izhaar....pyaar ka. Part 18 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hai ,.. my dearies i am overwhelmed by ur responses thank u all really it is encouraging me a lot with all ur support i will give more and more and this time i will deffinitely try to meet ur expectations.
dearies will u all please send add to buddy list reqest to me because i want to send all of u pms but individually it is difficult me to do it as i dont know much about forms that is why i am asking this if u send request i will accept u in my buddy list and send u pms it is the only way i know if u dont mind please help yaar
and about second update it is almost ready but need time i r 2 days as my daughter hasexamsshe needs system .so please bear withme mean while u sendadd request tobuddy list
thank. u.

And to those who r sending their pms me , guys please excuse me as i am not able to give commt on ur works please guysforgive me and ddontthink am greedy please i do love toread as many as stories on maneet only the thing is i dont have enoughtimeas 2 devils only giveless time onsystem and i dont know otherways that ismy pblm ,.. i will deffinitely give commtsbut slowly so lease cooperate with me. thank.u. dont get angry on me as i love u all .
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Take your time
We will wait...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Update me photoes aa gaye?
Bahut ache dikhte hai!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
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izhaar...pyaar ka.../part-2/pg.no.5/9/12/2013




Still image of Maan and Geet in tv show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
Some clarifications:- Some r asking about that pregnant lady who is she? is she related to Geet?
Guys dont squeez ur brains on that lady ,.. i took this charecter only to create a situation for the meeting of Maneet and to explain the charectar of Geet to Maan. I have no plans to extend this in future.
secondly how this 17 yrs girl just completed her 12th will do delivary to a pregnant lady? I will give explanation in upcoming updates [ even Maan has the same doubt ]
so please stor ur chappals till then
Thirdly is geet pregnant r not?
no,... geet is not pregnant and she is virgin. Her parents marry her a guy who is more like a theif he left her the very next day with all her dowry and the jewels of her family members .there is a custom in their , they have to go to their kuldevatha temple with the new couple after that s.r. takes place. he left her in that marriage night only. o.k. r u clear now?
Part:-2
Maan came out and standing little bit away fr. his car. He throwed his hairs back in pure disgust. wat is hapening to me? yaha mai kya karraha hu? i came here because of dadimaa ,.. and here i have thrown out of my own car ,..and my own car became a labour room now,... He cursed daadimaa "nth time. And this girl,... she is really impossible throwing me out of my car,... ye tho had hogayi,... she is getting in to my nerves. He is thinking like that in his pure rage and disgust but his heart is not allowing him to do anything aganist them.


Gurmeet Chaudhary
Here in the middle of the road the silent way is echoing in that screams and cries of that woman. He feared wat will happen if anyone hears this and think something wrong about him. But he can do nothing in this situation.
After some more cries and lot of effort by that woman she delivered a baby, he heard the cry of the baby. The girl opened the window mirror and called him,.. Sir,.. he came to her.
"First aid box haina aapki gaadi me? she asked
Maan:- ummm,... haa,..
T.g:- Jaldi nikaliye , she ordered him.

Maan:- looked at her awe.
T.G.:-jaldi sir,... she urged him.
Maan opened dash board and took out the box and gave her.
T.G.:- jaldi openkarke mujhe hidroge peraxide and scissors dena, she asked him as she is holding the baby in her hands.
He opend it and took out them and gave them to her. She took them keeping the baby on her lap again closing the mirror.
She cleaned the scissors with it and pour some h.o. on the amblical cord of the baby and cut it with scissors and separeted baby fr. that woman. She again opened the mirror of window and called him,...sir,...
He looked at her like,.now wat,...?
she took her dupatta and wrapped the baby in that and gave it to him.
" hold the baby for sometime" she farwarded it to him.
Maan now hell flabergasted by her demand,.. "what,... me,... ? how can I?
Gurmeet as Maan Singh Khurana
"ljiye sir,...thodi der mujhe kuch kaam hai,.. she again said.
Maan farwarded his hands in hesitation as he never hold a baby that to newly born , who is still full of blood. He never think himself in his worst dreams that one day will come in to his life like this.His hands trembled while holding that baby. He feared that he may loose his hold and drop that baby . he managed himself and stood looking that baby in awe.
After some time she came out of car and said him jaldi gaadi start kariye . they need urgent medical care.
He came out of his trance and looked at her.
She took the baby fr. him and came to the passenger seat. He went to the driver seat and sat into it. She knocked the door he looked at her and opened the door. She hoped in to it carrying the baby in her hands.
The cries of that woman now subsided, but he feared if something hapened to her.
He asked ,is she alright? T.G:- haa,.. but they need immeadiate medical help. Aap gaadi jaldi chalayiye?
Maan speed up the car . He looked at the girl who is looking the baby with smile and contentment on her face.
Drashti Dhami aka Geet
She observed him and said, Ladka" as she felt that he is curious to know the gender of the baby.
Maan:-haa,.. looked like wat is she telling.
She again said,pointing her hazels towards the baby, Ladka hua,...
Maan now understand wat is she telling,and he droved the car with great speed and soon they reached the hospital.
T.G:- jaldi under jake strecther ko bulayiye,... she again ordered him
He looked at her like nothing can be done to her and went inside and bring the stretcher with the help of helpers.

