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Part 8

I AM IN LOVE!!!!!!! I AM IN LOVE WITH GEET!!!!! He smiled...giggled ... laughed with whole heart realising his feelings for her. He danced liked kid in that rain... He was so happy getting a name to his feelings. I love you Geet... Maan shouted like excited kid...after playing for hours in rain Maan returned to his room. Maan was drying his hair that's when he saw he saw Geet standing there Maan instantly stopped his action. He moved towards her bounded by her spell he looked at her dreamily. He raised his hand towards her thinking it's his hallucination but she slightly slapped his hand...Maan get startled by this... Mr Khurana you have to take me to construction site...But ma'am at this hour... eyeing towards wall watch which is showing nine. Mr Khurana you said I should call you whenever I need, isn't it? Ok... Geet left in hotel lobby to wait for him to come out. Maan here horridly gets ready in jeans and black shirt was about leave glanced in mirror once again checking once again. Both came in parking area and Geet was about to move towards driving seat of her car Ma'am, what you are doing... Geet stopped abruptly looked at him questioningly. How can I let you drive with your injured feet...? What if you couldn't hit the break at the right time... I'll be in heaven and abhi toh meri shadi bhi nahi hui hai...rolling her eyes Geet sat on passenger seat while Maan took driving seat. Very much eager for marriage ha Mr Khurana... Yea...Maan said looking at her dreamily. Once drive start,by the way ma'am, what's the problem occurred at construction site... that we have to reach there at this hour. Maan questioned her. Mr Chopra is businessman as well as Politian. The opposite party don't want this project to be successful as this project will lead more votes to Mr Chopra by people. So they creating problem on construction site... but Ma'am they can harm you too...Maan this is our work, we can't back out no matter what...

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Feel Me
Hoo F
eel Me
Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Heal Me
Ho Heal Me
Thinking Abt The Love We Make And All Life Sharing
Come And Feel Me
Ho Feal Me

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Feel Me
Com on Heel M
e



Maan looked at her admiringly feeling proud on her. Just few days back he had told her rudely that she is heartless... He was guilty after that but now he understands how wrong he was... This woman cares for everyone even she doesn't know. She is just shows she is arrogant, rude...but inside she is totally different just like jackfruit hard from outer... sweeter and soft from inside. He was falling for her all over.


Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon

Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon

On site both were engrossed in work but Maan was in her thought. Geet was discussing problems with other employee and workers.

Maan was constantly staring at her... how she explains each point, how she handles situation effortlessly, Her confidence, her aura, her attitude... everything about her is fascinating him. He stood up he jumped on the table in front of her and sung...

Umm Waise To Maan Mera
Phele Bhi Raaton Mein

Aksar Hi Chahat Ke Haan
Sapne Sanjota Tha

Phele Bhi Dhadkan Yeh
Dhun Koi Gaati Thi
Par Abb Jo Hota Hai Woh
Phele Na Hota Tha


Maan looked towards Geet she was shocked with his behaviour but slowly smiled raised her hand towards him... he pulled her on table with him. With him on table she too starts singing with him

Hua Hai Tujhe Jo Bhi Jo Bhi
Mujhe Bhi Is Paar Hua

To Na Main Bhi Keh Doon Keh Doon
Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua

Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon



The world around them seems like stopped for a minute as they stared at each other's eyes... Geet advanced her hand towards his lips... Maan's smile freeze that moment his heart beat running like it's running in some marathon. The moment her hand touched his lips Mr Khuranaaa!!!! Maan snapped open his eyes only to see Geet screaming at him... what shocked him that he was not on the table nor she was on the table... both were on their previous seat...If you are not able concentrate you can leave Mr Khurana... Maan left after apologizing... I was dreaming with open eyes...then he remembered what he was dreaming about... he blushed... giggled at his own behaviour. He was changing since he met her but he loving this change in him... He loves to be around her, exploring her each and every side, dreaming about her, and main importantly loving her.

Maan and Geet moving towards the car to go back ...Maan was moving towards driving seat... Someone held Geet's mouth from behind, Geet struggle to free but the hold was so tight she couldn't free herself. Maan was completely obvious to it he sat in the car was waiting for her to came in. But after minute he called for her but she didn't answer. He came out of the car scaring if anything happened to her as already her leg is injured... Maan!!!!! A scream came from her asking for his attention... Maan was shocked beyond limits the man was dragging Geet away from there away from him...Geet...He ran towards her that man stopped in his way looked at maan dangerously Aye listen we don't have any enmity towards you but her... She is the owner of HC right...This project of Mr Chopra will never be successful...just back off, if you don't want to die leave her A firm reply came from him... that man looked at Geet Ahhh... Geet moaned in pain as his hold on her hand increased...Maan punched him so hard he stumbled away from Geet. That man laughed Did you think I am alone...? With the blink few men surrounded Maan. They punched on Maan's face kicked him in his stomach... Maan fell on his knees. Maan!!!! Geet screamed out loud seeing him in pain... Maan stared at her a moment one of the goon about to hit him with hockey stick he held it... pulled it from him hits that goon with hockey stick so hard he fell on ground half dead... Maan's blood boiled seeing that man's hold on Geet... With rage he advanced towards him hits him on his stomach he screamed with pain...but maan showed no mercy to him he kept hitting him. In all this Maan didn't noticed that one of the goon was about to attack him with knife in his hand from behind before the knife touch Maan's back Geet held the knife tightly with her hand. Maan's attention turns towards her with her small painful whimper... pushing her away from the knife maan kicked that goon. Maan hits that goon's head with the hockey stick others ran from there seeing the amount of blood came from their partner. By constant hit that goon fell unconscious... but Maan was out of control. Maan...A soft call from her bring him back to his sense. Maan bent down picked her in his armsI am fine... Geet was saying but shuts up seeing his glare he placed in car and left to hospital...

