VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago
post in the new thread dear...

FF Daily Updates Thread 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
i missed out many parts of this ff due to trip and i dont hsave recently time to start gain so at this moment i am not following his ff when i will free from all tensions i will read from start sorry for not following this ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow amazing twist.
Maan's mom spy. Even pammi.
Veer on mission.
So its known that maaneet maybe in danger.
Very interesting twist.

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 71
awesome dear...
interesting...
this is getting more mysterious...
hope Maan and Geet are safe...
cont soon dear...
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RECAP

Veer saw the name as Sahana Malhotra and next information that is married to Samarth Singh Khurana.Father's name is Major Amar Malhotra and mother's name Mrinalini Malhotra.Veer then remembered his convo with Colonel who had not given information abt her and had smirked at him with a twinkle in his eyes and spoke to search for himself.Now he got to know who was it.

Veer gave a smile seeing Sahana and said,"Am not gonna let Shatru destroy ur family Captain Malhotra urf Sahana Singh Khurana!"

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Part 72

Scream!!!!!!!!!

After few hours, police had piled up near an house investigating something.Veer stood examining a dead body which was brutally murdered! Veer looked at the dead body Pitily. He didn't know who's the culprit but seeing the state of dead body he can say that the culprit is mentally ill. One of the policemen came and gave the Post Mortem report which said that the victim was first tortured and raped brutally. She was raped till her internal organs were damaged.Her Kidney,her sex organs and Uterus were brutally smashed by a rod and that rod was stuffed more inside her which was the result her Large Intestine got damaged totally. Her Vagina was tore and she was left to be more tortured in her throat.The culprit was so eager that he stuffed his manhood inside her mouth and shot his come that doctor got traces of Sperms inside her mouth. Veer was nostalgic hearing this but resisted and unfortunately she was the one of the spy who got training in Army under Major Shatru.Most important part was that she was also against Major Shatru who had given her statement abt him during the trial.Veer vowed that he not gonna let anything happen to other girls who gave statements against Major Shatru on that trial.From that trial only Major Shatru was sentenced to 14 yrs of prison and his ranking was taken by Army.Today all the witnesses who gave their verdict against Major Shatru are dying in brutal way.

In KM,Veer entered the living room to get the whispers and high pitched giggles of his children with Geet and Naina.Geet was running behind his younger son holding a glass of Milk while Naina was running behind his elder son holding the glass of Milk.


Geet said softly,"Rishi beta,drink milk,don't be naughty!"


Veer chuckled when Rishi cutely pouted wrinkling his nose.


While Naina glared at Roshan holding the milk and shouting,"Roshan,if u don't drink milk then am not gonna let u play Cricket!"


Veer nodded dismissively seeing her temper and her mood swings.Veer came forward when his two children banged their head to his knee.


His two children looked up and held his legs and said in unison,"Papa,i don't want to drink the milk!"


Naina glared at him,"Take care of ur children now,am going to take rest!Lets go Geet!"


Naina dragged Geet giving the glasses of Milk to Veer.Geet looked at Veer longingly while he nodded dismissively and spoke softly to his children,"Son,don't be stubborn and trouble ur mother and aunt!"


Rishi pouted while Veer lifted him in his arms and held Roshan's hand and walked towards the sofa.Veer made drink up their milk by Roshan and Rishi by distracting them with interesting stories and they slept in his lap listening to his stories.


Veer carried them to their bedroom and made them sleep warmly in their beds and walked back to Naina's and his room.Naina who was lying pretended to be asleep turning that side.

Veer saw that and sat beside her and said,"Why r u irritated with children Naina?U never was when u got carried Roshan inside!"


Naina dint speak and turned away and snored loudly resigning the conversation.Veer sighed and got up and walked towards the main mansion when he saw the locked door open.Veer got curious and entered inside and saw Sahana looking longingly towards her Army uniform.


Veer spoke after some time making Sahana startled,"U miss ur Army life!"


Sahana turned and tried to pretend that she don't know anything and asked,"What r u talking about?And whose uniform is this?Is this urs,which Nakul had kept it here?"


Veer said sternly,"Captain,if this was my uniform then i would never tell Nakul to keep it here in this dusty room and secondly my name is Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat not Captain Sahana Malhotra as in that uniform's badge!"


Sahana immediately hid the uniform and said,"What r u talking about?"


And she walked towards the door to exit when Veer spoke,"Dont hide anything from me Captain,i know abt u fully and abt Major Shatru too!"


Sahana turned with shocked expression and asked,"How do u know abt my past?"


Veer took a deep breath and spoke,"I know everything abt u Captain!I know everything abt Major Shatru's trial!What was the role of u in that trial?What u got as a prize after that trial..after Major Shatru was sentenced to the prison for 14 years!"


Sahana glared at him and spoke,"I don't know what u know abt me and my past but for now its better u not talk abt it in front of my son.I don't want his happiness shadowed with my painful past which destroyed my everything.Now am trying to move on and its better u stop digging or stop talking abt it!Maan thinks u as his best friend so don't destroy his happiness by telling abt my past!"


