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*A* Boy/Maanu* Can* Do* Everything* For* Girl/geetu
90 likes sparkle dancing on her feet 😆
ek kissy from maanu and geetu to all 😉
celebration time now
and as gift for our real maan Gurmeet chaudhary birthday
"Happy birthday Gurmeet no matter what you are the one who given maan to me.
pic credits to milky girl
i really love you as maan hope you will get more success
and be away from that chudali plz
8 The Celebration
(Vicks choyy for delay here you go kush raho meri jaani 😉)
and today my Gulabi aka DrRosebirthday do wish her
Happy birthday gulabi for you
"Now what they will do" asked dadi watching both maaneet standing in same position from few minutes. All were curious for their next move making all of them fell for them maan kissed geet's forehead showing his love and affection to her.
"Hayee maar dala" whispered laks snacking her hands around Amar arms which he reciprocated happily. Dadi coughed to gain their attention as they were getting lost in their own world. "kisi ka nazar na lage in dono ko" said Rano taking off evil eyes from both of them..
Maan's lips still lingered on geet's forehead all looked puzzled at both maaneet as geet also not complaining stood there giggling brightly. "Arey puttar kya hua?" asked Rano kneeled down in front maaneet. She is surprised and shocked for maan's act being village girl she is not used of any kind of these acts and that too for girl from boy. As per mohinder's words she let them do what they wanted what she wants is her gudia happiness.
Maaneet glanced at Rano still standing in same position making all chuckle with their act. "Maa papa ab chodu kya or I have to kiss more time?" asked maan searching for his parents view carrying on with his kissy. Amar glared at him while laks looked away blushing with red hue covered on her cheeks. First no one get what he is asking watching their reaction all get his question. Rano felt embarrassed looked at Mohinder who winked at her with naughty glint. Rano checked her surroundings with consciousness signed in relief but Vidya saw their silent romance smiled silently.
Dadi want to beat her son black and blue god knows how many times she told them not to kiss laks in front of maan. "maa it's just kiss on head nothing much ok" defended Amar himself looking at dadi maa you are gone look.
"Maan badmash just shut up ok" chided laks while covering his mouth with her hands when maan opened his mouth to say something breaking maaneet kissy. Both frowned at this "Maa you said right to show our love we will kiss and dadaji also yahi bataya" said maan with confused frown. Amar signed in relief thought "thank god I haven't spoiled maan."
"Aur geetu meri friend haina so I can kiss her per muje nahi patha how long" said maan with most adorable look. All busted in laughter making maan angry for laughing at him.
"Maanu ko hash mat" said Geet coming in front of maan placing her tiny hands on her hips showing her small small eyes. Maan giggled from back placed his hands on geet's neck like hugging her from back. "Oops my sherni got angry all of you chu raho ab" said Dadi giving knowing looks to maan.
Geet smiled at dadi warmly willingly went to dadi arms. Dadi smirked at maan's facial expressions winked at maan adding oil to his angry. "Geetu meri hai muje dedo" commanded maan standing in front of dadi with crossed arms with annoying look.
Remaining all enjoying their fight grinning like kids openly. "Nahi tho kya karegi tu maanu" said dadi and continued "Oops sorry Junior Khurana sahib". Geet looked at dadi at maan not getting what they are talking specially that word "Junior Khurana".
"Call me whatever you want give geetu to me" said maan like order but it felt more of plead. Laks pleaded with her eyes to give geet to him as she knows he is highly possessive for his geetu. Dadi literally dance on her feet for her success smirking at maan left geet behind him.
Maan instantly hugged geet showing his how possessive he is for his friend. Geet giggled feeling ticklish when maan hand touched her waist. Maan tickled her more making her laugh like manic. Amar eyes popped out when geet smiled shyly looking at maan.
"I am sure I will get heart attack today" commented Amar looking at geet shy smile and with the way both maaneet showing their love on both of them. "Maanu Jun..Khu kaun" asked geet pocking at maan's shoulder as he is busy in glaring at dadi. "What" shouted maan listening geet way of spelling his name.
Boy failed to notice geet is all ways calling him with maanu name only. To add to his misery she is calling him with weird name splicing his pride name. All the while dadi laughing at maan's face enjoying her gala time.
