MG OS- Saathi Tere Sath [part 1/pg 6/20 feb 2014]

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lovely prolouge & CS ..

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interesting story waiting for update

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congrats on new story 👏

wowww awsum prologue cnt wait for start 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Congrats for the new OS dear 👍🏼

Nyc prologue...👏

Loved it

Maan and geet both in love but geet is hiding something from him why... ❓ 😕

Eagerly waiting for the update...😊

Thanx 4 d pm...😊

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Rashmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congrats nelu for the new story

i will try to be regular here as this is going to start

I m not able to read your old works

but I will try to catch your all new works

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nelufar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank you so much Guys For Ur Likes & Superb Comments Which means a lot to me..
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But Sorry Guys, I Can't update soon...
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Too much busy with Brothers Wedding Preparations...
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But I Hope I will be give You Update Feb 25 ...
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Extermly Sorry for My Lateness ... Plzz Support me...
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Love You All...
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Love Nelufar ...

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nelufar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank You So Much Guyss For ur Likes & Comments...

Prolouge & Intro - Page 1

Here In First Part .. Hope You All Will Enjoy... 😃

[ Banner By Sania.. Thanks Dear For The Awesome Banner ]

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--Saathi Tere Sath--
Part 1
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AT KM_________________
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Maan was sleeping peaceful on his Bed & Like always seeing His Geet on his Dreams...
[Both loved each other.. but didn't said I Love YoU, They are always There for each other, Hugs & kisses are normal between them ]
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Geet Jumped on His Room throw window... She Wiped her tears & went near Maan's Bed...
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She Looked at him& sleep near him & hugged him tightly..
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Maan too hugged her, thinking Her as Dream...
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Tears Was rolling from her eyes & she hugged her more tightly...
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Maan felt somthing wet on his shirt, So he opened his eyes & looked at Geet...
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Maan broke the hugged & make her look at him..
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Geet looked at him, with her moist eyes...
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Maan got panicked seeing her tears: Kya hua Mishti? Sab thik hain na? roo kyun nahi hai ho ? [He wiped Her tears]
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Geet didn't said anything just hugged him..
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Geet: Maan Please Hold me, Hold me tight.. Warna main kho jaunge... plz..
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Maan hugged her tightly- Mere hote huye, tum kahi nahi kho sakte Mishti.. Main Hu na, tumhe thame rakhne ke liye..
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Geet: Bass sirf aap he toh, Plz humesha mera sath dete rehna..
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Maan: Humesha ke baad bhi tumhare sath rahunga...
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Geet hugged him tightly & thought how their destiny made them One...
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-- Flashback--

Geet & Maan met at their collage ... Maan was geet's senior...
Both was brilliant students .. One day Professior give them one project to do it together...

Being senior, maan never give attitude to geet... Both did the project with each others help... that time they become good friends...
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Sometimes Geet take maan to her Home.. where they do lots of masti with other friends..
Geet lived alone on Handa Mansion... Handa's Was one time the most richest persons ... but long ago, There all business get ruined... Maan as khurana hears a lot about Handa's...
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When he came to know Geet is handa's daughter, he once asked her about her Family...
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But As geet get Upset & start crying, Maan never ask her again...
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In this all time being together, They fall in love with each other...
Both never said I love you.. but their Every word prove that how much they love each other...
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Full college knows that Geet is With Maan.. so they never tried to harm geet...
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Geet is very strong person,
[everyone thinks so, But Only Maan Knows How Much weak she is from Inside]
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Most of the time Geet get upset.. She come to Clg in very sad mood but when she saw maan,
she hugged him tightly.. She don't care about the clg.. She just care about Maan... & She know that Maan never mind, when she hugged her...
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Maan Hugged Her... he alwys made her feel great...
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--One Day--

At HM In Geet's Room...
Both Was in Bed & was hugging each other...
Geet was Playing with his shirt bottons & maan was caressed her Hair & kissing her forehead now & then...
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Maan: Mishti...
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Geet: hmm...
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Maan: do you trust me??
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Geet: Kya duniye main assa koi hain, Jo Apne GOD Pe trust nahi karta??
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Maan Hugged her more tightly & kissed her forehead...
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Maan: Mishti, them why don't to share ur pain with me?? kya main itna kabil nahi ke main tumhara Dard jann ke usse kamm kar saku??
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Geet: Dard jane bina bhi, aapne mere harr dard ko kaam kar diya hain Maan.. or mujhe pata hain Aap janoge toh uss dard ko mere zindagi se kahi durr le jaoge.. par main yeh nahi chahte...
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Maan: Par main chahta hu, mere Mishti har dard se durr rahe... Ek moka do na mujhe Geet...
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Geet: Maan Maine kasam khaiye, Main uss dard ko khud apni zindagi durr karunge.. Mere Har ek aanshu Ka badla main khud lunge...
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Maan: Toh main karu Geet?? Kese tumhare Help karu, tumhare Kasam pure karne main??
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Geet: Bass mera Sath de te rahiye... Aapka Sath he hain sirf mere pass... Agar kisi din apne mujhe chod diya na.. Main Tut jaunge... oR Chah ke bhi koi mujhse jod nahi payega...
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Maan: Main tumhe itni kass [tightly] ke pakdunga, tum tut he nahi paoge.. I Promise you Geet.. Main har pal, har lamha, Tumhare sath deta rahunga...
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Geet: You know Maan, U are the Best Gift Of My Life...

