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babie pehle updtt karo,,,😊
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

babie pehle updtt karo,,,😊


Lalchi lily...😭 baat kerna nahi chahati.
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 82



Geet gave Brij a very cold look and gestured him to take seat * he sat there giving her an angry glare. Maan was watching all this from his room.

Brij: what r u doing here ? Where is dev ? i came here to meet Dev.


Geet: come to d point mr, why r u here ?


Brij : where is Dev ? i have my meeting with him .


Geet: Dev is not here.


Brij: than who'll clear my bills?


Geet: jab meeting mere sath hei to mei karoongi .


Brij: tum karogi , Maan ne tumhe kab se itni importance deni shuru ker di?


Geet: u r not here to discuss Maan Singh Khurana's personal life, and don't forget that u r in his premises so take his name with regard.


He fumed over her reply.


Brij: mujhe apne last bills ka payment chahiye aur naye ye rahe. Khuranas ne tumhe kabse itni responsibility de di ki tum unke a/c dekho.


Geet: mind ur own business . (She checked his latest bill and find d same mistakes , giving a smirk she blast d bomb ) in bills ka payment nahi hoga mr Brij .


Brij: matlab ?


Geet: hindi samajh nahi aati kya ? in bills ka payment nahi hoga , simple.


He lost his temper , 1st he was annoyed to see her here and now her refusal on bills .


Brij: tum kaun hoti ho ye kahane wali ?


Geet: tum kaun hote ho ye puchne wale?


Brij : ye meri Co ke bills hei aur mujhe payment chahiye .


Geet: Na ye co tumhari hei aur na ye contract tumhare sath hei , jiska hei usse bhejo .


Brij: Ye meri co hei last 8 months se mei Khuranas se deal ker raha hu , Dev ne kabhi koi objection nahi kiya to tum kaun hoti ho ?


Geet: 1st Dev nahi Dev Singh Khurana kaho , 2nd mei Khurana khandan ki badi bahu hoti hu aur tum jaise tucche insaan ki aukaat nahi ki mujhse sawal kare, tumhare kisi bhi bill ka payment nahi hoga , now get out from here.


Brij lost all his wit and started in his venomous language.


Brij: tu mujhe aukaat batayegi , khud ek illicit relation ki gandgi ho aur mujh per ungli utha rahi hei * jis jagah per aaj tu khadi hoker bol rahi ho wo bhi teri nahi thi , agar wo bevakoof Sam na bhagti to aaj wo yahan hoti aur Khuranas ki half property humare haath mei hoti * lekin wo badtameez mera sara plan fail ker gai * aur tu kya hei ? tu na pahale mera kuch ker saki na ab ker sakti hei * pahale bhi tujhe hi ghar chodna pada tha aur ab bhi tu hi haregi * apna paisa to mei nikalwa hi lunga .


Geet was boiling in anger even Maan was fuming in his office listening and watching all this .


Geet : mei kya hu ye tujhe batane ki jaroorat nahi , teri maa aur bahan paise ke liye kya ker sakti hei tujhe bhi pata hei * ye paisa aur Co tujhe meri wajha se mila hei * teri Maa ne bahot badi kimat wasool ki hei mere badle mei * aaj jis ghar mei rahata hei aur jis Co ka bill leker khada hei na wo mere Dad ki hei ,,, tere ki nahi . Rahi baat apna paisa nikalwane ki to tera Baap bhi upper se aa jayega na to bhi nahi milega * ye sare bill galat hei , aur ab kisi bhi bill ka paisa nahi milega .


Brij became alert on mentioning wrong bills and tried to change statement.


Brij: manual bills mei galti ho sakti hei , ye Dev aur KC ki galti hei unhone bills check ku nahi kiye?


Geet: O realy ,, every month bill mei galti ho jati thi , quotation bhi wrong ho jati thi even aaj ke bill mei bhi galti ho gai ,,, very funny ,, ja ye drame apni Maa ko dikha mujhe nehi , koi payment nahi hoga , niklo yahan se aur jiske sath KC ka contact hei usse bhejo * humare paas koi written info nahi hei ki ye Co tumhari hei , to tumhe koi paisa nahi milega ,,, out.


