THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 100

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Posted: 11 years ago
Reading the first part of this chapter, the silent and promising romance, the thought which swept through my mind - and brought a gloom over me - was that this was nearing to the end. The moment had arrived when Maan's wish of years was near fulfilment, when they both knew they belonged together. And even though I was happy that it had come to this, I could not help but feel like I should stop reading now in an effort to prolong the story for myself.

The following part of this chapter changed the mood completely, though! 😃

I literally let out an embarrassed guffaw at Maan's dream and his coordinated actions! Just a few days back, I re-read the chapter where he began dreaming such stuff about her after that holi they played together and today's actions of his left me laughing ke uski poll aakhir kaar khul gayi! 🤣 I do want Geet to know it's been years rather than a few days (oh he was so cute when he said that! 😆) since he had been doing all of *that* to her in his dreams! I want to see how she reacts then. 😆

That checklist ( especially the second and third "arsenal") was too good! 😳
But tai tai phiss, Maan babu! You'll have to invent a new way to get the doe in your clutches so you can unleash your Maan-ness on her! 😆

By the way, all black always works. Not only on Geet. 😳

Poor Nakul! No actually, not poor Nakul. He's playing the role of being Maan's nemesis very well! So what if he gets yelled at. He comes back with an even better strategy, namely shadowing Maan, to enter the lion's den and be eaten! 🤣

So so loved it, Avi! Thanks so much for updating! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too good. Thank you for updating.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
They spend an amazing evening at Taj then a quiet romantic hug in the pent house and fall asleep in each others arms dreaming about each other. oops its not dream but their suppressed desire. Geet angry on Maan for his naughtiness. Maan decides to make Geet loose her good girl aura but his luck runs out first Nakul flops his seduction plan and then Geet does not talk to him and also is not home for lunch.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
they are so comfortable with each other ...
Maan's dream turned to reality but made amistake in saying so
geet blaming him so sad she is also involved...
now her turn to return back
thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
😛 😉
Love it. Wow Maan trying so hard to get Geet's attention. Wonder what Maan is upto now to get her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avi,
Your each update is better than previous one so I'm out of words!👏
Sher ko finally Bambi ka silent treatment mil raha hai!
Looking foward to seeing Maan's "MAAN-NESS"!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a lovely update
omg their contentment to be with each other and feeling each other without words as they know so much each other that words r not necessary
omg poor maan
geel blamed him all nd giving silent treatment. the woman's old trick. they feel same but will never voice it and same geet is doing. even she responded him and she was awake but poor maan is the one who got blamed for😆😆😆😆😆😆 or upper se usi to silent treatment

ohhh I am soo loving this sher maan singh khurana and his miss doe seduction mission😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
even after all the check he did not get to see her😆😆😆😆😆
avi not fair hain. apne munde se itna kaam karva ke phir bhi use inaam nahin mila🤣🤣


and here comes nakul with vow, not to leave maan sir at all and be there before he need anything😆😆😆😆 arey nakul bhiya sir ko madam chaahiyee or kuch nahin😉😉😉😉😉



wonder now what will maan do and how geet is going to save her.

omg she is thinking only by not looking at his eyes she'll be fine😳😳😳😳😳
arey Maan singh Khurana is on mission. u will not be able to escape now geet😆😆😆😆

thanks for pm avi
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Posted: 11 years ago
i m not able to read update😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanku so much for the access😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a ton for the pm. When I saw that I had a messsage, I just wished it would be a locket update and voila, it was.
Lovely update.
The silence after they come back from taj was golden. They do not need any more words to convey their feelings. Their eyes does all the talking. Both dream about each other, but one accepts it and the other is too shy to do so. Well, years of preachings of good behaviour can't be undone in a few moments, unless of course you completely trust the person. And since Geet has full trust on Maan she will break the barrier, if not today then tomorrow. Well, who can resist our hero.

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