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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 ma'am 10 baje aayengi..




cindy ki tarah time fix karke rakhi hai kya😆😆

waise cindy ka kuch patha chala
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 ma'am 10 baje aayengi..

saara gang aajkal poora nehi hota,,,,pta nehii kyon,,,??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

aaj abhi tak lakshu ka darshan nahi huwa


di aap sab to midnight party wale ho abhi to sirf sham hui hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 hi Dona dear...


hi babie di 🤗⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

saara gang aajkal poora nehi hota,,,,pta nehii kyon,,,??


😛 Hi lily..
tum hi bhaga deti ho mujhe update dene..😆
mai to gapiyane ko ready hun..😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


di aap sab to midnight party wale ho abhi to sirf sham hui hai😆


😆😆 hum Raat ke Prani ( ullu) hei..
jab sabke jagne ka time hota hei hum sote hei...😆
GM ki jagah GN boltey hei..😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😛 Hi lily..
tum hi bhaga deti ho mujhe update dene..😆
mai to gapiyane ko ready hun..😉



aaj kal sab nahi milparahe hai ek saath
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.













Part -- 83



Mahi: cheating !!!! Who is cheating u ?

Maan: Brij , he is playing smart and deliberately making wrong bills of cash.


Mahi: wrong bills?


Maan: ji , d fair bills r correct but d cash bills r totally wrong from last 6-7 months.


Mahi: why didn't u tell me before ?


YSK: we find out now , Dev just check them casually and we didn't know that now Brij is handling d Co.


Mahi: but Dev had to check d bills , any way what do u want now ?


Geet: nothing ,,, there is only one month left for this contract and we won't give any money to that Co.


Mahi knew her temper so he requested to Maan.


Mahi: Maan , according to my advice pay him d fair bill's amount not d cash portion and if u have any lose after that i'll pay u back * i don't want any prob for KC , he could send u a legal notice for stopping d fair bills.


Geet got angry on this , again he is favouring that family .


Geet: KC ko aapki charity ki jaroorat nahi hei , jinhe hei unhe do jaker * Aur kaun legal notice bhejega hume ? 1st We have our contact with u not with him , 2nd why didn't u inform us before that u r selling ur Co , and 3rd who has d legal signing authority of that Co.


Mahi: Guddu i didn't sale , it was mutual and i didn't have d idea that he would do this , after completing this contact i wanted to inform KC and it was up to KC to carry on with this Co or not. I'm giving back for KC's lose not for any charity and stopping d bills is not good for Co's reputation * it was Dev's mistake also that he didn't check d bills carefully from many months and paid him *** pahale hi check ker leta to ye lose nahi hota.


YSK and Maan accepted Dev's mistakes and find it right to settle d issue amicably . YSK,Maan and Mahi discussed and did some calculations * after stopping d current cash payment of this recent heavy order they r recovering their all lose of last months. Maan and YSK agreed for payment and informed Mahi that they won't have any dealing with this Co in future . Mahi accepted this and thanked them .


Geet didn't like this and annoyingly excused herself and walk out from there in anger.


In this matter all have their own prospective ... Maan and YSK thought in business point of view * they knew that it was Dev's carelessness that they were in lose and now they r recovering so why this fuss * more importantly they didn't want to hurt Mahi because they knew that Mahi always think for their wellbeing .



Maan has his own views * he didn't want any rift between Geet and Mahi after knowing d realities from Rano * he wanted to reduce d gap between Geet and her Dad so he supported Mahi's advice though he knew that Geet is right at her place and Brij deserved punishment for hurting and insulting her but he was suppressing his anger for Mahi and Geet * he could teach a good lesson to Brij but somewhere it would affect Mahi * it was oblivious that Mahi never turn his face from his responsibilities.


Dadima was quiet on this , for her it was YSK and Maan's decision to deal with this issue * she too didn't want to hurt Mahi .


But for Geet it was a defeat * she thought that her father was again protecting that Brij and his Maa leaving her on margin * again he is bending in front of them and bearing all lose avoiding their wrong deeds and cheatings * for her Mahi was at fault not to inform them about handing over d Co to Brij * Geet joined all these things to her past * she felt hurt and dejected again * Brij was a cheater and Mahi is covering him because they r his bro's family .