Brij: mei bhi dekhta hu ki mera payment kaise nahi milta , tujhe to mei dekh lunga.


Geet: dhoka dena aur loot ker khana yahi aata hei tujhe aur teri maa-bahan ko , lekin Geet tujh jaiso ke samne na jhuki thi aur na jhukegi * ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna , kahin essa na ho jo hath mei hei wo bhi chala jaye.


He walk-out from there fuming in anger and called her mother at once informing her that Geet is stopping his payment and insulted him * he forced his maa to contact Mahinder for this coz he had sighed d contact with KC.


Promila rang Mahi and accused that Geet is stopping their Co's bills and insulted Brij in KC office .


Mahi was shocked with this because Geet never think and talk about Brij and that family then why she was stopping d payment even she never asked about Co and other things and what was she doing in KC ? He decided to talk her at KM in d eve with YSK and Maan because it's Maan who signed d bills. Mahi became tense with this new arose prob* he knew Guddu's anger and hatred towards that family * years back she refused to come in that house because of Brij's venomous words on her existence.


He left home and Co after Brij marriage in their favour coz Promila demanded this saying that after this he was free from his responsibility and they too didn't want his interference in their life. He too was living a disturbed life after Guddu's sudden marriage with Maan in that awful situation . He knew his daughter is not happy in her life because of this family * He wanted to get rid of this burden at any cost after Brij's shaadi and all his responsibilities for his bro family were over .


Maan was sulking in his cabin he wanted to punch Brij right there for talking to Geet like that but he stopped himself because there were some personal issues of Geet and Brij and he wanted that Geet herself showed her power and rights. He came in conference hall to meet Geet knowing that she is very disturbed and find her at d edge of crying * she was trying hard to control her anger and tears clinching her fists * she was chewing her trembling lips and sniffing * he quietly came close to her and hugged her tight in his protective arm cage * her whole body was shivering with rage * she held his vest coat tightly placing her head on his chest. Maan didn't say a word and caressed her back to console her * they remained like this for long.


At eve all r back and Maan informed YSK about Brij's visit in KC and showed him d wrong bills * when they were discussing all this YSK got Mahi's call and talked to him * Mahi requested him to give some time for a meeting at KM. YSK agreed at once knowing d reason behind this.


YSK: Maan, Guddu ,, Mahi is coming to meet us in few min.


Guddu: aane do .


Now Maan became tense * he knew that Geet accused Mahi for all this and again their relations could turn sour * he was feeling very helpless in this complicated situation.


Mahi came after half an hour and wished Dadima and YSK * Geet wished him coldly * Maan and Mahi sensed her anger in her coldness.


After some random chat and tea-coffee YSK asked Mahi .


YSK: Mahi why do u want to meet me in urgent ?


Mahi: Yash i told u that i left my Co for Brij and today he informed me KC is stopping his bills and said that KC would give d payment to d person who had signed d contact * bills r made on Co name not on my so any one could collect them . Mannual bills have cash payments as u know so what's d hitch now?


YSK: Mahi , as u know Dev looked all these records and Maan signed d bills * i never have any prob before and never complaint u * u left that Co months back but informed me only few days back , no prob that was ur personal issue , but now that Co is cheating us and who would tolerate this?


Precap"Guddu is angry with Mahi ...Maan defend Mahi...


Part -83

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛gud guddu kya thok ke jwab diye hei brij ko,,,
darpok fir gaya maa se shikayt karne...
super babie,,,,,👏


Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Lalchi lily...😭 baat kerna nahi chahati.


lily Geet ex-handa v/s Brij handa ki face to face fight dekhna chahti hai,...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
kyaa mai 2nd/..
mai lakshmi ki thread pr bhi 2nd hu.. n asusaull lily 1st

so again fabbb update.. dil khush karditta..😊

so next is again fight.. hmmm... lets hope that brij can have the test of his own medicine.. ofcourse by guddu😆😆
Edited by mauaa - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


Lalchi lily...😭 baat kerna nahi chahati.

net chala gaya to brij ki dhulai pade bina neend kaise aayegiii,,,,😛😆
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aaj mein dono jagah ist nd matri 2nd,,,,,
thoko taaliii,,,,

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Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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lils ... mauaa... main aa gayi

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