NEW SS- Barsaat ki raat ***COMPLETE*** - Page 2

Chap---5

He realized his folly, glad he did and he haven't seen her as to not show her his pain..aww so sweet

They met again, cool and loved that lovely moment of them where he was claiming her heart

Chap----6

Loved the you wrote her denying the relation yet being with him and he asking the reason yet showing her she can't go away from him. At the same time, getting angry for her such harsh words

Chap---7

It really was an emotional one. The pain and the depth of love beautifully depicted. They wanting to live rest of the life with each other with their love blessing them with hope of happiness in those moments was nice.

Chap---8

OMG these lines...so true for their condition, so gracefully woven by you

Mohabbte ne bhi kabhi kisi ko abaad kiya..

Jab bhi kiya hai bas barbaad hi kiya hai !!!!

Phoolo ke khridaar tu bhout hai bazaar mai..

kaatio ko ka kharidaar pheli baar mila hai !!!!

She lost her mother, but how is it that her fault and now her health and how could those people be so inhuman that they can't pay for her treatment, at least not even for her hunger, but glad to see that love she getting him her Barsaati yaraa (Rain Lover ;))...yet those last 4 lines shows the extent of her belief on her fate, so sad...

Chap---9

It was so lovable to see him claiming her as his and not able to see his love so down, but then She being so happy to have become a Suhagan and at the same time sad for his fate to have her as his love/life...still respecting his love and him and accepting him as her Humsafar, wonderful

She being jealous of even the silence taking attention of him...aww that was adorable and then claiming him as her lover was cool. Their cute bickering held me to a great extent.

She wanting him to be strong when her existence is seized...omg, should I be sad to know their love's fate or happy for their souls peace...such a love

Chap-10

There is nothing I could say about this part...The first and the last poem of this update says it all, One of the best lines of the entire story I feel, and that too in such a manner where I cannot give a thought to think something else then their sweet love making them one joyfully.

Chap---11

Happy Ending

It was really so emotional and choking to see them trying to strong for each other though knowing completely that they can't take the pain to see their life in pain and helpless.

But seems like all clouds cleared to shower sunshine in their wrecking souls and made them be together forever with giving her a means to survive and then the same clouds covered the sun and rained to show their happiness...wowwiieee what a beautiful way to solace their souls...making me drown in the following lines/words

Lipat gayi mai unse ...

Maano kushi se hi marr jao gii...

Abb saari Zindgi unke saath jo bitao gi...

Aaj phir barsaat hu padi...

Mai muskura uthi..

Jab din mai raat hu gayi !!!!!

"Kudha se apna jawab diya hai.. barsaat ki raat mai hii tujhse wapas

kiya ha"

Kuch aisa meri pyaar ki baat hui thi..

Barsaat ki raat mai...

Mohabbte unke saath hui thi !!!!!!

Depicting the lovers happiness so amazingly beautiful...

Sad Ending

There is no way in the world that I would give a look to the sad ending was my first thought as just thinking about it only I was feeling so very sad and emotional...but then when u said about the epilogue I was curious to know whats in store and would say though I am sad to see them separate forever, but then they united through their souls and he living with a hope of meeting her in God's abode and when it will rain again...just wowww...And the epi was a sweet one, he living with those sweet memories with his son who is in a way shadow of her...kudos to u

Thanks for this awesome SS😃

The imp thing is loved the way u kept the relation of rain in every important phase of their life, their meet, their confession of pain or say revelations, and their union...well that was all the title suggests and it was defo a bliss to get what it suggested

Hoping to get more of this sort of work from you...A very, very great effort, thanks for introducing me to this talent of yours making me more crazy and greedy for your writing/work

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

YE WAQT 2 NAHI HAI

haa i am writing english translation

this is seprate poem fiction but

first thought not to post it on IF but now posted it😛

tune last week HINdi ka poem fiction nahi read kiya

mohi group mai when you said hindi is not your cup of tea

lovely...something different...maine kabhi bhi iss tarah ke style ki writing forum mein nahi pari...loved it

Please post English version for rest of the parts.

awesum...
plz send me ur fb group name...