THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 103

Originally posted by: mayyo

Reading the first part of this chapter, the silent and promising romance, the thought which swept through my mind - and brought a gloom over me - was that this was nearing to the end. The moment had arrived when Maan's wish of years was near fulfilment, when they both knew they belonged together. And even though I was happy that it had come to this, I could not help but feel like I should stop reading now in an effort to prolong the story for myself.
Awww, I am glad that you didn't do that. I must say you have a lot of discipline if you can do that. I generally cannot wait at all.
The following part of this chapter changed the mood completely, though! 😃

I literally let out an embarrassed guffaw at Maan's dream and his coordinated actions! Just a few days back, I re-read the chapter where he began dreaming such stuff about her after that holi they played together and today's actions of his left me laughing ke uski poll aakhir kaar khul gayi! 🤣 I do want Geet to know it's been years rather than a few days (oh he was so cute when he said that! 😆) since he had been doing all of *that* to her in his dreams! I want to see how she reacts then. 😆

That? yeh kya hota hai... writer mahodaya kuch specific tarah se describe karo😆

That checklist ( especially the second and third "arsenal") was too good! 😳
But tai tai phiss, Maan babu! You'll have to invent a new way to get the doe in your clutches so you can unleash your Maan-ness on her! 😆
Weird word dictionary hu main, but I think it was understood by all.
By the way, all black always works. Not only on Geet. 😳

Poor Nakul! No actually, not poor Nakul. He's playing the role of being Maan's nemesis very well! So what if he gets yelled at. He comes back with an even better strategy, namely shadowing Maan, to enter the lion's den and be eaten! 🤣

So so loved it, Avi! Thanks so much for updating! 🤗