VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
hottt n passionate ud ☺️
hayeee maaneet romance n geet being bold 😳☺️
awww maan want his angel to cme soon to play with her sooo sweet 😊
cont soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

wow what an update
this is indeed the best new year gift
geet being bold, wow, i simply loved it
and you rocked it!
waiting for more
please forgive for late comments
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
amazing update sexy and damn hot loved maaneet moment awesome and karan tricked veer in to meeting him loved the update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
sorry for late cmmnt siri...awesome update dear...maaneet romance loved it...
oye ye veet akele kyu gaya h uss kamine karan se milne...baba re ab agar karan ne veer ko b pakad liya tho jaise usne angad ko pakda hua h...tho kya hoga?????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
congrats for the new thread dear...
awesome part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
sorry sorry for the late response, was travelling 😭😭
oh so veer knew abt karan, whats he going to do, cant wait biting my nails 😛
maan and geet, geet is the bolder one now 😉😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RECAP

Karan glared at him while Veer only smiled at him.Veer was so hurted and he spoke,"Do u know Karan,i thought u will become an gentleman after i made u the member of my gang where there was only love and friendship.I thought u will give us the very same love and friendship which we gave u!But,u...why u went to that way Karan?Was our love and friendship dint liked by u?Why is it Karan that i got failed trying to make u gentleman?Why i failed in that?"Karan turned that side and his words were melting him.Veer continued,"Do u know in what state u were found by me?I saw my image in your eyes!I saw my past in ur eyes on that time!I thought i can make u gentleman just like me...i wanted to save ur life Karan!But why u went to that side?Why u chose darkness?Why u dint come back to light after getting tired of that darkness?When i forcefully threw the light on u then why u chose the darkness?"









Karan was speechless,he dint had any answers to Veer's questions.Veer turned and saw him intently.Karan was in dilemma and his face was showing that when Veer slowly took his gun and kept it on Karan's forehead.Karan turned and saw Veer's smirking face who had a victorious smirk.





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Part 61




Khurana Mansion,



After some hours or so,Maan got up feeling restless and felt a soft body against him.He looked at Geet who was sleeping on him peacefully.There was a cute smile playing on her swollen lips.He dint understand what type of restlessness is this as he's near his love and she's sleeping in his embrace.Seems his restlessness was ringing his sixth sense bell abt something.But he cudnt understand that what is that and he snuggled more to her and closed his eyes.



















Next morning Geet came from the washroom to see her love sleeping peacefully.She admired him as he had slept on his stomach and his hands were around his pillow and was wrapped in the sheet from his bu**.She felt a shiver down her spine seeing the sight.She felt aroused seeing him sleeping fully naked peacefully.His back was full of her nail scratches which made her eyes moist.She came near the bed and slowly slipped inside the blanket and slept on him pressing her soft curves.She was wearing his shirt only.He groaned feeling her soft body and spoke sleepily,"Hmm,Geet!"Geet spoke sweetly,"Good morning jaanu(honey)!"Maan brought her hand which was stroking his torso and kissed her knuckles and said,"Good morning Mishti(sweety)!"













Maan relaxed completely feeling her soft body on him and asked,"Jaan..u r sleeping in odd posture.This is not good for baby!"Geet said cutely,"Baby also needs its papa,so am sleeping like this!Let baby feel its papa!"Maan smiled nodding dismissively while she kissed his back gently.He groaned,"Seems u r not making our baby feel its papa but inviting romance in the air!Jaan dont do it,I will hv difficulty in control when u will be in this mood!"Geet said cutely,"Baby also needs its papa so am making it feel his papa and dont u dare oppose it!"Maan chuckled,"Jaan am not opposing but still this is not good for baby!U r seriously sleeping in odd posture!"Geet dint spoke but bit his back harshly.He groaned and asked angrily,"What r u doing?"Geet dint reply and started kissing his back softly.Maan groaned,"Jaan!"She dint listen to him and kissed his back curves and accidentally pressed her flat tummy to his bare back which made her wince in slight pain.Maan immediately sensed this as he had felt her flat tummy rigid when it came into contact and screamed,"Jaan!"She immediately slipped beside him holding her flat tummy and he said,"Am gonna call Naina!"














But Geet stopped him still holding his back and said,"No am ok!"Maan touched her flat tummy and kissed it several times and snarled at once,"Why dont u understand my words and follow it?What if u had pressed ur tummy more heavily?Arent u happy becoming mother?I was telling u from first that u r sleeping in odd posture but u dint understand me!"Geet cried,"Am sorry!"Maan shouted angrily,"Shut up!Just shut up Geet!In future u r not gonna sleep in this posture!Do u understand!"Geet nodded meekly still crying and he declared,"We are going to see Naina!"Geet was abt to protest but his one glare made her mouth shut.







Both Maaneet entered Veer's house,but...






The house was in messy state as if someone has been kidnapped the inhabitants of the house and took away.Geet was shocked to see the house like that and asked scared,"Maan,what happened here?"Maan himself was shocked and thought,"So that restlessness was for Veer and Naina and i dint understand it!"He eagerly ran around to get some clue when he got a golden locket there.It was the very same locket which he had presented Karan on his 21st birthday.Maan squeezed the locket in his fist and saw around to get torn dress of Naina.Maan panicked,"Did he...?"His throat went dry seeing the messy state and he turned to see Geet seeing the place in fear.She asked him meekly,"Maan,What happened to the place and where is Naina?"Maan closed his eyes and opened it being calm and spoke gently to her,"Jaan,dont worry i will find her.Till then u stay in KM only.I will phone up our family doctor.She comes and examines u in KM!Let's go jaan!"

















Geet was puzzled seeing his calmness and asked shockingly,"Maan,what r u saying,Veerji is not seen here and his home is in this state and then even Naina bhabhi is also not seen and u r acting so normally!"Maan said softly,"Jaan,no need to get worried.Veer is in army and he will have lots of enemy and dont worry may be this will be his plan of trying to be in undercover.So dont worry,lets go from here before someone sees us!"Geet was puzzled seeing him acting so normally.Geet dint move from there when Maan lifted her in his arms and immediately ran outside when Veer's house exploded catching fire.Maaneet were shocked seeing the home blazing in fire.Immediately Geet fainted.Somewhere in an distance some one was seeing Maan cursing under breath for flopping their plan.





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Note-Sorry guys for not giving Veer and Karan's point.Will surely give it in next part but this part needed important!So sochte rahiyega ki Veer,Karan aur Naina ka kya huva



PART 61




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Belated Happy New Year!




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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Awesome veer and naina are missing now what maan is going to do
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
asum update..
Love maaneet moments..

Naina missing...

Update soon

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