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Posted: 11 years ago
vicks yaara love you soo soo much for taking time for me
to fulfill my stupid wish

sparkle bahut kush hai aaj off to type will be back with update

@ all keep guessing what will be the name 😆😉

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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



when i finish reading the last update...

my waiting chaloo hotha hain for the next one😆

new name??? bolo kya kya...

see the page no.. deary... update time


just guess using ur brain 😛 new name haa 😉

yes at afternoon pakka
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

vicks yaara love you soo soo much for taking time for me

to fulfill my stupid wish

sparkle bahut kush hai aaj off to type will be back with update

@ all keep guessing what will be the name 😆😉

sparkle

love u tooo pooji ab jaldi se update le kar aa
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Posted: 11 years ago



9 Maanu's milky girl/ geetu 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Mannu keeping new name for geetu..😆 chalti phirti disaster may be..😛


haha nice guess😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss

pooji mai tho ye b soch rhi hu k ye possessive maanu geetu ko wapas uske ghar jaane dega k nai...😛


bilkul nahi 😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago


A*B/M*C*D*E*F*G

*A* Boy/Maanu* Can* Do* Everything* For* Girl/geetu


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*A* Boy/Maanu* Can* Do* Everything* For* Girl/geetu





Maan's family

Maan 7 years old

Maan's dad Amar

Maan's mom Lakshmi

Maan's dadimaa Savitridevi


Geet family

Geet 3 years old

Geet's dad mohinder

Geet's mom Rano

Mohinder's bro Sukhwinder

Mohinder's Babhi Sukanya

Mohinder's mom Niranjala Devi
Hope all things are cleared now and geet is three years means she is kid don't know anything same with maan but little mature with like his age boys


Thnnks for loving this story gals sparkle bahut kush hai not for amount of likes but for amount of comments
trust me they are real fun for me






In this update I haven't used names as I have already typed it
So from next will use names

9 Maanu's milky girl/ geetu 😆

(this update is for my vrinda22 my milky girl 😛)


"Geet may I help you" asked dadi looking at geet who is struggling to eat the cake. "I will help my geetu" said maan sitting in between them.

Dadi gave space to him smiling at her over possessive grandson.

Within seconds half portion was completed and geet spoiled her dress along with maan and dadi also. "Geetu tu kya kardiya" said maan checking his dress. "Aley maanu lukho" said geet started cleaning his shirt with her messy hands. Maan given up at last for his thufan.
With their baby talks and not stop masthi not to forget geet not stop chatter they happily ate the cake feeding each other celebrating their meeting.
At HM


When we felt happiness is in our hands all we have to do is just enjoying the moment. But for some times it may not be possible as someone will be there to crash our happiness. Same applied for rano and mohinder they were very happy for the great evening they had with their new found friends.


Both entered with hand in hand smiling like new couple with mohinder teasing looks rano blushing face. Ones they were inside the haveli brij's mom is the first one to open her mouth pounced at rano




"oh welcome to you rano I hope you have great evening today" said brij's mom sukanya with circasam oozing out in her words. She is already fuming within with geet's issue rano being not in home she did lot of house hold works adding to her annoyance.

Rano got startled with her sudden outburst hides behind mohinder dipping her head low.

Family members are also there all only giving disapproving looks to both like they did some crime. "Babhi we are in fields only and I think this is not that much late" defended mohinder stepping before her.


Sukanya backed away making annoying face "I given permission to her to go for fields now leave it they are back right" mohinder maa Niranjala Devi said supporting rano.



"Maa you given permission to her to go for fields not to meet anyone secretly right" said Brij's dad Sukhwinder confusing all.


Sukanya glanced at her husband raising her eye brows as answer he assured her through is eyes. "What you are talking about" asked darji rising on his toes stood where all were standing.



"Why you are asking me papa ask them directly" answered brij's dad like obedient son. Darji waited for mohinder answer but he stood silent how he can say answer when he don't know what cruel game his brother is playing.


"bezubaan hogaye kyat tum" said darji with anger filled eyes.


