jab usse pata chalega tab kya hoga...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

👏 you are back! I missed this story. I know you are busy but I really wanted to know what would happen to Geet.

I was not disappointed! another fantastic chapter.

Armaan saying goodbye at this point did surprise me. I thought he might say good bye a little later - after Maan was more 'in' Geet's life.

And then having Geet meet her stranger at the place she was supposed to share with Armaan was bitter sweet. Maybe it was destiny after all.

Maan surprised me. I was not expecting him to willingly spend more time with Geet. i thought he would ask some questions and then leave. So Maan is curious about Geet.

I liked how Geet was so honest with Maan that his name reminded her of someone and that was why she felt pain and then she said one day she will share it with him. It's like they both know that this is not just a casual meeting ...

Looking forward to your next update!!!