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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




HELLO MONA... MJ 4 U😉




😆😆

itna naach kyu raha hai
Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mera lappi slow ho raha hai .. i'm restarting it so thore time baad reply karungi.. bhagna mat
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites




😆😆

itna naach kyu raha hai



sarwa guna sampanna jo aane waali hain uske paas... mj ko kush hona hi chahiye😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

mera lappi slow ho raha hai .. i'm restarting it so thore time baad reply karungi.. bhagna mat



nahi bhaaggoongi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



sarwa guna sampanna jo aane waali hain uske paas... mj ko kush hona hi chahiye😉

Saravgun sampan,,,,he he,,,,😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
restart karne main kithna time lagtha hain??tweety animated gif
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Posted: 11 years ago

I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 83



Maan walked to another side and opened the door when found her seat empty. He turned around, looked everywhere but Geet was not be found. "Geet!!!" he called her name. "This girl will make me mad for sure!!" He runs to look for her. "Geet we'll get late lets come here!!!"

"I'll not!!!"

Her voice flew in breeze. In the whiteness of moonlight Maan tried to see her shadow but denseness of trees abrupt his view. He became worried. This place may not be safe though they were alone but it was not certain. What if she falls in any danger? "Geet where are you?" Restlessly he shouted in deserted woodland.

"Gee.."

Suddenly a hand pulled him backward and he fell in Geet arms and she started laughing "Afraid Maan?" she choked in between.

"Are you gone mad Geet" He yelled in startle and straightened up. "And what the hell you're doing here?" it was a unilluminated area where she had been hiding. "What if would've found any snake or something. Let's go and I shouldn't hear your refusal this time" he grabbed her wrist and started dragging out in anger but she was no way ready to accept defeat. "I'll not go Maan please" She comes forward. She puffed her face and fluttered her eyes but Maan remained his stern face though he was enjoying her mischief. Maan shook head.

***

Gazab ka hai din
Soncho zara,
Ye diwanapan dekho zara
Tum ho akele, hum bhi akele, maza aa raha hai

Kasam se"Kasam se

***

"Maan please. I promise only thirty minutes" She pinched her throat.

Maan denied.

"Okay, fifteen minutes"

No"

"Ten Minutes"

He nodded no.

"Five minutes. Now it's not that much late Maan don't be so stubborn"

Maan laughed. "Geet, what would you do that wishing to stay here.. in this forest" He freed her hand.

"Maan didn't you look it's so lovely here. And that moon.." She walked looking up. Her eyes shone in moonlight that attracted Maan to her and he followed. He hugged her from back. "What's in this Moon, hm" his voice husked in silent night.

"It's so beautiful. Isn't it?"

"No.."

"No?" she looked over her shoulder and her cheek brushed to his lips. Her skin turned into blush.

"The Moon in my arms in more beautiful" Maan whispered enjoying the touch of her smooth skin. "Haven't you seen yourself in mirror Geet? That Moon will envy with you if he comes on earth someday" He turned her and watched into his eyes. The hazels were sheeny with blend of love and that was for him. He kissed on her forehead and then both eyes and gave soft peak on lips. His eyes denied to leave watching her and a soft smile touched on her lips.

***

Dekh lo
Hum ko kareeb say,
Aaj hum
Mile hain naseeb say

Ye pal fir kahaa
Aaur ye manjil fir kahaa

***

"Five minutes over" he grinned. He begun pulling her toward car without further wait. "Maan why can't you enjoy this beautiful environment. See! It looks so romantic and you.. Why you have to carry anger on your nose ever time?" she spoke frustratingly in her flow that didn't don't see transformation of his mood.

"Romantic..hm "

She stopped at once when felt herself be freed from his hold and Maan crossed arms across chest and stood watching her naughtily. "So what kind of romance do you find in this environment Geet?" He walked closer and forced Geet to simulate back. She chosen to remain silent otherwise her mouth would have uttered something more dangerous. She shook head in nervousness.

"Why you shaking your head? I want to see Romance in this environment Angel" She hit back to a tree trunk and he to her. He placed hands at either sides on her head on tree and brought mouth to her lips level, "Show me" he whispered.

Geet heart had started running in marathon. She felt the getting lack of her conscious and her brain forgot to think intellectual. Her eyes gazed his mouth which was parting to speak and was eating the gap between hers.

"What.. " she breathed.

Maan lifted eyes to look at her face which was red and her eyes seemed half shut in sleep. He loved his affection over her senses. He loved her standing so close to him that he could smell in her breathing and he loved this environment' which was provoking romance between them. Moon had turned the entire surround into royal blue and her white skin was glowing into it like pearl. Her white Dupatta was ready to fall and kiss the ground and she was totally unaware from this occurrence.

***

Kyaa kahoo
Meraa jo haal hai,
Raat din tumhaaraa khayaal hai

Fir bhi jaane jaan, main kahaan aur tum kahaan

***

"Why you don't want to leave this place Geet?" he mouthed air on her face to let fly few dangling curls and slips hands onto her waist. He kept his forehead on to hers sheltering her face from the Moon. Geet smiled. She slips arms around his neck and moved closer that her chest could feel his heartbeats. He was restless too, she wondered. "Tell Geet" Maan drew her into his body so intimately that their shadow could be appeared as one. He kissed on her face softly. "What's here that you forgot even your home, hm?"

"You're not there"

Her abrupt reply stimulated Maan. He watched her and she to him and her eyes, was glistening in honesty and in intense emotion. "It's not only you who can't live without me, but I also can't breathe without you Maan' she trapped his face between her palms and smiled. "I love you so much" she bent and touched his lips with her mouth.



Precap : "Geet let me go. where are you taking me ?'

"To talk to Baba" She dragged him inside.


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


mein first aayi re... dhumka tho lagaooo...trumpets clip art

this update was just wow...

perfect song selction...

"You're not there" ... loved this line... dil chura liya is ne😉

precap... hayee... kya hone waala hain???




Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update padh ke maza aa gaya...kasam se.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update. Loved the moments between Maan and Geet where despite knowing that they should leave, both want to stay and bask in their moments of togetherness. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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