izhaar....pyaar ka. Part 18

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Nice update

Maan toh khayalo hi khayalo mein shaadi tak pahuch jata hai!

Ab toh dadi ka hi sahara lo maan babu!

Dadi ko maan ki fikar ho rahi hai par usse pata nahi maan ko toh premrog hua hai...

aur usski dawa toh geet hai...jo gaon mein hai...

Geet ki family😡

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mauaa

@mauaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

NICE UPDATE DEAR.. PR KITNA LATE DIYA...

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

awesome update...

vry cruel family of geet...

continue soon

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

oh no.. maaan come soon.. cont soon hun

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Rose_4

@Rose_4

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Awesome update...thanks for the pm 😊

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anuradha.nandam

@anuradha.nandam

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: mauaa
NICE UPDATE DEAR.. PR KITNA LATE DIYA...

shaayad aur late hojayegi ,.. abhi tho mera pura dhyaan mera first ff Essence of Love per hai ,.. eksaal hogaye wo suru karke ,.. kahaani ko aage bhadhana chahthi hu ,.. tumne padi mera ,. pehlaff ,. aaj mujhe shetal ne bathaya tumhari baare me ,.. sunke bahut khush hogayi ,.. tumhare baare me aaj hum dono bahut baath ki ,..skype me ,..

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gunjar

@gunjar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Awesome ff...
i have read it in a go
i have just loved the story...
the way maan helped geet and falling for her...
just lovely geet is so cute
Poor geet being tourched by her family for her no mistake...
maan realised his love..
waiting to read more of this ff...
Plzz continue soon...

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Dona

@Donnaa

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

part 7-10
read all the parts in one do
poor geet
darjee n brij 😡😡
awesome updates...
loved it...

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

just came across this story...it is wonderful with the lighthearted, RomCom touch given to the story mixed with the issue of women education and independence with right amount and not overstretched..

Loved Geet's character as kindhearted girl who wants to do something for the village, villagers and the women out there, her confident nature and sometimes bossing over Maan...

the way she helped her friend's sister, kept the name of the baby as Maan and donated her award to the training center without a second thought...

aur Maan to already fida on Geet...Maan ke dimag mein to shuru se hi ghantiya baj rahi hai...man mein laddo phoot rahe hai...aur pata nahi kya kya ho raha hain 😆

will wait for the next part, continue soon...

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

And also wish Geet tries to protest against Darji, Brij (though I know in the beginning you mentioned, them marrying her forcefully)...but wish her try to protest considering her mature, confident and not-so-weak nature...