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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful update.

Geet working with Maan... That's a good news. She feels for Maan. There is some progress.

Armaan can't get enough of Geet. Mehek n Geet relation is yet to develop.

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Posted: 11 years ago
eagerly eagerly eagerly eagerly waiting for the update di lekin main shayad thursday ko padh pawonngi coz at home no net waiting for my net connection at my new house 😭 di I will count seconds for thursday to come taake mere two fav FF padh sakoon di 😭 still eagerly waiting for the update di😭😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 5

Answers to f the queries..

1. Mehar is just 9 years old and when she heard Maan speak about the baby she felt she was cheated by her parents. She knew that her Mom lost her memory or in simple words she forgot them. But Maan knew how attached she was to the baby and the reason for it, I will reveal soon. The moment she heard the truth her small heart and mind just could not think anything as she was told that the baby was alive and was with geet.



2. Mehar is exact copy of Maan.. Understanding and keeping pain to herself. She never ever let anyone know wat she was going through and tats the reason even after knowing her mom was not with them she kept her courage so tat she could be with her dad and Ammy. So definitely when she would find the truth she would be shattered and this is wat happened to her. It was only Geet who would force her to speak and seeing Mehar like this Geet feels the pain. Her motherly instincts are making her restless as somewhere her heart knows wat will happen if Mehar is not taken out from the pain and in this even Maan cant do anything.



3. They had been married at a very young age. Tat is when Geet was around 19 and Maan was 22 years old and please have a bit of patient why they did so. So as per this age Geet had become a mother at the age of 21 and Maan father at the age of 24 or so.



4. I know this update is painful but right now its needed as this will give the way for the story. So pleas bear with this as I wanted to take this twist. Next update will definitely not be any emotional.


5. Any queries and confusions are whole heartily welcomed



6. I don't know how to thank you all for loving this SS. This is the first time where I have taken Maaneet where they have almost crossed age of 30 and are parents to 9 year and 5 year old kids. So please do forgive me if I have done any mistake and you all are welcomed to correct me on same.



PART 5

Geet paced inside Maan's cabin. Babaji I hope everything is fine.. meri bachi ne kuch nahi kiya na she kept murmuring and complaining to babaji. Yeh.. Maan Sir... Why is he taking so much of time haan... ab school koi New York mein tho nahi na... just see the time.. abhi tho lunch break bhi hone wala hain.. But Maan Singh Khuranna isn't back yet... babaji boliye na.. Is everything fine na.. Meri Mehar ne kuch nahi kiya na. She was almost in tears thinking everything that came into her mind. She had been restless the whole night and she was too early for office so that she could meet Maan before he goes to meet Mehar's Principal. But poor soul did not even know that he would be directly going from home and now she was full of tension just staring at the door and pacing in his cabin. She even tried to call his mobile but he did not receive it and later it said unreachable.


Maan Sir she screamed his name as she saw him entering his cabin. For a second he was shocked to hear his name but then it pained to see her all messed state with tears in her eyes. Her khol mixed with her tears and scattered on her face. Where the hell were you she shouted seeing him just staring at her. Do you even know wat time it is haan.. kabse intezaar kra rahi hoon.. koi itna time leta hain kya... woh chodeye.. tell me wat happened why were you called in the school.. Mehar kaisi hain.. and where is she.. wat did she do.. boliye.. meri bachi ne kuch nahi kiya na.. I knew it that the school principal was just mad.. how can she call you for useless thing haan.. jawab dijiye.. Mehar did not do anything na.. boliye why did you take do much of time.. why was your mobile unreachable... answer me wat did the principal say to you about Mehar. Did she really get zero marks in her maths test.. nahi na.. I knew tat she cant get zero her friend was just telling a lie about my baby.. how can she get.. boliye na Maan Sir.. why were you called.. kya hua she just kept talking without a break with tears flowing from her eyes. She was scared and one side she was trying to prove her mind wrong. Wat you have done to her babaji.. meri Geet sab bhoolke bhi nahi bhooli... unknowingly she defends her kids the same way she did.. how long will you trouble her with this.. please get my Geet back.. and now if I tell her wat Mehar is going through and wat the principal told.. I don't know wat will happen to her... I just wish tat my Geet comes back and make our mehar fine.. m just scared tat I may lose this battle and wont be able to save her mehar.. meri Geet mar jaayegi.. you know na.. We had almost lost Mehar once but not anymore Babaji... Please ushe wapas bhej do.. mere bacho ki Maa ko wapas bhej do.


Geet... Geet he tried to calm her down but she just kept murmuring and seeing her getting hyper he just hugged her tight. It was just a meeting Geet.. aur kuch nahi.. Mehar is fine.. she did not do anything.. kuch nahi hua tumari bachi ko. She calmed instantly hearing it and he was surprised that she did not feel his hug but his words registered in her heart. Sachi na.. kuch nahi tha na.. Mehar is fine na... principal ne kuch nahi kaha na.