Veer dint speak while Sahana crossed the door but stopped and turned and said,"I beg u!"


And she walked from there.But Veer said stopping her,"Halt Captain,be ready to face ur past becoz though i wont reveal it becoz i love my friend but this life is not gonna leave u like that.Be ready to face ur past!"

Sahana turned and gave him a puzzled look.Veer walked back to his home while Maan walked towards his room carrying Geet in his arms.They had dinner and Geet was exhausted due to today's activities with Roshan and Rishi and was cutely sleeping on Maan's shoulder when he was carrying her towards their room.

Maan asked softly,"Jaan,its been busy day!"Geet cutely nodded brushing her soft lips to his neck.

He groaned and said,"I want to eat u today!"

Geet cutely nodded brushing her soft lips once again.He grinned ear to ear seeing her cutely nodding and not giving any attention to his words.

Maan asked lovingly,"Tired?"

Geet nodded still burying her face inside his neck and tempting him more.

Maan let her go on the ground but she tripped cant able to stand and he caught her waist.

Concern etched his face and he asked,"What happened?"

He looked towards her feet which had swelling and asked,"What happened to ur feet jaan?"

Geet dint answer and slowly sat on the bed holding her 5th month baby bump.

Geet spoke,"Nothing Maan,its only normal cramp!"

Maan glared at her and said,"Why don't u take care of urself?"

Geet leaned to the bed rest and gave a cute smile batting her eye lashes and said,"U r there to look after then why i need to worry!"

Maan's anger vanished into thin air seeing her cute dimple smile and sighed.He went and brought Zandu Balm and started smearing the get on her feet.Geet smiled looking at her husband dutifully taking care.She felt relief feeling his supple strong fingers on her soft feet and sighed.
Maan asked,"Feeling good?"

Geet nodded.Maan smiled and climbed the bed and snaked his arms around her soft waist and splayed his palm on her baby bump and pecked her forehead.Geet snuggled on his heart.Maan started making patterns on her baby bump and then on her breasts making her take sharp breath.
Geet panted,"What r u doing Mr.Khurana?"

Maan said with dark stare,"I want u now!"

Geet asked stopping him,"U were the one who was running away!Now why r u tempting me!"

Maan spoke,"Geet,doctor said to me to stay away till u reach the trimester..am mean have physical contact after ur 3 months of pregnancy and i have been away from u more time and now i cant control it.I want to love u raw jaan!"

That's it her lips covered his and started kissing savagely.Her cheeks flushed feeling his fingers move over her breasts and tempting those nipples from her dress.She bit his chin and cheek and her hands travelled inside his shirt unbuttoning it.He groaned and pushed her softly on the bed and hovered over her not giving weight on her baby bump.He pecked her lips and undressed her slowly.She moaned feeling his fingers and warm lips on her skin.

He lied on the bed and pulled her over him and straddled her on his stomach and said,"Take me!"

Geet dint need any invitation as she had lowered her softness on his hardness.He groaned feeling her soft tissues and slowly rammed his manhood circling his hips.She moaned and he freed her hairs slowly.His hands moving over her soft swollen heavy breasts which were dangling along with the rhythm.Geet got tired after that position and he noticed it and fastened the pace.Geet moaned feeling it and at once she came following with him screaming her name.

After few minutes Geet caught her breath and saw her position as she was still sitting on his stomach and he was still inside her.Geet slowly lifted her hips and slipped beside her.

He tugged them inside the blanket and pecked her lips and forehead and said,"Now sleep on jaan!"

Geet snuggled to his chest when he wrapped behind her like silk.His arms covered her upper body and his legs entwined her legs protectively.His palms splayed protectively on baby bump.He felt the baby kick and she opened her eyes and spoke,"I think she likes s**!"

Maan chuckled and said shamelessly,"Hmm,like her mother!"

Geet pouted and moved to keep distance but he pulled her and pinned her back to his front and said,"And her dada like that behaviour of her mumma when they're alone!"

Geet blushed furiously hearing it and he pulled her more towards him and his palm comfortably splayed on her baby bump.He kissed her naked back and said,"Sleep on jaan,Good Night!"

Geet said meekly,"Good Night!"And snuggled to him more.

Precap-Same

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the part
Continue soon
Loved veer n sahan convo n not to forget naina's mood swings too
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Posted: 10 years ago
veer has also warned sahana to confront about his apst
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update! Well written! Geet taking care of the kids! passionate Maaneet ! Maan teasing Geet! update soon
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wow lovely cute shocking update...te way veer ki gussa seeing a girl died raped was lovely emotional..geet and naina running behind te kids and seeing ver thy left to him was lovely..veer know abt suhanna ki act and talking with and she begging was lovely..opps my maaneet and they never ending passion was lovely cute..i love te update
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb
veer recognize sahana n told her to be ready to face her past
maaneet moments r 😉

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