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Gmsk.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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VENGEANCE

PART 6
past is in red

that night was tough for geet as she was fighting for her baby more than herself ... There was a time when she was so much wanted to have a family with a husband who will love her till eternity ,and babies yes she does wanted to have cute babies she did discusssed it often with her sister shagun but this wasnt the thing she expected...
She did related the circumstances when she met maan first when he confessed and she just melted in his passion and love but where was that love now..
Where did she went wrong..
Was loving him was a mistake or making herself believe that he was the only one she will want in her life..
She hadnt touched the food and this angered maan..
Next morning at five in the morning maan just went to her room and saw her sleeping in sitting position that was not at all comfortable and recommended for the baby..
He went towards her she was herself looking like an innocent baby he carefully scooped her in his arms and made her sleep on the bed...
Geet wriggled a bit in his embrace but later comfortably snuggled in his embrace...
Maan slowly let her hands go as she was holding him tightly...
Geet mummbled in her sleep...
Geet : sone do na...
He just get tickled for a second listening to that silky soft voice and immediately get his composure back in a second...
Maan : jo tumne kiya hai geet i will never forget that.. You made a mockery of maan singh khurana's love and i will never let you forget that day...
Itni masoom nai ho jitni dikhti ho tum...

it was a vibrant morning and maan had to reach KC to attend an important meeting and he was already getting late when someone came infront of his car.. He imediately halted the car.. He came out and looked forthe person and there was a girl clad in white salwar suit her hair were on her face aand immediately composed herself and looked at the person infront of him.. It was a handsome face that she came across and she looked at him with a worried face..
Girl : i am so sorry it was my fault..
She said sweetly and picked up her fallen bag and settled her fallen duppatta over her shoulder... She just lookedat him and apologised again...
His eyes mellow down the anger that was in them seeing her..
The girl was indeed beautiful and she was looking pretty in that white outfit.. Unconsciously he checked her out..
Maan : be careful next time.. I may hurt you..
She had slightly brown eyes the more like cat type eyes.. He looked at her once and left the place..

That was the first meeting they had.. Maan didnt knew that the first meeting will turn his life upside down and make them fall in the hands of the love that gripped his heart and she mocked the same feelings...


geet woke up and saw the different dresses that were arranged in the room.. The food was placed there which had turned cold..
She felt bad seeing maan looking at the window outside and standing in the same room..
He just sensed her and asked in a rude tone..
Maan : get ready , your breakfast is just arriving and make sure you eat well..
Geet was scared for a second and nodded in a yes.. Maan just wanted to hug her love her she wasnt looking like a deceiter but he knew her too well now..
Geet got ready in a purple colour suit and had her breakfast.. She just asked him as well and he just had just a cup of black sugerless coffee...
She was fearing his moves and next moment he took her with him and made her sit in the car...
Geet was hating this dominance and wriggled in his touch and grip...
Geet : hum kahan ja t
rahen hain.. Mujhe aapke saath kahin nahi jana samjhe aap
geet murmered...
Geet : hitler , dusht kahin ke... Baby aapke dadda toh dusht danav hai..
She was muttering her self and maan just bent towards her and answered her in a cold rude tone..
Maan : chup bilkul chup... Muh band.. Ghar jaana chaht thi na wahi ja rahi ho geetanjali singhania..

That was a big blow to geet...

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will update next part soon
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m waiting for your reviews ppl...
Edited by Gmsk.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Are you writing the past and present together in this update ? red colored part was past I think .
Nice update
Edited by Clairvoyant20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Clairvoyant20

<font color="#993399">Are you writing the past and present together in this update ? red colored part was past I think .</font>

<font color="#993399">Nice update</font>

yup m writing both
thanks
its now completed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Thanks read it ... Maan is deceived by Geet that is what he believes but Geet is innocent so what happened that made Maan believe she mocked his love ?
Nice❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
hi thanks 4 updating! Amazing update! superbly written! Past n present well incorporated! Maan feels she betrayed him! Bt she is innocent! Maan worried abt the baby! Maan taking her to her house! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Clairvoyant20

<font color="#990099">Thanks read it ... Maan is deceived by Geet that is what he believes but Geet is innocent so what happened that made Maan believe she mocked his love ?</font>

<font color="#990099">Nice❤️</font>

thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Awesome Updates

So Geet first had modelled for Vikrant who is Maan's brother and now
he came to KC and he also saw Geet there but it seems that perhaps
he some kind of feelings towards her .
Maan and Geet fell in love so why did Geet tell him that she cannot
love him so if Maan is angry than he is right in his place why did she
play with his emotions she should have been truthful .
Geet caims that she was not aware of the pregnancy then why was he making plans to go to Kolkata nd not fce her parents .
yes Maans words and his harsh behaviour is hurting her but why she
cannot even now tell him the truth .

As maybe there could be a misunderstanding maybe Geet did
truly love him and feels that Maan betrayed her
but still Geet needs to talk everything for her heath , her happiness
I now Maan says that he hates Geet and just wants his heir
but there is something too that besides the baby it seems that
Maan wants Geet to be with him

waiting for next update to actually see whats gonna happen
Edited by taahir004 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
so far i haven't got grip on this story ,at this point i only understand that there is some mu in maan's mind and something happen which make him hate geet but still her sister and vikrant chapter is remain mystery to me i hope very soon you will clear the cause of his hatred and what relation shagun had with him in past for which he is punishing to geet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Maan is in some mu
Both love each other
But what created thismu
Nice part
heycookie thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Nice part
hope mu clears soon

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