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Posted: 11 years ago

izhaar...pyaar ka...part-8/pg.24/17/2/2014

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Part-8

And she started the scooty slowly as the road is kachha, she is driving very cuatiously so that he may not get any discomfort. keeping her full concentration on it.
Here our Maan babu started to gaze her shamlessly all her reer position fr. top to her waist.Her long hair is flowing in the air falling on his face bloking his veiw and giving him all goosbumps , her scent, smell of her hair that is some herbal shampoo driving him crazy. Her milky white skin which is slightly exposed nape and back of her is inviting him to touch it and feel it. Now he understand that he was in how much danger. Her whole body is an inches away fr. him making his position hell tensed. He gulped his saliva observing her all top to her slender waist,side view of her face,curvature fr. her head to earlobe neck line to shoulder,... a perfect line of curvature ,now he can feel her by seeing her in mere inches away only how much fragile she is. how much soft and silky her milky white glowing skin shining in that light sun rays competing to her white half saree which tied on one side of her waist surrounding he waist. He r slender smooth silky tummy inviting him to take it and bite it,feel it kiss it,.. wat not ,.. all erotic thoughts r provokig him making him vulnerable.
Even thou she is driving carefully the rocky road she has to apply breaks which cause him to jerk making him all difficult to control himself not to touch her,... which he himself is dead against for that ,... he want to ,.. he want to touch her ,.. hold her ,.. hug her ,.. feel her ,... wat not?his all sences r against to him , but he will not do that , his ethics will not allow him to do that.
"ohh god"wat type of feel is this?why i am feelin g like this?,.. this girl ,.. this girl ,... is really driving me crazy,.. no one ,.. no one ,.. make me feel like this till now? she is making me to do all that which i cannot do till now". Ye ladki mujhe paagal kardegi"
He wanted to divert and he has so many questions to ask her to,...
Maan:- tum kaha jaarahi ho is wakth?
Geet:- ji,..mai Maan se milne jaarahihu.
Maans heart missed a beat hearing,... wat ?she is coming to meet me? wat?
Geet:- " Maan se .. wahi ladka ,. usdin aapki gaadi me paida hua tha?
Maan:- "ohh" I see,.. [ he little bit dsiappointed]
wo yaha kyu rahthi hai ,. gaon se itna dur? aur wo aurath kya karthi hai? unka pati kargil me margaya na ,.. tumne bathaya usdin.
Geet:- sighed and tell,. haa sir, wo margaya, di aur jiju ne ek duserese pyaar kerke unk ipariwaar ke khillaf shaadi karli sir ,.. yaha humari goan me ye sab nahi chaltha haina sir ,..tho goan ki usool ke anusaar gaon ki panchayath unhe goan se baahar nikala sir,.. aur wo dono yaha aake rah rah hai sir ,.ye sochke kabhi na kabhi unki gharwaalone unhe apnayenge ,.. per ek saal ke baad jiju ne kargil kijungme margaya sir, phir bhi di ki pariwaar unhe nahi apnaya sir isliye wo abhi tak yaha rah rahi hai sir ,.. di mere saheli ki didi hai sir ,.. wo akel ihai isliye mai har roj yaha ake unki jarurathi cheezo gaon se leke aathi hu sir unhe kisina kisi ki sahara chahiye sir.
Maan dumb founded by her answer ,.. ye such me duseriki kitni parwah karthi hai ,.. per ye goanwaalo? kaisa log hai ,.. aur ye kaisa usool hai goan ka?
" aur wo bachha kaisa hai?
Geet:- koun,.. Maan,.. she grinned childishly ,.. aree wo tho bahut achha hai sir , bahut hoshiyaar hai sir.
Maan looked at her like she is an alien,.. do mahine ka bachha ,.. hoshiyaar kaise hotha hai?
" hoshiyaar,.. geet chahe tumhara gaon ka naam hoshiarpur ,..per do mahine ka bachha hoshiyaar kaise hotha hai , kya baath karthi ho tum?
