-vengeance- MG DISCONTINUED

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-INDEX-

character sketch
pg 1
pt 1 pg 1

pt 2 pg 2

teaser pg 6

part 3 page 8

part 4 page 12

teaser pg 16

Part 5 page 20 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3876474/vengeance-mg-discontinued

part 6 pg 25
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Posted: 11 years ago
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-CHARACTERS REVIEW-

MAAN SINGH KHURANA - he is the heir of the khurana group of industries , he is young dynamic but a cold hearted 'DEMON'.,
if he loves someone he does with extent of insanity aur nafrat bhi usi shiddat se karta hai...
Currently MD of KC
25 year old

GEETANJALI SINGHANIA - she is the youngest princess of singhania's , 20 year old she has one inspiration her heart beats for him
she doesnt know what is love but she knew that it will be the changing phase of her life... In last year of her graduation...

SHAGUN SINGHANIA - 23 year old beautiful but selfish
she love money , fame but the tag of a princess and her motives destroyed her

VIKRANT SINGH KHURANA - maan's brother he shares the same birthday as maan opposite nature but looks to die...
He is a big name in fashion industry vikrant khurana meant success...
World famous designer...


-INTRODUCTION-

this is a story of revenge where love plays its role at the level of insanity...

Innocence
hatred
pagalpan
aur
ek sach

kya wo pyar ek dil ka koi khwab tha
ya
uski sisakti aanhaton ki goong

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readers review awaited
Edited by Gmsk.. - 6 years ago
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Part 1

she cried and moved backwards , her eyes were red from crying she was holding herself in a protective manner , he tried to come close to her but she shouted he wanted to help her , as she was moving he feared she may hurt herself ...
Vikrant : geet sambhal ke dont move
you will hurt yourself ruko geet
but she just denied and moved her hands were badly hurt cuts everywhere
the next moment the mirror broke as she moved hitting her already injured hand
geet : mere pass mat ana
humne kaha na hum chale jaaenge
hume kuch mat karna please hum...hum kisi se kuch nai bolenge..

Vikrant was not understanding her outburst , neither she was allowing him near her aur khud ko dekh nai rahi thi..

Geet : suna nai jao
she cried and put her bloodied hands on her face her hiccups were increasing after sometime she opened her eyes and looked around she had expected vikrant to leave bt he was still there
she again shouted in immense pain and fear

kaha na chale jao..

He left the room in order to get someone..

AFTER FIFTEEN MINUTES

two hands holded her from waist and took her in his arms...
He made her lie on the bed and removed her hands which were on his chest she was holding him just like holding her life he made her lie removing that grip it was not gentle but a harsh touch she moaned and cried in pain..

Hum kisi ko nai bataenge , hame jaane do ...
Hume jane do

she moaned but he didnt melt he was not allowed his feelings those emotions had turned him cold..

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short part
bt will continue if got positive response
Edited by maanlovesgeet - 11 years ago
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Part 2

he looked at her sleeping form tears had drenched her face but it had no mercy no effect on him..
Maan , MSK he was the one who brought her with him
her cries her pleads had no effect on him
she gained her conscious and looked around , there was pitch dark she was not able to get where she was everything was blur her eyes were paining so was her hands
geet cried holding her head it was paining she doesnt knw what she should do
geet : ahh... Hume yahan ana hi nahi chahiye tha sab hamari galti hai...
She was crying when she found the room lighted it was looking dull but something was attracting her
maan : ansu pooch lo
yahi rahogi ab tum
geet knew who is he and she tried to get up and leave when he pinned her to the bed her wounds were bleeding but he didnt cared
geet looked away but it didnt made maan guilty her eyes were red and she asked for the first time
geet : kyu kiya aapne aisa
why did you broke my trust maan humne kya kiya tha aisa
maan's eyes softened he kissed away her tears even his grip loosened she smiled and tried to hug him but he moved away
maan : aaj se you are going to stay with me jo me kahunga wo karogi
geetanjali singhania i dont want my heir to be born without a father's name
gunaah kiya h tumne kafi hai ya aur bataun
geet didnt understand his words she came near him and asked him again
geet : maan hame kuch samaj nai aa raha
aap ye kya keh rahe h
hamara yakeen kijiye hum kuch nai jaante
maan replied in anger she was again lying and he just wanted to make her suffer
maan : ek aur naya bahana ek aur natak
geet shukar karo ki maine tumhe kuch nai kaha itna bada sach chupane k liye
geet was started she didnt knew what he was saying she was unaware his claim his words meant nothing
geet : kya matlab hai apka konsa sach
humne kabhi kuch kiya kuch nai chupaya koi jhooth nai bola
maan hume jaane dijiye hum vaada karte hai kabhi nai ayenge apke samne
hume jaane dijiye...
Geet tried to go but maan grasped her arm she hit him but it was useless
maan : suna nai tumne kahi nai ja rahi ho tum
geet : aap kyun aisa kar rahe hai maan ...
Maan answered her making her numb his words were no less than any kind of painful needles piercing in her soul
maan : just becuz i hate you
i hate you geet
meri zindagi ki sabse badi galti tum ho
geet was nt able to respond she tried to go but he held her close
geet : toh jane dijiye hame maan
geet tried to leave she was about to open the door when he brought her and slap her hard making her fall on hard floor
geet : aap kya chahte hain
she asked sobbing
maan : my child
i want that baby with me who is right now breathing in your womb
wo bacha jispar sirf mera haq hai
geet was startled her hands went towards her stomach in a reflex she cried feeling the baby it was hers and maan's their love which was breathing in her womb she cried out of joy and looked at maan their he was standing with his eyes on her but she forget each and everything her eyes showed her luv
geet : maan hamara baby
hum dono ka
maan went near her and took her face in his palms warning her
maan : sirf mera hai , samjhi tum
tum jaisi ladki kuch nai chahti aur tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe na batane ki
geet nodded in a no she looked at him and vowed
geet : nahi , hame nai pata tha
hamara yakeen kijiye
hum sach keh rahe h
hamare baby ki kasam
suddenly her thoughts went towards his warning she held her still flat stomach protectively and pleaded
geet : hum aapko hamare bache ko kuch karne nai denge
ye hamara hai sirf hamara maan...

Maan : geet i am not asking you i am telling you from now onwards you are going to stay with me i wont you let out of my sight

she was lost in his last words she would have given everything of hers just with one call of him but now even the pleasant dream is shattered




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Edited by maanlovesgeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what is story line waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

what is story line waiting for next update

continuation of pt 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting just love it waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why he is doing this type of treatment with her...

I assume there is some misunderstanding created by someone...but Geet don't have any idea what is he saying...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




why he is doing this type of treatment with her...

I assume there is some misunderstanding created by someone...but Geet don't have any idea what is he saying...

waiting for next part...

thank you
well i can just say that its a mix nd match of situations
thanx fr d cmnt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely begining yaar ,. itna hatred geetsey maan ko kya hua isa in donoke beech ,,,yaar geet ki pareshaani humse nahi dekhajaathahai yaar

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