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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 63 Part 5

Happy Birthday Mari

Oh dear...what a start...

First of all hose shayari's were beautiful...good job Nauri...

Maan's passion...his expression of love burst out...it was indeed like match lighting the fire...and Geet got overwhelmed with her inexperience...actually you captured their first expression to this sudden intimacy ery well...nave Geet confused and longing Maan hurt...

Finally as calm returned, they both realised that she has to move a little forward and he has to take things a little slow. Tara's words were so true and Geet is so nave...I still remember that mosquito discussion...LOL

And then Mr Khurana called his Mishty and what a turn of handle it was...dil ki baat bhi Karli and Mishty bhi mil gayi...but efore I go there...I just loved how Geet said "main kho jaati hoon...you take care"...it was so sweet and importantly showed how much trust she has on him

What expression of love mingled with passion...I could imagine Geet in that saree and Maan with her...they both so lost in their love...awesome just awesome part...

CID daadima back...hmmm...that was so wonderful...teasing and Daadima's last word - earring on bed...

Megha's engagement was beautiful...the moment when she took blessings from chnadan and poonam was so emotional and offcourse two deewanas beig handles by their deewanis and Pari for Teji...just perfect...sach mein "Daadima tussi great ho"

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Posted: 11 years ago
about chapter 63-pt5
it was passionate.loved dadima.she is on another mission.lovely update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved maaneet moments
both r not able to control their feelings
u captured their emotions very well

loved dadi kya entry mari he n
the way she observed all things was just superb

megha kabir got engaged..
now who is next?
Cause all couples r so much in love and r ready to get married...
and the way u described both khurana bros in corner it was cute and funny...
Dadi is all ready with her new mission..
A very well balanced update
loved reading it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳Wooo... somebody turn on the fan! What a hot update😳😳
Just brilliant loved it. Maan unable to resist any longer, all the emotions he has been bottling up over the years has now erupted and uncontrollable. It was very romantic and passionate 😳 poor Geet frightened and unable to understand her reactions to Maans passion.
It's lovely how in between all this Tara has a gentling effect on Geet and explains how Maan must be feeling and asks her not to hurt him as he loves her so very much.
Poor Dev is in the doghouse for teasing Tara. The taking and giving of blessings between Poonam Chandan Megha and Kabir was wonderful. Sigh...it was beautifully written and conveyed what all mothers want to wish their daughters when they get married.👏😊
CID Dadi hahaha..finally caught her Maan out and won the battle of wits😆
Waiting for the next update. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg... It was amazing... Maaneet scenes were so adorable and passionate ❤️ how much they care for eachother and the understanding they share is judt 👍🏼 loved the bedroom part 😆 CID Daadi made Dusht Singh Khurana to say She is the best ... Maan-Geet loving more n more
megha-Kabir ❤️ finally engaged and now waiting for mega's reaction to the truth about her parents...
Teji - Pari The new couple in making and Dadi in action again 😆 loved it loved it loved it
Thanku so much for sending PM ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much, Lakshmi! I love those flowers! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan ang Geets moments were awesome.
Geet getting scaree due to Maans closeness but then Maan realizing
his mistake was good.
Daadi was super cool. She found out that something
was amiss.
poonam and chandan seeing their daughter getting engagee
and their blessings for her is nice.
Both brothers trying to convince their betterhalf
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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update😳

uff maan geet ko dara diya😆
maan again lost in geet seeing her in sari
dadi ka dectective nazar se koi nahi bacch saktha
poor maan plan fail hogaya dadi ko sathane ka
ulta daadi ne phasa diya maan ko😛
dadi is so cute😃
loved it
eargely waiting for next part
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Thank you so much, Lakshmi! I love those flowers! 😃


cake bhi yummy hai😃

although iske hisab se you are only six

so no access for you😆
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
^Oh yes, it is, definitely! 😃

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