Geet:- nah isir mai jhut nahi bolrahi hu ,.. chahe tho aap hi dekhiye,mai aapko unki ghar leke jaungi yaha ki ass pass hai unki ghar.
Maan:- nahi ,.. uski jarurat nahi ,.. before he complete ,. she stopped her scooty infrontof a hut.
The aurat stood infront of that hu carrying the boy.
The aurat seeing geet . lo,.. tumhari di agayi told to that boy, the boy grinned seeing geet and showed his arms to geet asking her to take him in to her arms.
Geet kept the bag there and taking the boy in to her arms she invited him ,.. come sir,..
The aurat looked him and,.. namasthe sir ,.. she came and bend to his feet to touch his feet.
Maan startled by her act immeadiately taking back step, ye aap kya karrahi ho?
Geet:- Di ,.. aap pehchana sir ko? aap ye maan ko unki gaadi me hi janm diya usdin.
Aurat:- mai kaise bhool sakthi hu sir ko ,.. sir tho sakshaath bhagwaan hai ,.. sir aap nahi tho pata nahi usdin mera kya hotha,.. hume aap ko shukriyada tak nah ibolpaaya usdin,.. she took the boy fr. geet and kept him on maans feet,"ye aap k iamanth hai sir."
Maan jumped back all shocked about her act.
" Aap ye kya ka rrahi ho,? bachhe bhagwaan ki rup hotha hai,.. aap isa nahi karna chahiye.
The little boy showed his arms to Maan as if asking him to take him in to his arms. Geet took him and gave to Maan. Maan hesitatingly took him,.. this girl ,.. mai kya karu isse?
Geet told that boy trying to fold his arms,.. maan ye tumhari fharistha hai ,.. ink wajese aaj tum is duniya me ayeho namathekaro unhe,... but he is also maan haina ,.. kisi ka sunneka aadat usse bh inahi hai like our MSK.So he took his hands fr. her and hugged Maan by his neck and kept his face on maans cheeks like kissing him making Maans face all wet by his saliva.
Geet laughed by the antics by Maan and maan lost in her laughter loosing all his sences completely. The aurat took the boy fr. maan saying sorry sir... sorry.
Geet slowly came to him taking her pallu came very near to him and started to wipe his cheeks with her pallu looking in to his eyes all lost herself in his eyes again. that light touch of her fingers on his cheeks gave maan currents of pleasure which r driving him to unknown heavens. he want more ,.. he want more than that he hold her hand without knowing wat he is doing not allowing her to take away her pallu fr. him. Geet looked him surprised by this act.
Aurat:- ayiyena sir ,.. ander ayiye,.. she invited them bringing them out of their lala land.
Geet:-chaliye sir,..
Maan :- nahi ,. hume der horaha hai,.. he looked here and there ad found how much poor she is and her living conditions in one look. " aap kya karthe hai? i mean aap kuch pad liya?
Aurat:- nahi sir,.. yaha humare goan me ladk ko jyaada padne nahi dethe ,.. mai kuch choti moti roj gaar kaam karthi hu sir.
Maan:_ hum ek kaam karthe hai,.. kuch dino me hum ye coll. ki lkaam shuru karthe hai,.. aap waha ayiye mai aap ko kuch dhanki ki kaam dilwadetha hu, aur aap chahetho ye training centre me kuch training bhi lesakthiho , baadme kya karna hum soche the hai,.. thik hai ?
Aurat:- ji,.. sir,.. aap ko bahut bahut shukriya hai sir,. hum aap ki ye bhalayi kabhi nahi bhul sakthe sir she again tried to touch his feet ,.. he stopped her nahi ,.. nahi,...
He fished his purse and take out some notes fr. it and gave them to maan [the boy]
Aur:- nahi sir ,.. uski jarurat nahi haisir,..
Maan:- nahi ,.. ye bachhe ko nake hai ,.. aap isse manamath karsakthe,..usdin bhi mai kuch nahi depaaya.
Geet looked him awed,.. kitna achha hai sir?
Maan :- chale geet?
Geet startled by him coming out of her trance.
haa ,.. sir. and tried to move , the boy started to cry as he dont want geet to go. The aurat took him to other side to divert him.
