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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Wow just loved it geet come back magar uski memory chali gayee hai mansi ne annie ko achi punishment di geet loved mansi movement just loved it

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Part-48

It was really an emotional start...u kept that anxiousness in me in those first few lines too

Geet forgetting everything defo came as a blow Mohi...what else Maan has to go through, isn't it enough for him to have his love and life around yet so far to reach...but then dr's words felt to an extent right too, at least she will not be in pain now and Maaneet together can start afresh...of course Maan's love will bring back beauty of their relationship, their love😳

Father-daughter moments were so nice to read...kids just make the moment the hardest of moments lighter with their presence.

Loved the way Geet's innocence has been brought out with every word she uttered...hope this stays with sherni Geet back😉 and then Her Love for Maan is also shown with her words not able to see him in tears...gosh a perfect lovable jodi...its like their souls know and love each other

Your Poems always are the soul of ur stories whenever u give one...its just tooo good.

👏👏This one is so emotional, pain, longing and love everything, especially these lines...

Mere anso teri ankho se bhate the kabhi..
Aaj meri udasi teri ankhoo mai bathi hai..
Ye bhi tu hai usse waqt ka hi fasiala !!!!!
Tere gum aaj maang baitha mai
Isse jahan ke malik se..
Tere harr aasoo ko mai apni ankhe de do..
Aaj phir waqt ko karna hai ye faiasla.. !!!!

That slow breakdown, helplessness of Maan was as always hard to read...he is just trying to be so strong and now this condition of Geet...don't know how he is taking it all...but this new hope, hope brings happiness in Maneet's life and no more pain pleaseee

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Nikita

@nikkirockssss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

both updates was awesome n emotional too...geet completely out of danger but she lost her memory forever... geet sab kuch bhul gai usse tho ye b yaad nai k wo khud h kaun...aur kitna kuch sahna padega maan ko...

love mansi's cute antics... hehehehe mansi ne maan ko bhapp kiya:P ye sirf mansi hi kr skti h...

geet ko hosh aa gaya...maan's heart pained seeing geet's blank look...geet sab kuch accept nai kr paa rhi h n she wants to know about her more...

hehehehe mansi ki first bite ki victim annie bani...mansi apne dadda k pass jana chahti thi but annie usse jane nai de rhi thi...hmmm anni ne mansi se panga liya...

love mansi n geet's part...aaawww mansi apni mamma ko kitna miss kr rhi thi...mamma k pass jate hi mansi ne party badal li n papa ko dur bhaga rhi h...

eagerly waiting for nxt update... aisa kya hua k geet ghar jane se mana kr rhi h???????

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

amazing parts...feel very sad for maan..geet lost her memory fully but he feel like he lost her as well and she is totally blank..it is not easy to rebuilt what ever earlier u had..and mansi need her mother..😭😭😭😭😭..geet is in worst part as well...feel very sad for maaneet..precap scary yaar..pls get well soon and cont your amazing😭 creation..👏👏

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

lovely ud

geet finally out of danger

but lost her memory 4ever

maan's loves she totally blank

stranger fr them

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

part - 48

wow lovely emotional heart wrenching update...te way geet ki condition tat she lost every bit of memories of her life was lovely heart wrenching..te way my maan broken down hearing it was lovely emotional..but i think its better to start everything from first.. now she atleast know she is my maan ki wife, and i know my maan ki love will bring his geet back...te way maansi was playing with my maan saying buup, only she can do tis my maan te great msk..te way geet asking abt her and my maan making my maan heart to cry in pain was lovely emotional wrenching...te way my maan ki gussa on bechare drs was lovely emotional..te way most painful situation wen a mother came to know abt her baby from others.. why god u always do tis with my maaneet, but tis time to my maaneet love will win..i love te update so much ks..

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

part - 49

wow lovely emotional update..te way geet asking abt her, and my maan saying everything to her calmly even though hiding a big storm in his heart was lovely emotional..te way te way geet ki pout and her fake gussa, making my maan to see his old geet, maan wat ever , but ur geet is geet who make u dance for her tune was lovely cute emotional..te way mansi ki naughtyness, geet saying she is angel, but geet soon u will see wat ur naughty devil is.. te way my maan murmuring abt his naughty devil was lovely cute.. now maa and beti team up to make my maan ki life hell, bechare my maan..te way geet holding her baby , mansi got her mother affection, now no one can stop geet showering her love for her baby..i love te update so much ks..

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saba

@luv_DD

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Lovely update

Good to see geet z bck

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Geet operation successful. But it also had a huge drawback. Geet lost her memory. Maan dam angry at the turn of events.

Geet opening her eyes n clueless. Liked the way u described her feelings n innocence. Maan patiently calming her down.
Geet is surprised by information given to her by her husband.

Maansi first fighting with Aniee to go to Maan n then Maan ko dhoka dekar Geet ke pass chali gayi. Lol
Geet awed seeing her n the way she is clinging to her.
Maan cribbing to Geet abt Maansi.

Now Maan have to check on his anger as Geet is new to it.

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