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We Are Family

PART 1


Dad why does not Mom love us.. did she forget us Dad said a 5 year Armaan to Maan who was lost in his thoughts. Dad answer na Armaan touched Maan who seem to be not listening to his voice but then stopped when the 9 year Mehar came and placed a soft peck on his cheeks.


Na Ammy.. Mom loves us so much you know na. Armaan nodded his head saying No Mom does not love me.. you know I saw Mom today near my school but she did not even see me.. I hate Mom. I hate Mom Di. Armaan cried saying and just pushed Mehar and left for his room. She just kept looking at his retreating back and then turned her eyes towards Maan who was still lost in his thoughts with his laptop open. She sighed knowing tat it was always like this from last one year or so and she being the daughter of Maan and Geet she knew how responsible she had to be. She slowly came and sat touching Maan on his cheek getting him out of his thoughts.


Mom is fine Dad.. she will be back soon... bas thoda time tats it Dad she tried to cheer her father who seem to be losing with each passing day. She was still a child but she knew wat would make her dad smile and she did the same. She softly pulled the laptop and sat on his lap placing soft kisses on his eyes, cheeks and nose just like her mother. So how you feel now Jaanu Maanu.


Maan smiled caressing her hair much better sweetheart. He replied and soon carried their Mehar in his arms and walked towards Armaan. Dad.. Ammy says he saw Mom today near the school.. is it right. She questioned only to see her Dad keeping quite. He is upset Dad.. he thinks Mom does not love him.. I can't see tears in his eyes Dad.. why can't he understand tat she loves us all.. bolo na Dad.


He is still a kid baby.. not a grown up baby like my Sweetheart. Maan said still looking straight. And yeah I know he did see Geet today.. I had got the news from the guards following her... how long will I restrict her movement sweetheart.. ab tho bahut muskil ho raha hain. He tried to tell his daughter how difficult it was for him to have everything back on track. He was all alone looking after the huge business, his only Dadima who had been his support since he was left alone in this world and now his two precious gifts tat his wife his Jaan Geet had given him. He was losing every moment but he had to be strong for them. He had promised tat he would get their Mom back and he would do it.


Hi champ he said seeing a pouting Armaan. His cute expressions always reminded him of his Geet. Why so upset haan. Maan pulled him into his lap as soon as he made Mehar to stand on her feet. Armaan hit Maan and sat back on his bed looking at the big photo of his Mom - Dad tat was hung exactly on the wall behind his bed.


Olle mela bacha itna gussa hain dad se Maan said trying to mimic his Geet who would do the same. Mehar tried to muffle her laughter but seeing Armaan pouting she burst out trying hard to control but soon she was hit with the pillow and thrown on bed with Armaan hitting her with the same pillow. I hate you.. you stupid monkey Di.. Dad.. I hate her.


And why so Maan asked Armaan pulling him off from Mehar. Coz she does not even let me to stay angry...yeh na she is just like Mom.. and I hate her. Armaan pouted complaining while Maan just smiled at him. Yeah I hate her.. you know your Mom too does this with me.. pata nahi kya lagta hain inh dono ko tat we cant stay angry.. chalo when Mom comes back na we will show her wat men's are ok. Armaan beamed with happiness hearing his Dad but soon tat happiness turned into sadness just like his words. But when will Mom be back Dad... you know my friend Sahil says tat Mom will never be back.. she does not love me anymore.. does she really hate me Dad.


Maan wanted to cry and hide himself away from this question. How could he answer his son how could he make him understand tat his Mom can never hate him but she was lost.. she was lost and was away from them. He smiled wiping the tears tat were flowing from his small eyes. Do you think Mom can hate her cutie pie champ? Armaan nodded for a no and Maan smiled answering him back then why do you listen to Sahil.. next time when he says tat na.. tell him tat you are Armaan Maan Singh Khuranna and...