Geet:- o.k. di ,.. mai phi rkal avungi, agar kuch chahiye tho bathana mai leke avungi. she bid bye to her and started to move
Maan now come to point. he has to get his answers fr. geet.
ek baath bathao geet?
Geet:- kya hai sir?
Maan:- tumhe ye sab kaise pata,.. wo ,..wo ,.. mera matlab ,. tum kaise karsakth iho wo ,.. delivery and sab,..? tum tho abhi tak,...[ he dont want to pronounce the word bacchi,.. yak ,. he hate it na/] padrahi ho ,.. wo bhi sirf 12,.. tumhe ye sab kaise ata?
Geet:- wo ,. sir,.. mera nanaji ek ayurvedic d.r hai sir.aur mera nani gaon ki Dhaimaa hai sir,. wo gaon ki aurat ki deliveries karthe hai sir,.. mai bachpan se mera nana nani ke ghar me rahthi hu sir. kyun ki mera darji,.. thayya ji ,. mujhese nafreath karthe sir ,.. ladki huna mai ,.. wo ladka chahthe ha isir,.. isiliye wo mujhe mera nanaji ke ghar choda. jab se mai badi hone lagi hu nani mujhe apni saath unki madath karnekeliye mujhe leke jaathi ha isir , isliye mujhe isk ibaare me kuchjaankaari hai,.. aur uswakth mere pass aur koi raastha bh inahi hai ,.. ki mujhe ye kadam uthanipadi,.. sukhriya hai babajiko sab kuch thik hua,.. aur unhone aap ko bheja humari madath keliye ,.. really sir ,. we r very much thank full to u sir ,.. hume aap ko thanks bolna tha aur sorry bhi ki humari wajese aap ki gaadi karaab hue.. sorry sir,. .
Maan:-nahi ko ibaath nahi ,.. aur tumhari nanaji kaha rahthe?
Geet:- wo ab is dunia me nah ihai sir ,.. do saal pehle wo gujargayi.
Maan:-tho ab tum kaha rahthi ho?
Geet:- mai ab mera pariwaar ke saath mera darji ke ghar m erahthi hu sir.
Maan:-now his all doubts cleared
Geet:- chaliye sir ,.. she again started to drive while maan back.
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Main first aa gayi!!!
Nice update...
Bechara Maan...ab kitna control karega?
Geet usse chote Maan ke paas le jati hai
Chota Maan bahut cute hai...woh abhi se Geet ko pahechanta hai...
Maan ke gaal ko gilla kar diya aur Geet ko mouka de diya Maan ke gaal ko pachhne ka!!!
Aakhir Maan ne Geet ko puch hi liya ki ussne delivery kaise karvayi?
Wapas Delhi jaane ka irada Maan ka hai ki HP hi reh jayega?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu, naya banner bahut achha lagta hai...
Colours bahut achhi tarha se pasand kiye gaye hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
arei maan babu tho full laddu horahi hai..geet ko dekkar..he is having all erotic thoughts to claim her..
maan sharm karo ..
u have to propose her marry her..
then only all thoughts..
but its long way 2 go..loved her care for chote maan n the story of his parents very emotional..
haha..again a ride back to his place..
maan ..if she again jumps in a mud road
will surely hug her..chi chi babaji..mei bhi kya kya sochthi hoon..
aur yeh anu kehthi hai..mei usei sharm se pani pani karthi hoon..😳

bannerki comment dekkar moghambo bohut khush hua😆
Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

link karli copy in ur index
Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice
poor maan
waiting for next
but link u post in pm is not working
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Posted: 11 years ago
CAN ANY BODY SEND PICS OF mAAN AND GEET RELATED TO THIS UPDATE ,.. LIKE mAAN ALLLOST IN GEET AND GEET SO AND SO MAAN ON SCOOTY ETC,.. SO AM NOT ABLE TO EDIT THEM IF ANY ONE HELPS ME I WILL INCLUDE THEM IN THIS UPDATE
THANK.U.
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Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
loved it
maan has to conrol himself being vey colse to her he used all his strength to control himself
geet and maan went to meet maan
maan got know something about geet
eagerly waiting for the next part

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