Mahi went from there after discussing and settling everything with YSK and Maan * Geet didn't come down after that . Maan came in his room but didn't find Geet there * he knew that she is upset and against this settlement , though he too was angry on Brij and on his rude behaviour with Geet but that was a different matter not related to KC's business * after searching her many places he find her in Patio immersed in her thoughts * He came close to her and coughed to gain her attention but she didn't react .


Maan: Geet kya soch rahi ho aur yahan akele ku ho?


Geet : akeli hu to akeli hi rahungi na ? She replied coldly.


Maan: Geet, essa ku kaha rahi ho ? * mujhe pata hei tumhe bura laga hei lekin business mei ye sab hota hei aur yahan to humari galti hei to kuch to hume bhi compromise kerna hoga na ?


Geet: I know , ye aapka business hei aur aap jo chahe decision le saktey ho , mujhe ess sab se koi lena-dena nahi hei .


Maan: Geet , i know u r not happy with this lekin please samjho, Mahi uncle bhi galat nahi hei , aage hum unse koi deal nahi rakhenge.


Geet: It's OK Maan , aap sab ko jo theek lage wo karo .


Her coldness pricked him * he knew she is hurt and angry with Mahi's decision .


Maan: Geet, Mahi uncle ki majboori bhi samjho , please ,,, wo bhi khush nahi hei iss sab se , Geet majboori insaan se kya-kya compromises karati hei ye hum dono bhi jante hei * ek baar unki jagah per khudh ko rakh ker socho shayad tum jaan pao ki unhone kya khuch khoya hei life mei aur kaise jee rahe hei ?


Geet looked at him confused ,he nodded in reply and he took her in her embrace * disturbed with all happening she find solace in his arms .


Maan: Geet , kisi ki bhi wajha se hum jo khushiyan kho chuke hei wo wapas nahi mil sakti , lekin aage jo mil sakti hei unhe ku khona , please bhool jao jo hua , jo log humare liye koi value nahi rakhte unko ku importance deti ho? Don't affect ur precious life for crap people Geet . Forget everything and just remember one thing Geet .. U r Maan Singh Khurana's wife and this relation is above all relations.


Geet: Maan kuch baaten sukh aur dukh se nahi humari self respect se judi hoti hei * What 'll u do if someone raise finger on ur existence ? Why Dad is protecting that cheater?


Maan understood where she was talking * she was hurt by Brij's nonsense blabbering * Geet didn't know that Maan heard her and Brij's hot talk.


He scooped her and brought her in d room , placing her on d bed he settled closed to her having her in his arms * cupping her face with his palm he made her look at him.


Maan: Geet ur Dad is a very sensible person and he never do anything wrong for u or for others * Geet there r many surrogate child in d world nothing is wrong if u r one of them * ur dad lost all his happiness then what's wrong if he tried to gain some in form of u ?


Geet looked at him awed and he nodded at her in reply with a blink to show her that he knew about her * her eyes turned teary and two trails tip down on her cheeks .


Maan: sshhh,,, no Geet , he bent and kissed on her eyes turn by turn * he tugged her tightly to him * don't feel low for u Geet ,,, never * u r an angle for ur Dad and for me too who brought light and happiness in our devastated life * i know something wr painful for u in past but Geet nobody is perfect and got everything in life ,, see Dadima , Dad , and ur Dad , all had lost something precious. Geet try to look around u and u'll found ur family near u ,, ur own family who loves u a lot .


She spoke in a cracky voice: it pricks Maan , it hurts .


I know jaan , i know but please for u , for all , forget everything , they r nothing for us * he cuddled up her to him and she was pouring out her pain wetting his shirt.


Precap...Maaneet's visit to Mahi ...


Part - 84

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

aaj main first aagayi hoon😆😆

geet again felt bad when mahi supported brij she stil thinks that he is giving importance to them

problem tho solve hogayi hai.

maan easily understood geet's feelings and came to console her and he even succeded in doing

just loved it when he is said ur.maan singh khuraana's wife and this relation is above all relations👏👏👏
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago

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