At hospital, Maan was sitting alone on chair waiting for Geet's check up to complete. He couldn't forget her scream. He was numb with fear... fear of losing her. The moment he realise his love for her he knew he can't live without her but now he experienced it too. It's like his whole life depend on her. Maan looked upwards feeling a hand on his shoulder Maan are you crying? Adi asked who came to see his boss as Maan informed them while driving then only Maan realized he was actually crying. He somehow managed to lie to Adi that something fell in his eyes... Adi shrugged at that moment both left towards Geet.

Adi left towards Doctor to get Geet's report. Thank you... Maan said entering Geet's room. What for? For saving my life... Maan replied then I too have to Thank you Mr Khurana Geet said teasingly...Maan smiled at her. Maan was feeling heaven seeing her safe and sound beside him.

Next day they file a case against opponent of Mr Chopra... Even Mr Chopra also came with them to police station. Geet made sure those goons as well as that Politian behind the bars. I am sorry for whatever happened Ms Handa... You don't have to Mr Chopra; it was never your fault. They left to their hotel. Maan was always around her. He couldn't leave her a moment alone. He was smiling, blabbering outside but inside he was scared... very much scared for her safety so he came along with her in police station. Even though those goons were behind bars still Maan's fear was there... He wanted to take her in his arms and hide her from the world, from all pain...

Geet beta, Adi told me some goons attacked you there And you got hurt... Aap thik toh ho na? Dadima, Dadima I am fine... Just don't worry. Geet knew her dadima will be so much worried for her that's why she never wanted to tell her but this Adi is such Dadi's chamcha...I don't care, You just come back... Dadima ordered her but dadima, I have work here... I'll not listen anything this time Geet; You have to come back... Ok fine... with that she hanged up the call. She called everyone in her room... Once everyone were inside she glared at Adi... Adi gulped down looking at his boss throwing daggers at him. I have to leave today... you guys stay back here...is it clear? I will come with you...Maan argued back... Mr Khurana you have habit of talking in between and denying your boss's orders, Isn't it? Please ma'am it's too cold here I can't stay here anymore... Geet rolled her eyes listening Maan's lame excuses. Both left towards to Mumbai...

Precap: Ignorance

Part 9

Done here with this part...I am so sorry guys to disappoint you all with the last part...I know that was really fast but I thought everyone is eager for past so dragged it fast...but that was really fast... Sorry once again... now I have decided to put past aside for more parts and slow down some. Hope it was not fast...plz ignore mistakes Do like and comment...

Thank you!!!

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me again first!!!!!!!😃
ab toh addat hogayi hai😆

loved the banner, surely it shows maan's imagination😳

emotional update
maan realized his love for geet, and is very happy about it😊

He raised his hand towards her thinking it's his hallucination but she slightly slapped his hand...Maan get startled by this... Mr Khurana you have to take me to construction site.,ME love this scene , maan bhi na😆

maan now got to know what real geet is like,hard from outside and soft from inside!!!!!!!

omg twist, i thought geet ki kidnapping hojayegi but thank god maan noticed it soon😊

maan fought for geet and saved her, she too saved him😳

geet going back to mumbai because of dadima
geet jaygi toh maan jarur geet ke saath jayega na😆
and what an excuse maanu Please ma'am it's too cold here I can't stay here anymore... 🤣
kyu maan phele cold nahi tha kya😉😆
his these antics make him so cute!!!!!!😳

loved the whole update!!!!
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😡
me gussa😡

maan finally realised his love for geet...

he gave a name to his feelings...
geet is pertfect in her work nd dedicated too..
maan nd his drms!!!☺️

geet ko goons ne attack kia... 😲

or hmare hero ne use bacha lia...
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Appy

res😡

me gussa😡

😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved it
maan is in cloud nine after realising his feeling he is feeling very happy
maan thought that he was halliculating geet at his room door but geet slapped his hand and brought to reality...
at construction some problem arised so she want to go there and asked maan to take her to there...he is finding new thing about her evry day and he feeling guilt for his rude words to her the other day
ha ha maan dreaming with open eyes that geet also singing with him...
maan saved geet from those goons and geet saved maan from goon stabbing maan
maan has taken her to hospital and he realised that how important she is for him with out her he cant live...
dadi orderd geet to come back and maan also want to go with geet and what a lame excuse he gave for his return ha ha
now eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sach me even I thought k it was going fast n I could not relate to it!!
Phir socha the way u took the concept till now u would've planned something. .. so I let it be..!!
N coming to the update it was good 2 c maan worried ab kyu na ho it's his love. ..ops sorry life right!!😉
Waiting for the next !
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
finally maan realized his feelings for geet
i m just loving this maan so sweet and naughty
maan saved geet and geet saved him
and interesting precap. i think maan will ignore geet as he will realize he is engaged
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum
maaneet pai attack
sada gabroo jawan maan bacha liya hitler ko
mera ko laga geet maan ko bacay gi i thought geet is fighter like karate
me happy
back to home
lame excuse of maan he is a werse liar haahahah

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
maan realised he loves geet...maan dreaming of singing around geet
maan fought with goons...geet saved maan👍🏼
maan too wants to go back along with geet...reason...too cold over there😆

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