Nahi baba he broke the hug and wiped the tears that made her look ugly. It was just a meet.. aur kuch nahi. Aur yeh tum.. Do you even know how ugly you look with these tears? He smiled wiping the traces and she pouted. You are making fun of me... yaha meri jaan jaa rahi thi aur aapko.. cheddo she is all fine na.. I knew it... yeh school wale aise hi. She smiled stepping back wiping her face with her dupatta. Aap sach bol rahe hain na she asked again seeing him just staring at her. I hope you are not lying to me. He looked at her and could see the tears once again making their way. It's not true na tat just to make me happy you are saying it's all fine.. sachi na Mehar ne kuch nahi kiya na. She started to cry seeing him just staring at her. Maine kaha na nahi he said getting a bit irritated with her tears. Nahi you are lying.. I know... aap aise kyu dekh rahe ho phir agar kuch nahi hain tho.. Mehar kaha hain.. where is she.. is she not well... is she punished.. bolo.. answer me she broke down again not getting any answer and just his stares. He pulled her back into his arms trying to calm her and mostly him from the fear tat he was going through for Mehar.


Kaha na kuch nahi tha... if you keep on asking same wont I get irritated Geet.. haan..How much you talk.. you know you and Ammy just irritate me with your nonstop talking. He increased the force with which he was hugging her while she just got lost in him. His closeness his heartbeats were creating unknown sensation in her body and she just got lost in the hug moving closer and closer to him. Aise koi karta hain kya...I swear you and Ammy will make me mad one day. Maan just kept talking and talking tat he did not even realize when he started to walk still hugging her. They were so lost that they did not even see the couch behind and Geet just hit her leg and fell down taking him along.


Ssshh he placed his finger on her lips seeing them move. She blinked her eyes as he traced the line of her lips giving her goose bumps. Not a word Geet.. aaj kuch nahi he was getting drowned in her while she just kept looking at him. Her heart paced faster while her hands slowly wrapped around his neck pulling him closer. You talk too much and these lips just don't let me concentrate on my work.. par aaj nahi, today I will teach them something beautiful. His fingers brushed the hair strands tat disturbed his gaze while one hand slowly reached to the side cut of her kurti reaching to her soft skin near the waist. Maan she moaned making him to burst with desire for her. He was away from this closeness and right now her being so close was just not helping him. Say my name again Jaan he whispered into her ear burying his head into her nape it sounds as if m in heaven... just say it again. His lips slowly mouthed wet kisses on her bare visible skin making her to clutch him tight. Koi aa jayega she said trying to defeat her mind by her heart was just asking her to move with the flow. Her hands tightened around pulling him more into her while his fingers stroked her waist slowly grinding him on her petite frame. I want you... I just want you right now he said pressing her down with his weight.


Maan I he looked up hearing his name but his eyes just shut her. sshhh kaha na no words for now he looked into her eyes and then moved them towards her nose and then her lips. He stared at them as his fingers just felt those soft petals once again after like ages. He slowly bends down and places his rough lips on hers. It was a bliss the feel of his lips on hers was just so heaven for her tat she did not just move as she was stilled with it. The heavy flow of emotions took away the sanity. He slowly moved his lips and tongue on hers trying to feel those near him and not getting enough he bit her lower lip gaining an entry into her heavenly mouth...I want to make love to you now Jaan.. I cant hold myself.. I cant.. I l..


Geet he called painfully as he felt the sudden push. He looked at her and he died thousands of deaths seeing her eyes full of tears and shame. He tried to reach her face but stopped hearing her painful sob don't.. paas mat aana. She pushed him with all energy and the moment he was away she tried to run but he was fast to hold her hand. Geet yeh tum..


Don't touch me.. yeh sab her voice choked as she realized wat she did. How close she was and where they were heading. Geet meri baat suno.. its nothing.. he tried to explain but she just struggled to free herself. Chodo mujhe.. leave me... yeh sab paap tha.. m sorry.. nahi karna tha mujhe.. this is not right.. its all shame.. leave me.


Bas he screamed pulling and turning her. Don't you dare say its wrong.. do you get. He shook her by shoulders samajhi tum.. dare you..


Paap tha she pushed him with her little energy do you get..it was all wrong.. how could you... haan.. wat will the world say.. tat m.. chi.. kaise kiya maine yeh.. ek shaadi shuda aadmi se...maine..yaha apne aap ko she looked at him painfully pressing and twisting her lips. He closed his eyes and reached to hold her but she just stepped back saying don't.. sunna aapne don't touch me.. please... yeh sab galat hain.. this is all wrong...I and you.. never.. do you get. She held him by his collar shaking him with the anger and helplessness tat she was going through. Samajhe aap.. you are married.. do bacho ke baap hain.. and this is all shame.. yeh sab galat hain...aapki biwi.. wat will she think... how could you.. how could you do this to me... dur kyu nahi jaate ho.. wat if.. wat if your wife sees us.. kya hota.. wat will go through her if she sees you and me like this.. do you get I don't want to be a home breaker.. nahi bana aapki life mein dusri aurat.