"I will say it papa they met that teacher at fields I saw trio there and they were talking something" announced Brij's dad silently smirking evilly in his mind.


Shock was evident on rano and mohinder faces. Mohinder thought he will talk with darji when he is in good mood teacher also giving support to him now. His thoughts were wasted off because of his bro while rano shivering like dry leaf.



"What you are thinking mohinder that you can fool your own father do anything without his consent also. I already said no to this then why you met her. "Commanded darji glaring at both.



"Ji mafkejiye but she came there to meet us and he don't have any intensions to disobey your orders also" said rano meekly standing beside mohinder.


Mohinder was surprised at first but he is indeed happy for her it is first time she is answering without any panic in her voice. Darji looked away hiding his shocked state "where is geet rano" asked geet's GM who is missing with her parents.

"Maa she is with Khurana's they take her with them" said mohinder darji instantly glanced at his direction to know more as he is waiting for this only. The topic of both meeting teacher flew off from darji's brain. Brij's dad cursed his mom for coming in between his plan. When he is coming back from other village he accidently saw their meeting he thought he will use this in his favor but all his plan flopped off because Khurana's mentioning.


Rano waited for darji's shout but to her dismay he is so calm and asked "How she can sleep without her mother lets go we will bring her back".


Mohinder heart swelled with happiness as his papa caring for geet but he don't know what his dad planning in his brain. "Nahi papa they said they will send her back with guards don't worry" assured mohinder disappointing darji. Darji felt disappointed he is eager to meet them but nodded his head. All left to their respective rooms finishing their food.


At KM


Laks and amar entered in to maan's room after they got freshen up the sight makes laks laugh out loud. Dadi, maan and geet faces were covered with cream and there dresses also looking so messy. Amar glared at laks making her mouth shut and glanced at three kids. Trio looked at him with doe shaped eyes dadi licking her lips while geet licking her fingers one by one. Maan as usual glaring at both while checking his dress from top to bottom.


The mattress and bed the whole place covered with cake laks laughed out loud again watching the sight. "It's not funny ok" said Amar to laks looking at all.


"Mrs.Khurana may I know what is this" commanded Amar locking his hands on his chest.

"Badi aaye muje datnekeliye huh" muttered dadi making geet chuckle.

Amar glared at geet he is about to say something when maan interfered "geetu kuch nahi kiya dadi ne kiya" said maan defending his friend. Dadi mouth fell open with his words laks chuckled silently annoying dadi.


"Oy hello Mr.Khurana apni manmani yaha nahi chalegi dare to say a word to my maa ok" said laks jumping in between. Amar ignored her tried to say something to maan but this time geet pounced on him "Maanu mat dato maanu achi" said geet hugging maan by his waist with her tiny hands. She got to know only one thing amar is going to scold her friend she is defending him.


Amar looked at four in disbelief he wants to bang his head somewhere now. "Kaha fas gaya re amar tu" thought Amar chuckled at his state.

"Raghu..." Shouted amar for care taker taking out his annoyance. Geet got scared for his high voice snuggled close to maan hiding her face maan reciprocated her hug.


"Sir I am here only I will handle it" said CT Raghu who is standing at door steps only. Raghu witnessed all the events he is grinning like idiot at Amar.


Dadi laughed for his condition laks and amar also joined with her. "Geetu kya hua" all heard maan asking geet in her ears. Geet said nothing stayed in same position maan stared at his parents for help.


"Kya hua humari tufan ko" asked amar sitting on floor beside maan and geet laks also joined with him. Geet stiffened a bit listening to amar's voice she got hell scared with his high pitch voice.

"Maanu ye chilla geetu dargaya" said geet staring at maan after few minutes. Maan smiled at her warmly her face is looking so tensed with scaring expressions.


"Nai geetu papa mazak kar raha hai ask him if you want" said maan making her face at his dad. First geet denied but when laks also said same she glanced at amar with slow motion.