"Nai its maan geetu and that is not any jun.. khu it is junior khurana ok" said maan trying to make her understand his name. First geet stared maan like she is watching some alien then said giggling "Maanu achi hai Jun khu nahi". Vidya laughed high gaining Khurana's attention and all left both of them knowing they won't stop their fight.
"Sir you didn't inform about your arrival also" asked mohinder making them sit on cot. Rano making sure they are comfortable or not she knows they are rich people strangely there no glint of uncomfortableness. "You see how happy they were it's a surprise for them" said Amar pointing at maaneet. They all got engrossed in their talks while maaneet enjoying their new found play about maan's name.
"You are Amar Khurana right Khurana's heir" asked Vidya after introduction of her with Khurana's. Amar nodded his head saying yes "I have some important thing to talk with you all will meet at your place on other day it is ok with you sir" asked Vidya praying to get approval from their side. "Sure we will meet soon take the address from driver" said Dadi smiling at Vidya humbleness.
"Sir where are you staying now" asked Mohinder after vidya left from there forgetting she said she wants to talk with him. "Maa lets go now" said Amar without answering his question making mohinder confused at his sudden change in behavior. "Ammu wait I will talk with him"said laks smiling at his fake angry tone.
"Bhaisab he said to you many times don't call him as sir if you call him like that he won't talk with you now. Just think about it bhaisab no one can get this opportunity you know he is like tiger at office but at outside he is completely opposite" said Laks looking at Amar with love. When the word "Bhaisab slipped from laks lips mohinder felt like he got some golden treasure. Rano also not less both fell for there down to earth nature.
Mohinder nodded his head acceptance he felt loss of words at that very moment with over flowing emotions. "Now give him one friendly hug go son" whispered dadi in mohinder ears. "Do remember he is big nautanki" said Laks watching amar looking at them from corner of his eyes.
Mohinder hesitated to hug him but laks and dadi pushed him front Rano also smiled looking at him with moisted eyes. Without wasting another second Amar locked mohinder in friendly hug. Mohinder corner of eyes burned with happiness while Dadi joined in group hug with laks and Rano.
"We don't know why god makes us meet like this but our kids were the main reason for our meeting. Like there pure friendship I want our friendship also to bloom like them" said Amar confessing his heart feelings. He don't know why but he can feel the connection to his heart with these two persons. Moreover he is fed up with fake smile fake friendships of his business life he wants someone true by himself.
"Ok bahut hogaya ye sab emotional drama I am starving now let's go home rano" said laks making puppy face. Amar rolled his eyes giving look "You deserve it" laks simply ignored his taunt.
"aap shab ro kyu" asked Geet who came running to them maan following behind her. All smiled warmly at both kids the reason of their meeting the happiness they are cherishing in their hearts."Kuch nahi baba chalo we will go home it is already getting late" said dadi kissing both kids cheeks in affection.
"Nai maanu Jhu.. Khu kyu" asked geet making an irritated face. Maan frowned at her but poor boy is helpless as his geetu is not leaving that topic. "You know geetu he won't give this golden opportunity to call him as maanu you are so lucky" said Amar stressing lucky word more. Rano admired there boding in her house she cont even look at her husband's face here this couple enjoying their life like free birds.
"Ok whatever" said maan shrugging his arms as he knows his family won't leave him. "We are staying at Khurana mansion only I have already ordered to set all things there hope it is done by now" said Amar when mohinder again asked them about their staying.
"If you want anything just inform me I will arrange all things" said mohinder while all makes their way to road. "Oh I for get to ask you. Geetu how is your fever now" asked maan with concerned voice. All chuckled at this glance back where both maaneet walking with baby steps rano fallowing them.
"Don't worry maan she is fine now. You know the day you called her at that time only her fever flew away" said rano making maan grin big.
"Let's go geetu we will go to home and then will show you many things which I brought for you" said maan griping geet's hands in his palm when dadi tried to take her in his arms.
"Maa papa come fast" shouted maan after climbing up in car tried to help geet but his attempts failed miserably.
