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Posted: 11 years ago
(tik tik vajate dokyaatdhad dhad vadhate thokyat ) - 2

kadhi jami kadhi nabhi sampate aantar zokyat

(tik tik vajate dokyaat
dhad dhad vadhate dhokyat ) - 2

tik tik in mind
dhak


dhak in my heart
some time earth some time sky it closed there distance because of

swinging movement


tik tik in mind

dhak dhak in my heart


naahi kadhi sari tari bhijate ang panyane

sochu tumi palbhar bhi barase sawan jomane

shimpalyache show pees nako

jiv aadakala motyat


(tik tik vajate dokyaat
dhad

dhad vadhate thokyat ) - 2

without any water body wet because of water

if I think about you for moment the rain start heavenly

don't want show peace of Perl

because my heart want Perl itself


tik tik in mind


dhak dhak in my heart



maan





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sur hi tu taal hi tu
ruthe jo chand wo nur hai tu
aasu hi tu hasu hi tu
odhe manachi ni hurhur tu
roj nave bhas tuje vadhate antar swasat


You are my songs sound and bit

If moon gate angry then appearance are you
You are tear ,you are smile
Attraction of mind and dhak dhak of heart are you

Your daily illusion making my breath faster

(tik tik vajate dokyaatd

had dhad vadhate thokyat ) - 2

kadhi janu kadhi navi sampate aantar zokyat


(tik tik vajate dokyaat
dhad

dhad vadhate thokyat ) - 2


Geet


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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lovely teaser
waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 19

when maan gate geet cant breath he stop kiss and pull out them from kiss a red hu coming on there face they have /share there first kiss , maan just put his forehead on her forehead and say thanks geet thanks ,geet is shaking because of rain and passion of maan ,maan scooped her in his arms and started to move toward hotel within some time they are in hotel ,they went to there room

maan ; his gaze on geet he don't closed his eyes and geet know about it she is feeling so shy in front of him ,like his eyes looking to her soul also she again lost in her kiss memory which they share before some time and that brought red hu on her face she just turn her face in shy maan start to come near her and in husky voice he say geet ,his front body touching geet body ,imm geet turn into beetroot red ,his body telling his desire for her she just closed her eyes ,maan say geet now you know what effect you give on me ,are you ready for our,relations like two body one soul , i want to love you geet without any disturbance when our marriage I sleep separate from you from that day or before of that day I have fantasy about our journey of two body to one soul , can you give me your sath your yes to our Milan please geet i could not control my desire now ,and I know you also want same .i know you feeling shy for my qus but if you want this relation in next level please open my blue bag and wait for me with that he just blow air on her ear ,she shake like leaf with maan action , and geet just run from there in there bedroom

geet went to took bath ,in true meaning she want to be ready for maan ,she is in bathtub and thinking about there first meeting to till there first kiss she again feel something in her shoulder



there he siting beside bathtub and throwing rose petal on her she just want to touch his face so she put her hand on his face but he just vanish from there oh poor girl imaging maan there she just put her hand on her heart ,her heart sounding only DHAK DHAK

she start to talk herself sudder ja geet jab se tune wo kiss kiya ,you are goan case ,now hurry up already he wait for you from long time ,her face turn into red color with thought of maan , her body on hit, on one side she just want to went in maan hug and other side she just want to hide from maan ,his desireful and passionate eyes just stop her breath ,she come out from bathroom a in bathrobe and went near the maan bag and when she open that bag oh big gasp come from her mouth a beautiful legha is there with beautiful jewellery geet took that from bag and hide her face in it

geet dress and jewellery





geet waist chain

other side after changing his dress he went to meet mr. mohan

maan ; I want special suit for two days he have shy smile on his face

Mohan : with innocent face ask I see for what purpose you want that room mr. maan

Maan ;just bend his head in shyness and start say like wo wo

Poor mohan cant stop his laugh and say mr maan don't be shy I just pulling your leg don't get angry ok I will inform staff to ready special suit and he wink to maan ,maan say thanks , and say I want to decoration of room of my choice , mohan nodded his head and say don't worry that room is decorated with your choice ,with serious face mr mohan say ,maan be careful opening mai rush mate karma , you have to play slow and steady with that they wink to him it brought red hu on face he just nodded and went from there

He went to that suit ,suit are so beautiful it is small cottage little fer from main hotel surrounded by tree , rain is stopped now and cool air make atmosphere more romantic and beautiful ,cottage have two bed , master bed on first flower and it is like this





Both wall made with open glass you can closed or open , full moon light coming from that part which give heavenly look to that room now maan mind is foll of all naughty thoughts that room have small balcony and back side of cottage small waterfall who create music in air that waterfall water use as swimming pool maan just love that place ,he give instruction about decoration and he say to staff , brought all necessary things for kitchen and don't disturbed them for next two days with that he came out from there he just massage geet , if you are ready come to ...

He went to shop ,he again went that medical now that full empty he again start wo ,wo shop keeper gate him and stop him and one packet with wrap put in his hand maan jut bend his head in shyness

Hear geet come to that place first she all confused why he called her there ,she is in bridal dress she feeling so shy but office staff brought her with another way so anybody cant see her ,when she reach there she just forgate to blink her eyes ,that place is so beautiful so many butterfly start to dance in her tummy ,she have goose bump on her whole body with anticipation she just clutch her duppata ,when she went to master bedroom she got idea of maan fantasy she just sit on bed with long veil and with thudding heart Dhak Dhak Dhak




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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Maan ne to kafi taiyary ki hai
Geet bhi bechain hai!
Waiting for sr...
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😃 waiting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesom update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
abb honge dono ek...all d best...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Post the nxt prt cnt wait fr it luved teaser
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part 17
nice part...
where did she go?

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