"See he don't have any horns right so he is not bad haina geetu" said laks looking at amar who in turn glared at her. Geet touched amar face with her tiny palms checked him for few seconds.

"Aahh" winced geet when amar tried to bite her finger when she tried to open his mouth with her palms. Amar winked at her and geet again did the same amar also copied his previous act. "Booth nahi hai Ammu ach hai" said geet in her babyish language. Laks highfied with geet for calling him with Ammu name.


Taking geet fully in his lap amar tickled her but geet laughed more when he touched her tiny waist. Giving meaningful look to laks he continued to tickle her on waist. In all these they failed to notice someone fuming there.

It is none other than maan but dadi sensed it so played her cards. "I think something is burning here" commented dadi making amar and laks to look at her. Dadi eyed both to look at maan they chuckled for his baby tomato red face.

"Geet come we should get changed now" said maan dragging her with him possessively. Laks also followed them to help both kids.

"Maanu ye bahut achi hai" brimmed geet with happy face checking her new clothes. Laks tied the night dress knots as it is maan's size. Maan smiled looking at her happy face his friend looking like pink doll in his night dress.


"I hope they won't think offend for this also" asked laks slowly to dadi maa. Geet needed to change of clothes but they don't have anything rather than maan's. Laks know darji well because of temple incident she is hesitant now.
"Just forget that just think about it how maan agreed to give his clothes to her me wondering" said dadi brushing her thoughts aside about Handa's.

"Why not maa she is special friend of junior khurana right" said amar who entered the room after finishing his official call.

"We should agree something is there in geetu and between them also" said dadi looking at both kids who are busy in jumping on bed smiling big.


"Now come on both of you have your dinner" announced amar taking both in his arms. Kids chuckled and kissed him on his cheeks. Geet makes a face when all sat on dining table for dinner while maan also did the same.

"Maa I think she won't eat food she will eat air haina geetu" asked laks thumping on sofa beside dadi after about half an hour failed attempts of feeding geet. Geet grinned at her without any option she left that task. "Maa give her milk then" suggested maan making all shocked.
"Are you alright maan" asked dadi checking maan's fore head. Maan given annoyed look at her "ha adi said many times his sis used to drink milk rather than eating food" cleared maan watching all giving him alien looks.


"Sorry babaji I thought maan became good boy no not at all he and milk?" muttered laks repenting even thinking he will drink milk rather than that black coffee.


"chalo meri thufan" said laks taking geet in her arms maan also followed them. He wants his friend to play with him so she must need energy right.

"Maa" said pocking laks shoulder with empty milk glass sitting on kitchen post. Laks looked at her who is busy in chopping something by standing right beside geet to protect her from falling down. "Wow you are done already aur kuch dedu kya" asked laks pinching her nose geet nodded her head for yes.


"Geet you are drinking milk without any complains and see you are spoiling your dress also" said maan pointing the milk strains on her dress. Laks filled the small tea glass again and handled to her in blink of second geet emptied that also. Laks thought she won't drink milk so she given small tea glass size only.


She poured milk third time and this time geet drank half and left away remaining. "I think it is full haina geet" asked laks placing her hand on geet's small stomach. Geet nodded feeling full laks kissed her fore head affectionately. She all ways wanted to have girl watching geet with them her heart swelled with over flow emotions on her.
"Teri naam geet nahi milky" announced maan sat beside geet pulled her cheeks hardly. Geet rubbed her both cheeks as it is paining for his hard pinch.


"Milky? Why" asked laks raising her eye brows.

"Maan see she is drinking how much milk only cat can drink like that" said maan while chuckling.

"Then it should be Milky girl means milky geetu" what say maan asked laks thinking for some time.

Maan grinned at laks and nodded and teased geet saying "Milky geetu milky Girl".

(Milky girl vrinda22 it is purely un intensional 🤣 for you 😉)

"Maan geet should leave now both of you come down" shouted amar from down stairs as it is going to be 9 pm. Maan nodded his head for no sitting in same position who is busy in playing with his geetu.


