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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
WILL UPDATE AFTER COMPLRTING ZKLZSD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: idunno

READ all the 4 part in one go- all parts are broken don't know what is story is till now and where it is leading to, no head and tail to story-very very confusing.
As per my understanding geet work for maan as trainy and she did modeling for vikrant
she had physical relation with maan and vikrant is intrested in her
her sister was living home and ask geet not to tell anyone



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is they are identical twins?


OK GOT UR POINT WILL RECTIFY MY MISTAKE


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Posted: 10 years ago
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-VENGEANCE-

PART 5

geet was in a fix , maan will never let her go and she stay here ..there was no point on staying when he didnt trust her there was nothing between them , he has already told her that it was a game just to hurt her ..he never love her leave love its a big word for her he had already said that he just wanted to hurt her ..it gave him a full satisfaction seeing her in pain...
pain if she will cry her tears make him happy ...

geet didnt look at the food kept infront of her but she gathered her self and tried to leave she knew that whatever she had faced she knew that it was her fault or its her destiny it was not written on his face that he will betray her or he will leave her ..she had submitted herself to him with the trust that she had on him , but now when that small amount of trust is broken aimlessly then why she should care if he wants her , it will not matter to him...
geet st : hum jaante hai aap hamara vishwas nahi karte aur ab hum aapko hame aur dukh nai dene denge

maan saw that she havnt touch anything but the flickering emotions on her face was making him confuse he doesnt know why , what was the reason what was the need and importance of her in his life but he certainly cant let her go his mind quotioned him that why , what was now left with her and him that he wants her with her , she has done enough damage and now they were only having on the line of hatred..

so you want to go

am i right geet maan asked her , she had not eaten anything and neither she was listening to him ... Yes he wanted her with
him but that's not coz of any love
the love he had for her was already faded and now he just want his most precious belonging from her.,
Geet looked at him he was confusing her more the way he was saying each and everything was making it impossible for her to stay..
Geet stubbornly asked him..
Geet : ha Jana chahte hai hum... Hamare ghar.
Maan took the morsel and made her eat it though she was reluctant but his presence itself was so obsolete for her that she couldn't even say a word.. His one hand was holding hers and she was unknowingly in his cage .. That was purely the cage of his physical intimacy though they were not that close but maan's presence was enough for her.. She was a nut shell princess and he was the hard price prince charming who wasn't ready to let her go even when he declared his hatred for her..
Maan : again a lie geetanjali
Geet felt herself shudder with his voice that was calm yet dangerous.
Geet took her free hand and cupped his face..
Geet : hamse koi galti Hui hair maan.. Aap aisee kyu kar rahe hai.. Her tears fell but he was not affected..maan roughly pushed her hand and said...
Maan : for a moment say the truth geet.. Say that it was all a big lie.. You know that I won't even say you the word.. You can go wherever you want to.. But just accept it that you never loved me..
Geet was numbed he was asking her to accept the thing that she didn't even know...
Geet : hum aisa nahi kahenge.. Maan aap..
But maan cut her and he roughly pulled her towards his hard frame and asked her...
Maan : you know what I haven't seen a girl like you..

Geet cried and asked him..
Then Why cant you let me go you dont love me and their is no need that i should stay with you i can take care of myself

Maan : nandini roy
kolkata
your best friend
and you have applied in XYZ international
want me to say more...
His words left her numb..
Yes she wasn't going home how can she in this condition what will she answer to her parents she has broken their trust violated their values... And this was the reason she was going to her friend who was in Kolkata and she has even arranged for a job for geet...one side was her parents and other her unborn who was the symbol of her love and his hatred and unknown. Hatred..
Geet was numb he was having each and every detail of her and she can't leave now..
Geet pleaded ..
Geet : what do you want maan.. Please don't drag my family in this .
Maan pulled her by her hair and told her..
Maan : I shouldn't have come close to a girl like you but still I did afterall I am also a man and have my needs but that doesn't meant that I loved you.. But still since you are having my heir in your womb so just make sure that you take any step that will harm my baby.. Understand this properly. And from now you are going to do whatever I will say.. My words you are going to listen.. Everything just single breath of yours you are going to take with my permission geetanjali
Geet was agitated listening to him and she tried to freed herself..
Geet : no I won't why would I , I haven't done anything.. If you think I am wrong then tell me .. Kis gunaah ki sazaa de rahe hai aap hame maan..
Maan : geet gunaah kiya hota toh maaf bhi kar deta par Jo tumne kiya that was not acceptable..


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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing emotional update! Well written! Feeling 4 Geet! Seems like their is a mu! Geet loves him so much bt he hates her! Y??Geet wants to leave bt he will nt let her! she is pregnant with his child! Maan tells her abt Kolkata! Geet was leaving as she broke her parent's trust! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
nice update
u update this much late that i need to read all previous part so pls try to update little early
what is misunderstanding between maan n geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
so far didnt reach to the root of story still confusing but i am sure it has to do somthing with her sister.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
OMG!! a huge MUs I guess...give more flashbacks to understand the storyline...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
loved it
y is he punishing her
do they hv a past
he keeps referring to 2 yrs back hw she broke his heart
was that her or someone else
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
feeling bad for geet
maan more torched her he was blackmailed her knows she was arranged job herself she asked him what is the reason he hated her
emotionally update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
part 5
nice...
he knows about her...
cont soon...

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