~||COMPLETED||~4S-INTEZAAR - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

370

Views

40.4k

Users

69

Likes

737

Frequent Posters

pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Nice one.. beautifully written.. abt Geet's pain.. her father's pain.. Geet can't walk..?😲 Why Maan is so cold for Geet..? it's just he has no emotions for her.. Thanx for PM.


No dear
Geet can walk, read it carefully i have written she fall due to weakness
Maan's behavior will be answered
Thanks dear😊

pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Thanks dear😊
pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_



Awesome update ..

Maan seems to be nice, means when he saw geet's tear he left her on their sr & then maybe didnt came close to her to so she dont cry ..

then why is present geet is leaving her father & waiting for maan & why her dad hate maan ..


waiting for nxt part cont. soon ..


Thank u so much 😊
pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

superb start

please update next part soon


Thanks dear😊
pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: preeti.1

superb .y maan left geet

i hoe he will come back soon


Thanks dear😊
pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply superb
loved it.


Thanks dear😳
pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




Maan is so rude...

why he left her...

this story is from 1960 era...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


after long time you are commenting
next update u will get all answer
hope so
thanks dear😊
pixi_nightingal thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#38

shifted to blog made few changes

Edited by pixi_nightingal - 9 years ago
_SnowFlakes_ thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#39


Very emotional & sad update ..

this dowry system & the wish to hv a heir mostly kills the girls bt nobody cares ..ek gayi toh dusri aa jati hai ..

poor geet hw could she ask her father to fullfill her in laws demands when she know that her father cant afford those things bt those monster wont understand ..

they threw her out coz she was nt able to give them heir bt hw did they knw that prblm was in her only ..😡

maan i hate him for being so spineless where he was in her life other then sleeping with her ..

poor geet she waited, waited & waited for him to come bt when he came she closed her eyes for forever ..😭😭

I really want to read nxt part so pls cont. soon waiting for it ..
love2_soma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#40
plz no sad ending...do some justice with geet plz...

painful update...


thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-The Matchmaker’s Mistake-Ch-1-14-(Completed)-23.5.25

The Matchmaker’s Mistake Chapter 1: The Algorithm of Error The scent of cardamom chai, the soft rustle of silk sarees, and the furious...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

5 months ago

MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25. MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25.

Maan Geet: Bhorer Alo – A Love That Stood the Test of Time Prologue Murshidabad, Bengal – 1904 The first time Maan Singh Chaudhury saw her, the...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed

Chapter 1: The book that started it all Maan leaned forward in his seat as the driver slowed down in front of his home. His heart swelled with...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

6 months ago

Short Story ~ Objection, Your Honor! It’s Love ~ Completed

Had this scene flash in my mind a couple of days ago, and I just couldn’t shake it off… It’s nothing big, just a random moment of inspiration...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".