-------------[Flashback Ends]-----------------
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Next Morning In Maan's Room---

Geet was sleeping Peacefully On Maan's Chest, When her mobile start ringing & Broke her sleep..
Geet woke up, Looked At Maan & Received The Call...
Geet- Jii Kaka...
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Kaka [ Geet's Servent But More Thn Family Member.. He take cares of geet, after her parents passed away, he knows everything About Maan & geet... He trust Maan]
Kaka: Geet Baby Time ho gaya hain, Aap kab aa rahe ho ghar?
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Geet: bass thore der main Kaka, Aap unn logo ko Outhouse le jao, main Aate hu...
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Kaka: Ok beta...
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Geet cut the call...
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She Kissed Maan's forehead & make him awake...
Geet: Jaan, i have to go now, As Aaj Mere clg off hain, hum sham ko milenge apki office ke baad, ok??
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Maan: Mishti Why you always Run Away in the morning...
I want you to be with me...
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Geet: I know Jaan .. But I have promised You Na, Just this month.. Fron next month, My Clg finals & then I' all yours...
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Maan Make sad Face: Whole One Month & then Exams Also..
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Geet kissed His cheeks & Hugged Him: Now have to go jaan.. meet you at evening..
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Maan: ookk Bye...
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Geet turn to leave but maan hold her hand & make her stop..
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Geet: Kya hua Maan?
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Maan cupped Her face, kissed her Eyes...
Maan: Don't Cry Too much, I hate it, when ur eyes get moist or one single drop of tear came out from ur eyes...
I feel Helpless all time like Last night that i can't take ur pain away...
Still I'm Waiting For the day when u will able to say me ur Pain...
But Remember Geet I'm alwys With You..
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Geet Hugged Him Tightly...

Geet: I need ur support maan.. Plzz Don't leave me ever... I will broke down completely...
I'm nothing with you... Plzz Give me sometime... please...
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Maan : I'm with you forever Mishti...
You're My Life Honey...

maan Hugged Her more tightly...
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[Geet's Pov]________

I know Maan, If i tell you about them, you will give them the best punishment they deserve...
But I'm helpless i can't tell You...
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Aapse milne se pehle mujhe nahi pata tha, Duniya main abhi bhi ache log rehte hain...
Assa Bhi koi hain, Jo Mera Sath de sakta hain...
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Iss liye Maine Mere Mom- Dad ki Kasam Khaye Thi,
Unn ke Aanshu o ka badla main khud lunge.. Akele, Kisi ki madaat nahi lungi...
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Kyun ki Pehle Jisse Bhi Madat mangi, sabne bharosa todh diya..
Kisi ne sath nahi diya mera...
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Assa nahi hain, i don't trust you..
I trust you More Then Babaji...
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I know U will take all pain Away from me...
But I can't broke The promise, i GIVE my Mom on Her Death's Bed...
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I will Punish Them Alone...

I will show Them Mohindar & Rano Handa's Daughter Is Strong enough To Punish Them...
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But I Need You In every Step Maan...
Cuz I'm not Strong, If U r not with Me...
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I'm fully broken ...
Your Hold Make Me Alive...

Just Be With Me...
Saathi Tu De baas Mere Sath...

[Pov End]

Precap: Geet Giving Punishment ...
Geet's Past...
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So Guys This Was First Part... Don't know If u guys liked it or not...

Plss Give ur views... sorry for mistakes...
All types of Comments Are Welcome...
Good or Bad , But Pls Do Comment & encourge Me...

Love You ALL...

Nelu 😊😊

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PS- This Is My Mind's story, But If Its is matched with anyones story plz let me know, throw PM...

Edited by nelufar10 - 11 years ago

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love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

beautiful starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr lovely story n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

nice start maan and geet loves eachother but still not confessed and geet's past is what maan doesnt know and geet wants to handle by her own

waiting for geet's past