"Geet stop where are you going we should go to our home now. It is very late now" said rano stopping geet before she entered in car. "Dada ji dategi geetu ko" said geet with horrified expressions. Maan makes a cry baby face Amar assured him guard will leave her after some time. "Haa geetu tum ajavo meri sath daravo mat teri maanu haina" said maan placing his arm around her in assurance. Dadi felt like she is listening some un wanted thing as she heard maan saying maanu by himself. Maan ignored her look completely.
Maaneet sat in middle of back seat got engrossed in their baby talk while laks and dadi sat on both ends as protective shield.
"geetu see this our photos from temple" said maan showing her pics. Geet jumped in joy maan also felt happy they got lost in there pics. "Maanu ye" said geet giggling showing him pic where she is lying on him.
"Yep the chalti pirthi disaster geetu" commented maan poor girl didn't get his words grinned at him showing her happiness for meeting him. "Maa you know many word rather than your age don't make fun of her" taunted dadi peeping in between them.
"Maanu mat dato" said geet hugging maan possessively maan showed his tongue at dadi. "Ye lo I am scolding him for her but she is supporting him. Kya din aaya mera" said dadi dramatically.
"Take a break with your fight we reached the home" announced Amar before he stepped down from car. Dadi maa face lightens up after watching the home after ages many memories played in back of her mind. "Maa come down now" said laks coming on her side opening door for her. Maaneet with the help of Amar stepped down from car geet started roaming here and there in garden making maan to follow her.
"I still remember how much happy your dad was when we came here after our marriage to spend time away from all his tensions his business." Said dadi standing in front of house. Laks can feel her attachment with this house it is not looking that much modern nor rich compared to Delhi mansion but the feel of love lingered in every corner.
"Geet slow down you will fell down" said maan trying to stop his thufan. Geet is no where listening to his voice "maanu pakalo muje" said geet running carelessly.
Both stopped after some time panting heavily laks called them as care taker doing aarthi to them."iski kya jaroorat hai" asked amar as cook came with aarathi tali. "Beta let them do it you both came here first time after maan so it is necessary" said dadi making Amar shut his mouth.
"Maa geetu" remained maan about her also. Laks nodded her head "how can I forget her maan. "laks said to maan and turned to care taker said smiling warmly at him."do one thing do aarthi for all us".
Putting sindhoor on their heads CT did aarthi dadi asked both laks and amar to enter same time with right leg. Both silently obeyed her orders while maan also copied his dad's act. Taking his geetu's hand in his maan whispered in her ears "Geet put your right leg along with me ok".Geet obeyed his orders both maaneet entered in to the house by hand in hand. "She is mohinder's daughter right both kids looking so cute together" said CT admiring there cute act. Dadi smiled at him maan went away taking geet with him ordering servant to brought his luggage.
"madam ji I think you guys are tired go and get freshen up I will arrange for dinner" said CT showing rooms to all.
"Geetu for you it is very tasty" said maan placing box in front of her. Geet grabbed box from him but maan didn't given fully to her. "Geetu it will get spoiled let me help you" said maan opened box and kept the cake on table.
Geet eyes showed her happiness that was cake which is having chocolate icing giving extradinary look.
Geet mouth watered with the look itself "mereliye" asked geet not believing her ears. She didn't get any gift in her life but her friend giving something to her she felt so happy. Poor kid don't know how to express it kissed maan on his cheeks showing her happiness. The very moment dadi entered the room given teasing look to maan but maan didn't get the meaning.
"Geetu let start eating I am hungry" said maan asked dadi to give them. It'a maans plan he want to celebrate there meeting like that and he dont know what gift he can give so his heart thought to gift her his favorite cake as celebration of there reunion .
"Geet may I help you" asked dadi looking at geet who is struggling to eat the cake. "I will help my geetu" said maan sitting in between them. Dadi gave space to him smiling at her over possessive grandson.
withing seconds half portion was completed and geet spoiled her dress along with maan and dadi also. "Geetu tu kya kardiya" said maan checking his dress. "Aley maanu lukho" said geet started cleaning his shirt with her messy hands. Maan given up at last for his thufan.
With their baby talks and not stop masthi not to forget geet not stop chatter they happily ate the cake feeding each other celebrating their meeting.
Precap:
will maanu leave his geetu now 😆😉
Vidya meeting Khurana's more maaneet masthi.
hope you all enjoyed this part as well
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