Geet please listen he tried to talk but she just shook him bursting her inner feelings and anger on him. Kya sunnu haan.. yahi ki tat you are enjoying with a bloody assistant who is working with you.. or just coz she is in love with her married boss.. the boss who is a father to two kids... bolo.. kya sunnu main tat I cant control my heart... tat I cant stop it from loving a married man who has a wife at home and loves.. jawab do wat should I hear tat I should sleep with you and be the second women in your life and betray your wife just coz m in love with you.


The whole cabin echoed with a thud sound. Maan looked enraged while his hand in mid air as he realized tat he just slapped his Geet for the very first time. He looked at her and seeing her moving back just broke him from inside. Geet.. suno she stopped him by raising her hand in air. Nahi don't come closer.. don't touch me.. yeh.. I don't.. I cant do it.. its all wrong... I cant break your home.. I cant betray your wife. Samajhi app. She moved closer and held his hand and tried hitting her for her mistake. Hit me... I deserve it.. maine galati ki.. I knew you were married phir bhi pyar kar baithi... maariye mujhe... maarye Maan.. hit me.. I betrayed your kids.. I broke your house... main kaise.. how could I.. aapki biwi.. woh nafrat karegi mujhse.. she wont let me meet Ammy and Mehar.. nahi she wont.. she will take them away..i cant.. maine galati ki...woh kya sochege.. wat if someone tells her..


She will not think anything.. do you get he jerked his hand and held her tight by shoulder screaming at her do you get... she won't think anything. Geet just kept shaking her head for a no but he just blinked his eyes trying to explain her. My wife will never think wrong about you... Sochne ke liye she should be with me...I cant even get her if I want.. woh bahut dur hain humse.. being near too I cant get her.. and you are not the second women in my life.. do you get.. chah ke bhi I can't get her back... she is not with me do you get.


She shook her head no you are telling lie.. maine aapka ghar thod diya... she left you coz of me. Maan closed his eyes. He was helpless, he could not think of anything and just blurted out in anger my wife is dead.. Do you get she is dead and my kids don't have a mother. His heart died the moment he said those words she is dead. She just kept looking at him and next moment she was lying unconscious in his hands making him scared.


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She sat on the couch along with Meera while Yash checked her blood pressure once again. Maan's eyes fixed on her while she refused to even acknowledge him now. It pained him to see how she averted her gaze. Maan he heard Yash call him. She is fine now.


Hmm he said still having his eyes on her. Meera take her home... and ask her to rest. He said walking towards the door getting angry on him. His own words tat his Geet was dead were killing him from inside but stopped hearing her words. I cant Meera.. I have to complete the designs and give it to Sasha. He clenched his fist with her trembling voice. His anger rose to a level where no one could stop Yash keh de tumare patient se tat I don't want any bloody sick employee in my office. Bimar hain so bimar ki tarah pesh aaye... and you he turned to her pointing his finger at her out from my office right now. Meera and Yash just kept looking at them and definitely they could sense tat something was wrong but before Yash could even ask Maan stormed out of his office. Geet just kept looking at the door while her heart and mind troubled her again. She broke into tears hugging Meera he is lying Meera.. woh sab paap tha.. how could I do.. I don't want to cheat his wife... I don't want to be a second woman in his life.. I don't.. main dur jaungi.. I will go away from him... nahi rehna mujhe inke paas.. I cant break his family.. I cant break his marriage. Yash and Meera were shocked to hear and this was definitely not want they had thought. She falling in love with her own husband and thinking tat she was breaking his home was not want they thought and if this continues tat it would have reverse affect on her but wat did Maan say wat lie did he say. Yash just kept thinking on her words.


Precap: Can I call you Mom?

Now guess who asks this question to Geet. Is it Armaan or Mehar.

Do like and comment.



NEXT : PART 6

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so she feels all of that was paap 😔 galat bhi toh nahi soch rahi hai woh 😭 that is what being shown to her till now😭 or she was seeing 😭

maan ke liye bura lag raha hai bohut didu😭 he is suffering so much😭

geet is so much worried for meher this story is getting more and more intresting di jaldi update karo!!

precap i guess its armaan😃
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
day by day i m crazy about this ff.don't end this ff soon like ILWMW
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Posted: 11 years ago
painful update
i think precap is said by meherr
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Posted: 11 years ago
sooo painful update 😭
geet love maan but her mind not accept this relation and maan is deeply hurt by this
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
Feeling bad for geet...
Curious to know now how ll yash handle this situation ..
Interesting precap ...
I think it's mehar ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional one :(
Geet so worried for meher
Maan kissed her!!
N she thought she's cheating his wife
N she break down
Maan said his wife is dead :\
N geet fainted!!!
Chalo geet Bol to dia that she is in love with him :)
Precap I guess meher :|

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