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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Tujhe pata hai woh nahi aayegi tabhi toh itni bold ho rahi hai

Meri story aage badh hi nahi rahi hai... only MG in my head now..

hiw will i finish in 2 parts now..

You can always write longer parts since you're already breaking them into multiple smaller ones. I think you should write it the way it's playing in your head because if you try to force it, it may not be as flowing.. Waise is 2 parts a pathar pe lakeer?

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Posted: 11 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: mayyo

You can always write longer parts since you're already breaking them into multiple smaller ones. I think you should write it the way it's playing in your head because if you try to force it, it may not be as flowing.. Waise is 2 parts a pathar pe lakeer?

thoda sa limiting bhi hai what I can write. I am not confident about certain stuff ..

unless I put the confrontation soon all that is left is romance.. big yawn after one or two updates I am sure..

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#933

Don't under estimate the power of an evader! 😉 😆

The stuff that you're not sure about, try and see if it fits. If it makes sense, well and good, if not, discard the idea. And since you've already thought about ending it in two chapters, why is putting the confrontation now a limiting factor?
I really doubt anybody gets bored of romance!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: mayyo
Don't under estimate the power of an evader! 😉 😆

The stuff that you're not sure about, try and see if it fits. If it makes sense, well and good, if not, discard the idea. And since you've already thought about ending it in two chapters, why is putting the confrontation now a limiting factor?
I really doubt anybody gets bored of romance!

QOE ki jai ho 😆 so jao abhi.. GN Mari 😛 Tortoise jaanu dreams😳

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#935

Originally posted by: dqno1

QOE ki jai ho 😆 so jao abhi.. GN Mari😛 Tortoise jaanu dreams😳

I think I'll go with Jaanu dreams, but the new wala Jaanu, not the tortoise! 😳

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: mayyo

I think I'll go with Jaanu dreams, but the new wala Jaanu, not the tortoise! 😳

dangle the carrot now why don't u😲

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#937

Originally posted by: dqno1

dangle the carrot now why don't u😲

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Adios!

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Muskan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#938

So sweet update
Can't wait to read their meeting

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#939

I can sense Maan's entry at the airport...am I right?

Well, the story has been moving ahead really well, with suspense being cleared in every chapter. And your way of words is definitely refreshing. The story of Geet's parents was tragic as well as emotional. Its natural for her to feel guilty and the grief of losing them will never end. There can be no loss when compared to the loss of family and loved ones - specially for a person for whom her family was everything in the world. Life stops, but I am glad she has moved on for Raya as well as her sake. I totally like Raya and Raunaq. Even after being married, with their own personal commitments, they are making all the necessary efforts and sacrifices to be close to Geet. Not everyone does that in real life.

Overall, the story has been very satisfactory till this point. U give unique names to all your characters and that continues with Anaya's children and Vyan.