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Hello all my sweetie pies...jhappiieesss🤗




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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.















Part - 78


Geet woke up with a flinch and moan * she was feeling pain in her belly and find Maan's hand on d bandage * she shifted his hand slowly not to disturb his sleep * he was sleeping very close to her and she felt an urge to caress his sharp features * she lost in him and in a trance she softly touched his forehead, eyebrows, closed eyes, cheeks, jaw line, chin and his M shaped lips * a sweet smile adored her lips and she cherished this beautiful sight for long * Maan steered in his sleep which broke her reverie and she got up from d bed to go for change and freshen up * Maan opened his eyes with a smile and murmured ,, thank you * his sleep broke when he felt her touch on his cheeks but remained still * he steered when this sweet torture was going unbearable for him this was d best moment of his life when she was taking a step to come close to him * her this action filled his heart with a zeal .



He got up and went to his room and then to his gym after so many days. Geet got ready taking a good time coz of injuries and went down to help Dadima in rest of d rituals * Meera came in d kitchen and touched Dadima's feet and she told her to make some sweet and then brought for pooja . Geet and Nakul help her then they did d morning pooja with Dadima.


All settled in dining room to take dinner and Meera served d sweet dish to all * Dadima ,YSK and Geet gave her beautiful gifts * now they started their convo on various topics . Annie asked about Dev and meera's HM . Maan was listening everything quietly.


Annie: Dev bro kahan plan kiya hei jaane ka.


Dev: we planned for Bali.


Geet: le maine to socha tha babysitting ki classes attend karoge dono .. Ye to Bali chale .


All laughed out loud and both smiled shyly * Dadima advised them to be careful in this stage and both nodded in yes. They were going in d eve after Pegfera.


Maan and YSK went to office and Geet reminded Maan to brought quotation file of that Co.


After finishing his meeting Maan decided to meet Rano and rang her * she was on duty and told him to meet at lunch time * she asked about Guddu's recovery * Maan went to Meet her but he was in dither , but to her luck Rano started d talk .


Rano: Maan aao lunch ker lo .


Maan: no thanks aunty , please u have , i'll wait.


Rano: don't be formal , u r like my child , come ek din army mess ka khana taste ker lo , ya tumhare standard ka nahi samajhte?


Maan : no it's not like that.


He sat on d sofa to take d lunch and Rano served him .


Rano: bolo kya baat thi Maan ?


Maan: 1st i want to ask about Geet's burn marks .. wo chale jayenge na ?


Rano: haan , don't worry about that but kuch time lagega , aur ?


Maan: wo actually , i want to ask about Geet , u knew her from childhood na.


Rano looked at him and asked: mujhse ku , Guddu se ku nahi puchte?


Maan: wo kuch share nahi kerti aur mei nahi chahata ki usse force karu , shayad kuch essa ho jo usse hurt kare * aap to uske bare mei jante ho ki wo uncle se baat ku nahi kerti , aur ku wo apni family ka kabhi naam nahi leti ?


Rano sighed deeply and became serious * she composed herself and said.


Rano: Maan , it's very complicated and i don't know how u'll take it ?


Maan: I'll take it positive , trust me.


Rano: Maan beta it's a long story , jyada to mei nahi janti lekin kuch starting ka aur kuch last ka janti hu Mahi ke through.


Maan: jo aap janti hei wo bhi kaafi hei mere liye.


Rano looked at him lovingly and said : please kuch galat matt samajhna Guddu ke bare mei . Maan nodded in a NO.


Rano: Maan , i don't know how much u know about Promila's family, but i think if u were going to merry her daughter then i could say that u knew that Sameera and Brij lost their father when they were very young.


Maan: yes i knew that and Mahinder uncle was their guardian .


Rano sighed : yes guardian and Guddu's father but Guddu's mother is Promila. She is like a surrogate mother of her who only gave her birth and after that left her . Maan , after Mahi's bro death his parents , Promila's parents and relatives forced him to accept his bro's family's responsibility * at that crucial time Mahi was in a shocked because his father had announced in d presence of peoples and relatives that his younger son took d responsibility of d children without asking Mahi's will * at d time of Pagdi Rasam his father and relatives forced him to put a Chadar ( Dupatta/Chunni) on Promila's head ... That is called Chadar udhana in their local language * in this relation she and her children would belong to her husband but Mahi would be only their guardian * they would not called his children and she was not his legal wife * sometime these relation turned positive , but sometime negative and only time shows d outcomes.


After some months Mahi's father also died and he became very silent and depressed* her mother thought that his son is getting nothing from this relation not even his own child and she forced Promila to carry a child for Mahi , but she refused saying that she has 2 kids from her husband * after pestering from her and Rajji she and Mahi agreed and Guddu came in this world , but after that situation became worst * Brij's behaviour was very rude for Guddu and he started hurting her * he was 8yrs old that time and d only son of d family * Mahi was posted in Delhi that time and every weekend he went to his house for Guddu * he witnessed that Promila neglected Guddu coz of Brij and Sameera * Brij didn't like if his mother took care of Guddu * slowly she left Guddu in d care of her Grand mother saying that she can't lose her son for this unwanted girl * things became complicated for Mahi * he was doing everything for his bro's family but his own daughter was living a neglecting life * Mahi's mother was looking after her but somewhere she favoured Brij because he was d only son/Waris of d Khandan.


I don't know what happened but Mahi took Guddu to Rajji and requested Rajji to take care her few yrs and after that he would leave her in boarding school * Guddu was hardly 2yrs old that time * Rajji took good care of her like her own child * I met Guddu in an Army Mess family quarters where Mahi brought her in vacations * she was a very cute 5 yrs old kid. When she came in 6th std he sent her in boarding school in Shimla and adjusted his posting nearby units * from that day she was living away from family and at d name of family she has Mahi and Rajji's family. (Rano stopped here)


Maan: uske baad , kya Geet kabhi yahan nahi aai ? Mahi uncle to yahan rahane lage thy aur Geet bhi I** mei padhne lagi thi .


Rano: Beech mei kya hua mujhe nahi pata but Mahi left Army after 20yrs of service and settled his business here * Guddu came in her house with Rajji to meet her GM , but treated as a guest * Brij and Sameera never talk to her properly.


Maan: But why Geet is angry with her father?


Rano: Mahi was bounded with his father's wish to look after promila and her children * Brijj and Sameera became a brats coz of lot of pampering * Mahi can't say them anything coz Promila accused him that he was becoming partial to his bro's kids and didn't want to take care of them * she created dramas in front of Mahi's mother and relatives * Mahi was helpless and in that situation Guddu was suffering and living an isolated life even she was not getting proper love of her father. Few yrs back when Guddu was in I** her GM died and after that Guddu had a fight with Brij and announced that she never come in that house * Rajji hardly managed her to talk to Mahi and after that she met him in his office and FH , but not in that house.


Maan jab bacche bade ho jate hei to wo bhi bahot kuch janne aur samajhne lagtey hei * Mei bas itna janti hu iss sab mei Mahi aur Guddu hi lose mei rahe * unhe kabhi apne hisse ki khushi nahi mili * ek adhoori jindgi ji rahe hei dono * aur baaki to tum jaante honge because Guddu is ur wife now .


Maan nodded in yes with lowered head , but he knew that he didn't know anything about Geet coz he too left her abandoned and she lived an isolated life in KM .


Precap - Maan put a tough condition in front of Geet ...



( For Mahi and promila's part i took d idea from d novel Ek chadar maili si ,,written by Khushwant Singh / a movie also with same name and i myself saw this thing practically in a village )

Part -79


Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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