they shifted her on it and took her inside, she fallowed them , after some steps she came back to him,
Thank.u. very much sir,...for every thing. Aaar aap nahi tho pata nahi kya hoga,on this road. Aaj aapne ek nahi do, do,, zindagi bachaya sir, ek maa, aur ek beta. Aapne ek laachar aurat ki zindagi bachaliya sir,.. unhe jine ka waja diya aapne.
Wo ek laachar aurat hai sir,.. unki pati kargil ki jung me margaya. Ab ye baccha inki jine ki sahara hai sir,.. unki ankhonki roshni ,,ye bacha bhi bahut khush naseeb ki hai sir,. ki pyada hothe hi aap jaisa rahamdil aur insaaniath bhara hua insaanse iski mulakaath hue,.. Aap ka naam kyahai sar? Maan startled by her question,... actually he was fully drowned in her as now only he observed her angelic face and especially those dove shaped hazel brown eyes which r speaking volumes to him.
" Maan" he sad , she smiled hearing his name. she looked at the baby and called him" Maan"tumbhi badahoke bilkul inki jaisa rahamdil aur achha insaan banna hoga, logonka madat karna hoga. thik hai.? she asked the baby.
The baby smiled as if he understand wat she told.
Maan flabergasted by that . he totally wondered by her act his name to that baby touched his heart deeply . He left speechless.
Gurmeet as Maan Singh Khurana in GHSP
Humari waje se aap ko bahut late hua hai sir,.. ab aap please jayiye she told him.
Maan came to sences and said,.. umm, and he came to driving seat and sat there and about to start. she came again to him knocking the door. Hel;ooked at her.
She hesitatingly"Aap ki gaadi kharaab hogayi humari wajese,.. aapne bahut haisaan kiya humper aap mujhe aap ki adress aur ph.no. dijiye mai ye repair ka paisa chuka dethi hu.
Maan looked at her iski koi jarurat nahi,... tumhe meri haisaan pehlehi chukadiya..
She looked at him like kab kaise?
Is bachhe ko mera naam dekar, he smiled at her starting the car he said, bye. She also said," bye sir, thank .u. very much sir.
Haa,... ur guess is correct,... she is none other than our princess Geet Handa.

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Edited by anuradha.nandam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
thanx 4r d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Geet gave the baby maan's name...
N maan too is obliged by this :-)
Good going yar ;-)
Continue soon :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
maan is frustrated but couldnt do anything in this situation
geet was the one speaking the whole time
she gave maans name to baby..
loved her care..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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uff thank God that women with baby is just for Maan-Geet introduction...

mujhe tou darr lag raha tha ki kahin woh aurat Geet to nahin...may be she is married again and that is abusive marriage because of her that once broken marriage...

so the girl who was helping lady is Geet and she mesmerized Maan with her sweet talks...Maan bhi saara gussa bhool gaya...

awesome update...

wiating for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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just now read two parts
loved the concept
loved the way maaneet met ..
geet asking for lift as another lady was in labour pain maan gave them lift
but in middle of their way the another women deliverd baby with the help of geet
wow geet named the boy as maan ...maan was speechless at her act
waiting for the next part

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