"Maan see its quite late already let her go now" pleaded laks trying to make him understand. "Nahi maa plz don't send her" pleaded maan making cry baby face melting laks heart.


"Maan she is kid na she won't be able to sleep without her mom" said dadi who entered along with amar. Geet all the while watching all of them one by one not understanding what is going on. "Maan do what we are saying ok" said Amar bit sternly.


Taking geet in his arms makes his way out but geet started sobbing shocking amar. "Maanu..." sobbed geet in amar arms stretching her hand towards maan. Geet is in play mood she thought all disturbing her play by taking her away from her maanu.


"Papa see geetu don't want to go now plz let her be here na" pleaded maan with sad tone. Thinking for some time amar let it go much to laks happiness.

"Yes tell me when you are planning to send geet back" asked mohinder after picking the land line. Amar hesitated but asked

"Maan and geet want to with each other here only for tonight please agree for it"

"Arey amar its ok and I too know how much they loved each other so don't worry send her tomorrow morning" said mohinder. After chatting some time both bid bye to each other.


Mohinder failed notice Brij's mom sukanya who is standing there fuming.


"I said to you right do something and see today those khurana's are giving attention to that geet only" said sukanya fuming within.

"Don't make me angry more my plan was failed already I have to think something now" said annoyed sukany'a hubby. He thought this relevation will turn out to be a big issue at end darji will order to close geet's issue for ever. Nothing happened like he thought it is adding fuel to his anger.


With nonsense fight both slept facing away from each other.





"Muje neend nahi ayegi uske bina kya karu ji" rano sweetly complained to mohinder making him chuckle.

"Rano ji only for one night and ha if you need comfort I can give that to you" answered mohinder with teasing look.

"aap bhi na chodo ye sab Khurana's are really so sweet haina and I hope they will help us in geet's school issue even" said rano lied behind mohinder.

"When lakshmi called me bro I felt like I got some treasure rano I really hope they will be with us forever with geet even" answered feeling emotional with all events.


"Milky sleep like good girl ok" ordered maan watching geet tossing on bed for every second. "Maan you too sleep now" said dadi covering them with duvet. Amar and laks left kids with dadi as per her wish so its dadi task to make them sleep.


"Nahi maanu kaani" asked geet making puppy face. First maan didn't get her words but when dadi explained then he got it.

"arey budhu kani nahi kahani" corrected maan pulling her cheeks again.

"Ha kani kani" shouted geet in excitement hugging maan close to her. Dadi placed her hand above them covering maan in her hand.


"Uff maanu" geet jumped up as she is lying between them.

"Ok I won't keep my hand now lie down meri thufan" said dadi glaring at geet maan chuckled for this.


"Kani maanu" remained geet lying beside maan facing him smiling big.
"Arey geetu I don't know kani" confessed maan but geet face fell down so he instantly added "ok for geetu sab kuch". Dadi grinned at both and winked at maan she knows he don't know any stories.


"Geetu..." maan called her stressing each word thinking deeply.


"One village and there is one girl" said maan grinning at geet with excited tone.

Dadi muffled her laugh for his starting phrase.

"Geetu ladki ki nam" said maan after brief pause. "They met and became friends" completed with big grin.


When geet didn't given reply to him maan glanced at her and saw her sleeping sound fully. Maan hugged his friend tightly feeling so happy for meeting her in no time slept peacefully due to tiredness of journey.




Ok gals I want long long comment for this update if not for get the update huh 😳

Sparkle will go with maanu and geetu we will play 😛( pray and play as well)

And maanu will say kani to me along with geetu sparkle will sleep 😆😉


So give me long comments

Plz plz plz making puppy face


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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for late commenting
loved the update so much
both maaneet are adorable
all are feeling happy to see maaneet's friendship
khurana's taken geet to their mansion saying that they will drop her at her home after some time
maan brought cake for celebrating their meet
maan is possesive about his friend he wants to feed geet...both feeding each other and geet messed up their cloths with cake
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
when will you update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: envi

when will you update dear


sorry krish 😆 net dancing here thats why delay

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