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Posted: 11 years ago


goodnight bachi
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Part 22

Geet was discharged the very day in evening and geet's dadi gayatri wanted to take her back to Mumbai. Dadima saw the devastated look of her own grandson and requested gayatri to let geet rest in khurana mansion for a day or two as she was still weak and travelling would just not do any good at the moment.

Maan mostly stayed quiet as he saw the things taking a turnaround in front of his, the very hospital which snatched his wife his daughter once snatched away his geet too, and again he is helpless, devastated and in pain. He sat in the corner; his gaze was just fixed on her trying to take in the woman who sat on bed in the hospital gown.

She looked like his geet did, she had same chocolate brown eyes but they didn't shine like his geet's did, they didn't have that happiness and innocence that fluttered in his geet's orbs. She has the same beauty of his geet, but it was tainted with confusion and a feeling of suffocation. She doesn't like hospitals just like his geet used too, the fact actually made his heart beat again but then her being so comfortable with others just threw out every happiness.

His geet was only his, her smile, her tear, her everything was just his, she never cared about anyone other than him... but this girl, nah she cant be his geet at all and he just doesn't want to smudge the memories of his geet with this girl, it would be an insult for her.

"mr khurana I hope you don't mind of me staying at your mansion... you had already done so much and I don't want to add on additional burden" geet said when she felt him looking at her. He didn't even realized that she said anything to him, if it would have been his geet, she would have just shouted maanu and ordered him what she wanted... she considered him everything and felt her right on him.

"maan geetakshi kuch keh rhi hai, aap kha khoye hye hai??" dadima nudged him in worry seeing him so lost. She remembered how he was crying for her when doctor told about her serious condition and now he is as cold as a stone... she just didn't understand what went so wrong.

Maan's reverie broke as he looked at "the girl" sitting in front of him in confusion. Geetakshi again repeated her words to him while he simply nodded and said "you are always invited to khurana mansion, you had been there for two months and surely had become a part of it" saying so he just left from there while geet just kept looking at him trying to understand the depth of his words.

All the servants in the mansion were secretly ordered to not speak a single thing about the past months in front of anyone; the moments were private and weren't supposed to be known by anyone at handas. She was settled in a room at ground floor, maan totally denied her entrance in the room where his geet stayed.

Geetakshi was also bowled by the elegance and glory of the mansion she was staying. The servants, the dcor, it was all so palatial, that took her breath away. She still couldn't digest that she stayed at such a lavish place when she was helpless and ignorant. She even noticed that mr khurana didn't seem much happy with her presence, does she appear as a burden to him, she wondered.

It was dining table they were sitting and waiting for maan to arrive. Tomorrow morning geet was to leave to Mumbai. Even the mystery of her accident was unsolved for her and she wanted to clear her mind so that she could remember the last few weeks before her accident. All she had heard from gayatri that she got missing two weeks before her accident, how she reached delhi from Mumbai is still a mystery.

They waited and waited but maan just didn't come down. Geet and gayatri felt uncomfortable with the way maan was behaving, it was all so ill-mannered behaviour when you have guest at home. "ahh I think maan phir se apne office ke kaam me lag gye honge, aap dono start kijiye I will go and bring him down"

"maan ye kya laga rakha hai apne" dadima chided as she saw him standing in guest room where geet stayed before near the window. Maan just stayed emotionless as he kept looking outside at the clear sky. "maan aap sun rhe hai hum kya bol rhe hai.. wha neeche sab apka wait kar rhe hai aur aap yha khade hai??"

He looked at her once and then kept looking away. "maan please aap kuch bolte kyu nhi... kya chal rha hai apke dimag me hum kuch samajh nhi pa rhe... hme to laga aap geetakshi ko pasand karte hai..." maan gave dadima a cold look as he glared at her... "main nhi janta kisi geetakshi ko... wo geetakshi nit hi wo geet thi dadima" he said in a cold strict baritone... "ha mai pyaar karta hu use.. beintehaa pyaar!!! mai apni geet se beinteha pyaar karta hu aur karta rhunga... koi geetakshi geet ki jagah nhi le sakti"

Dadima just looked at him dumbfounded; his demeanour was scaring her now. He had already been through a lot and now this, all this was just making her blood cold. "maan geetakshi hi apki geet hai" dadima said trying to make him understand but he doesn't even glanced at her and kept looking out.

