THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Edited comment on pg 81

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vidyaniru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#572

Wow, that was so beautiful! The choice of song, and how you weaved the song into the update was mind-blowing. Every line of the song felt so much part of the update.

As always, Dadima is the best! Loved their bond. Finally the engagement of Megha. Could feel Chandan and Poonam's emotions. They know but still cannot show it. The blessings just poured from her heart.

When you brought in Teji being alone, I was wondering which girl is left! Had totally forgotten about Pari. The high-class Pari and Cannadda-returned Tejji will be interesting!

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ritzy09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

Chapter 63 Part 4

Daadima did not realise but how Geet's love has changed Maan...he was so happy and joking with Daadi...it was so cute...

Next part for endearing...just beautiful. Thanks a lot Avi because I really love such moments...

Whole Dev-Poonam-Chandan scene was penned down beautifully...I am repeating myself but how wonderfully you made him give both Poonam and chandan the reason for live...for being happy...he even managed t pull Tara's leg...I just love this Dev...i really do

And then Adi-Pinky's story getting in place...you picked up such a pratical issue of drinking which is so prevalent in today's world...kudos for such a practical yet tangent thinking...

And then Geet got dose of Maan's excersise...haye...blush blush...waise is innocent jhali ka kya hoga after marriage...Maan toh kha jayega ise...

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Doracake

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Mind Blowing update Avi

Love CID Dadima

Waiting for the proposal

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anum fahim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#575

Nice update..
Em so happy that MU resolve early.. N maan understanding that he overreacted n finally maaneet sharing their thoughts with eacother.. Nobody can stop dadi cid giri n maaneet get caught.. I star still jealous without even knowing the person whom she is jealous of.. Precap is awesome finally the most awaited proposal...
Plzzz update soon..

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fffanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

Quick review

absolutely loved dadi maan scene...dadi ne maan ki vaat laga di
maan hid geet in rge bathroom. ..rofl
he called her their room. Geet once called it their room and now maan did too
both trying to understand the others stand
finally maan babu had to spit his anger and take step towards his mishty
loved how geet shared her doubts and insecurities with tara di
the description of the four couples was awesome
someone is there for teji too...teji ki life mein aayi pari. Dadi to play matchmaker in their love story too. Dadi is well employed. Cidgiri matchmaking etc etc
maan has to display his DD mode once in a while. Dusht danav bane bina usko sukoon nahi milta
update soon. Next comment after exams directly in 2014

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GBR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#577

simply amazing, lovely n wonderful n romantic part

LOVED IT A LOT...

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Lonely.Cat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#578

thank you for such a lovely update

aww maans so romantic

guess geet was a little shell shocked by his closness .LOL

naintara was helpful.

I love dadi and her sherlock homles hat ,not to forget her matching making obsession .

Ooh proposal .Cant wait

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Ann

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Posted: 11 years ago

#579

" loved it " would be an understatement ..

seriously, i don't kno hw to xplain wat ur update did to me ..

u gave every characters equal importance..

lovely ..

maan couldn't outrun dadima .. 😆 .. hw easily she caught him ..

dat too red handed .. 😆 ..

tara as a sister is soo sweet n understanding ..

n nw nxt match maker is on her way .. teji n pari ..

maan geet 's parts were outstanding .. 😃 ..

i loved da way maan trying to steal geet for sometime .. n geet ignoring him .. even dev-tara too .. 😆 ..

wonderful update .. 😃

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#580

really like seriously
man that was waah kya baat hai
haiyye allah ghayal karr diyaa apne
sheesh this is how far it went
well how long would he be able to stop himself
after all his control is bound to snap sooner or later
and thats what happened
now of course geet would be overwhelmed by all this
its all new to her right
and maan knows that too
but of course in his passion filled state he wasnt able to get why she was denying him
its nothing to do with she doesnt trust him but more to do with the way she is
thats why you fell in love with her
this innocence this naivety haiyye aapko deewana karr rahe hain maan
that was just beautiful
when he cooled down he realised what he thought isnt really true
that she does want him but being so naive she doesnt understand it
but thank god she talked to her tara di who explained it to her
and we had that whole scene in their well for now his bedroom
and caught by dadi
you were trying to get one up on her and she managed to fail that man
so funny that was
but all is well with maneet
megha and kabir got engaged
dev tara are doing okay minus dev remark from earlier so bit of tiff there
but what about tara parents
and dadi is hell bent on getting another person their love
this time teji and pari
wait he fell for pari in first glance or what
well that will be something more to look forwards for
haiyye the maneet scenes all of it done so beautifully dear
thanks for the blog link
cheers for pm

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