And AMSK knows everything better than anyone.. hain na Dad. Maan smiled hearing him and quickly carried both his cuties downstairs for dinner where his Dadima was waiting for them. She smiled seeing her family but she missed the one who had made this big Mansion into a home. She wiped her tears but Mehar was quick enough to notice and she instantly ran and placed a peck on her cheek. Badi Dadi.. do you want Mom to shout at me seeing you cry... nahi na then chalo lets eat you need to even have medicine. Dadima smiled and quickly served them. Maan fed Armaan like Geet used to do and Dadima only prayed for everything to be normal.


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Did Ammy see her Maan he heard his dadima's voice and turned to see her entering his room. He had made the kids to sleep and he finally tried to catch some work. He just nodded when he heard her ask the same. How long will this go on Maan.. its been more than a year now Maan.. why don't you try to talk to her. He just kept staring at his Dadima as if she was some alien but she was not done. It was high time Maan takes some step now. Don't look at me like tat Maan.. kab tak bache ko jhooti tasli doge haan.. Armaan is missing her and Mehar do you even think about her. She has grown more then her age and I don't want them to lose their childhood coz of some weird fear tat the doctor had instilled inside you..and if you don't do it I will go and tell her everything do you get.


Pagal ho kya aap he said trying to maintain his calm but his Dadima was getting on his nerves now. Since last few days she has been forcing him to do something tat he would never ever do. Maar jayegi woh.. do you get she will die.


Then let her die. He just kept staring at her as if he had never seen her in his entire life. Jee kar bhi kya kar rahi hain.. she is enjoying her life and here you and the kids are dying every second yearning for her... how can I see you three in pain Maan.. haan..kab tak... I wish she could die tat day atleast yeh jhooti umeed tho nahi hoti tat she would be back.. kash..


Dadima he yelled at his dadima hearing those hurtful words from her mouth. How could you Dadima.. aap meri Geet ki baaremein aise kaise soch sakthe hain..how could you. He said breaking down. He fell on his knees and tats when Dadima realized wat she said. She instantly reached to him and hugged him hard saying m sorry beta.. I don't know wat went in me.. but trust me I did not mean it... I cant see them crying Maan.. Ammy he is been crying saying tat he saw Geet today... main aur nahi dekh sakthi Maan... nahi dekh sakthi... mujhe meri Geet wapas chahiye.. kuch bhi karo Maan.. mujhe mere bacho ke chehro pe woh hasi wapas chahiye.. I don't care.. you spend whatever the doctor says... I don't mind hum raaste pea aye but I want Armaan and Mehar to have their mother back..i want my bahu back in her home.. do you get.


Precap: Armaan meeting Geet... and socho ki kya hoga Armaan ka reaction.


NEXT : PART 2


A small SS for one of my reader. I m so sorry tat I forgot the name of the reader and if the reader reads this please do message me so tat I know who is it. I don't know how many parts will this have but most probably I will update this every alternate days with short updates.. Just a simple story of a family who is trying best to get their most important part back in their life.

This SS will be a mixture of all types of emotions guys... and mostly it will be on the two cuties of Maaneet.

Do like and comment.

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Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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the first part of mehar and armaan read karke i was scared for geet bt i knew you wont let anything happen to geet 😆 bharosa di 😆

bt later with maan and dadima's convo i understood something fatal is happening to maan!! iske aage main kuch nahi kahongi coz this is a shock!! kya hua jo geet ko maan ne ghar se bahar kar diya!! what reason did he give her??

dadima said geet is enjoying!! no ways she can never enjoy 😭 i know it 😭

y is maan punishing himself and his children??😭

precap: me too thinking kya hoga di😲

jaldi dedena next part will wait for it di🤢


congo for the new SS🥳
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Awesome story
loved the first part
but still did not understand
has geet lost her memory?
and why did maan tell dadima that she will die
please update soon

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Beautiful start but painful update...
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seems like a emotional rollar coaster story
waiting for next part
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awsooome start
mehar is soo understanding and poor armaan miss geet alots
maan hide his pain from kids
i think geet lost memory
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Originally posted by: abinash079

seems like a emotional rollar coaster story
waiting for next part



i would request you not to read as u judge the story well before its starts
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Congrats for new FF .Interesting concept loved it

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