Dadima somehow made some lie to make handas understand about maan's absence but her own heart was very restless. She just wanted her son's happiness and today nakul told her clearly what sacrifices maan made to take care of geet, he had gone to limits to just make her smile and if geetakshi left she doesn't even know how she will make maan understand this time.

It was early morning when dadima heard some loud voice coming from guest room... she knew it was maan who was shouting on someone. She was thankful that none from handas had come outside their rooms or it would have created a drama today. She immediately went in his room to see him shouting on nakul who was standing scared in front of him.

"ye kya ho rha ahi yha.. maan aap chilla kyu rhe the??" dadima asked him. Maan looked at dadima in anger and shouted, "this man tried to touch my geet's things. How dare he??? Khabardaar jo kisi ne bhi is room ki ek cheez ko bhi hath lagaya... that would be the last day of your job in this mansion" nakul immediately left away fearing the consequences.

"maan he was just cleaning things, ye kyu chilla rhe the aap uspe??"

"he was touching my geet's things" he again repeated and went on the bed, again making it the way it was before. "ye kya pagalpana hai maan.. agar itna pyaar karte hai to rok kyu ni lete use.. bta kyu nhi dete??" said dadima with tears in her eyes, only she knew how heartbroken she was feeling with seeing all these things. "meri geet khi nhi jar hi, wo to mere sath hi hai, is room me hmesha se!!!" he said and himself left the room.

It was evening and geet was ready to leave. She bid dadima byee and thanked all the staff members for what all they did for her. Her eyes searched for maan to say a final byee but he was nowhere to be seen. "dadima mr khurana kha hai??" geet asked seeing him nowhere in sight.

Dadima knew he must be hiding in his room and surely wont meet her. "bte wo bahar gye hai, kuch khas kaam tha but he wished all the best to you for your future" geet nodded sadly, she just wanted to thank him for the last time but it seems it was not in her luck.

"maan wo log agaye geetakshi ko lene" said savitri khurana as she entered in his room which was completely dark. She opened the lights to see him standing near the window and looking out at nothing in particular.

His eyes were blank, empty, dark as if there is no soul left in his body. "maan aap sun rhe hai hmari baat... geetakshi ja rhi hai" but it felt as if didn't even heard what dadima is saying. She looked at him with tears and said, "use rok lo maan" but he was motionless.

Dadi somewhat knew he won't do that, he was guilty for him acts, or probably hurt because of his fate. She looked at the room which was filled with geetakshi's pictures and things, her toys dresses everything, he won't let anyone even touch them. she left with tears as she thought about her grandchild's fate.

Soon after few minutes, he saw the car pass away from the gates of khurana mansion and he closed his eyes, knowing finally that girl left... thank god she went away otherwise she would have made him mad, his geet was still with him this was geetakshi who left, he knew that.

He moved to his bed, umm sorry theirs, he corrected and laid beside the bunny that was lying flat next to him and kept his hand around it and said, "geet chalo so jao, I know you must be feeling sleepy.. so jao baby" he said cooingly in the ears of that bunny and started patting it softly, sometimes caressing its fur in mid.


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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god neha aaj tune sach much rula diya

yeh maan ko kya hogaya geet ki pyaar ne usse phirse purana wala banadiya and he is not even accepting the fact. still wo wahi khayaal may hai. and he even not allowing anyone to touch geet's belongings.
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG

wat was tat.. is maan geting insane like geet before..

i never thought tat his loved would cross all this limits tat he would be turning insane and talking to himself like tat..
his behaviour is just scaring and did really geet forget everything about her past 2 months..

m speechless with this update and eagerly waiting for next as its just getting interesting now


how ill he stay without his geet or will he lose his stability and be like geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
hurts to see him like this... do something quick pls...
you really know how to make cry 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice sad part..Geet left KM..I think Maan knows she is Geet but he saw different person..I hope Geet come back to KM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
she left ... Maan's behaviour is scary

Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG what a heart wrenching update.
😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am feeling really bad for maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
but feeling very sad fr maan hes broken beyond limits
nd now not even accepting d harsh reality posed on him
didnt liked geet calling him mr khurana all d time
hope she rem him or thy b together soon
do cont soon

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