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Posted: 11 years ago
Phew.. Teaser mil gaya..😛
-Gemini- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser
waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice teaser, please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb promo. Looking forward to the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally a teaser after such a long time thanks 😊
geet is so muphat 😆
ohh no what will happen when geet's father comes
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Posted: 11 years ago
iam not able to post the update😭😭 it's showing mypost has invalid words😕😲😲😲
Edited by -Mounika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mounika-

iam not able to post the update😭😭 it's showing mypost has invalid words😲

try again
-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dont know what's wrong😡
It's showing me that my post have invalid word(s)😲😲 which I dont find any where😭
simple english hai n hindi in my update nothing else..what's invalid in that😕😕😡

guys Iam not able to post update I dont know whyy😡😡
tried many n many times but same result😭😭😭

Please can anyone help me with problem I mean Is anyone there facing d same problem😕
Edited by -Mounika- - 11 years ago
snehapriya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
May be try it after login out and logging in again.
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Posted: 11 years ago


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PART-21


"Maan dare you laugh again!!Iam gonna kill u now"Aadi huffed at maan who seated in passenger seat whilst he continued to drive..

"seriously Aadi you guys are just perfect with each other!!you both know how well to torture the other in own unique ways"
Maan couldnt hold back and laughed again at Aadi's puffed face."very funny!!"he glared making maan to supress his laugh.


"ek toh wo stupid ne mera jeena haraam kardiya tha..you find it funny haan?can u believe she literally threw me out of the apartment god!!it's so embarassing"he mourned explaining further the torture geet gave him all the day!!

Though Maan laughed heartily he felt her love for him!!"she loves me so much!!tabhi toh she agreed to cook which she hates the most!!"he smiled at his inner thought!!
"whatever!!the matter is she loves you maan and Iam really happy for you"Maan's smile grew broader as he heard exactly what his inner self told him...

Both shared a friendly hug before Aadi bid good bye to Maan..Though Maan offered him in Aadi wasnt in to risk of losing his 'bachi kuchi izzat'
"She'll throw me out of the society if I come in again..you guys enjoy" Maan bade Aadi n rushed in super excited to meet his jaan his shona.

As soon as he rang the bell he heard a click before he could realise anything something hit him rather say something jumped on to him!!Blinking couple of times he realised his jaan is in his arms hugging him tight with her hands round his neck.
He wasnt expecting it but definitely loved unexpected surprise..Nothing could have made his home coming this good.He didnt know when he hugged her back dipping his face in her neck.





"my Jaan missed me??"he asked in a whisper whilst his palm reached her silky hair slightly massaging her scalp."ummm"she hummed hiding her face more in to his neck.
Unknowingly tears slipped from Her eyes wetting his shirt.


She didnt let him break the hug when he tried "why you are crying now? Agaya hu na mein"He asked slipping his hand back on her waist."I dont know!!"inhaling sharply she pulled him closer forcing him to bend to her level.Chuckling at her weird habit of crying for every thing and any thing he held her tight feeling her love.

Both were lost in their pool of love unware of the gaze of a person who's peeping from behind a wall...

Maan's gaze caught the sight the sight of beautifully decorated living area!!A perfect candle light dinner decor."wow!!"he whispered surprised at her effort actually Aadi's.
He walked in with geet in his arms.

The guy who was hiding took out his mobile as Maaneet closed the door behind.

"yes sir!!!your guess was right...she is the one the guy was talking with...she was your daughter!!
Miss.GeetSinghania!!Take down the address sir"
yash's heart jumped in joy as he finally found his princess!!He hastily noted down the address as if wanting to run to her as soon as possible.


"Thanku young man you did a good job!"As he hung the call Yash smiled staring at the address..Indeed he felt lucky to find his daughter on her bday!!
He thanked the guy mentally(referring Maan).If he hadnt heard him taking geet's name at the hotel and hire a detective behind him to delhi,he would never had known that his daughter's no where but in delhi!!"who's that guy by the way?how do he know my princess?"he muttered confused but shrugged the thought and called out reshmi to give the good news.

"how's it??"Geet asked tugging Maan's arm.."great!!It's cool!!Aadi is not that boring"

"mean??wait wait did u meet him before me?"she raised her brows glaring at him like a mathematics teacher glares a student with all wrongly done problems.

"umm!!yea..yeah!!I mean he picked me from airport and.."he nervously started.

"and that chugalkor aunty did chuglis with u right!!uski toh mein...abhi batati hu"As she picked the phone Maan seized it back alerting about time.
He was taken back as she hugged him atonce..Her tight hold told him of her mood.."kya huwa jaan??you ok?"he cupped her cheek whilst she stayed in his arms snuggling closer.





"I dont know!!Iam feeling weird since morning!!you werent there with me"Her tone was babyish not potraying seriousness in it!!He felt guilty for not able to be with her on her bday!!He cupped her face so that he could get clear view of her."Iam so sorry jaan!!I couldnt stay with you but I promise It wont happen on ur next bday"pressing a featherly kiss on her forehead he captured her small form in his arms.


She smiled wrapping her arms around his waist.."Maan!!where's my gift?"with a swift moment she parted as if something came in to her!!
His face fell with the mention of it!!How he wished to gift something special and memorable to her but damn the time!!He didnt find any time to visit mall.


"what??you forgot my gift arent you?"Oh!!god he's stuck now!!She's staring at him sadly with a pout.."geet Wo..I couldnt shop much..Time nahi tha tumhare paas jo aana tha.."

"I just brought these..."He handed her a packet nervously.Infact felt bad as he couldnt do anything for her.

"Iron man series??"she bit out amused.."yeah!!I promised u right luckily I got them in a store"

She chuckled shooking her head and emptied the packet finding something else.."wow!!Bracelets..itne saare"she exclaimed wearing each one of it!!"you like them?"
"na I love them"she gave him a wide smile releiving him!!He was anxious thinking 'what if she wont be happy?'Thankgod!he was aware of her fondness for bracelets if not he'd have returned empty handed.



"oh I forgot!!Geet Iam sure you'd be happy with this"he searched his pockets n took out a paper and his mobile..perplexed geet waited for him pondering over what's so special in that paper?

"omg!!it's...it's..."geet's gaze stuck on paper.
"robert downey's autograph"he completed her sentence enjoying her childish excitement."here.."when he showed her the video wherein her fav hero wishing happy bday ofcourse with a flying kiss 😳
"oh my god!!Iam..Am I alive?"she whispered dramatically holding her head..she couldnt believe her eyes and played it again..Her smile grew wider and wider"I found him at the same hotel I was with clients..so met him told him how mad you are for him.."Geet fell on him holding her heart and He rolled his eyes at her nautanki.


"thanku thanku thanku thanku so much Maan I love you!!you are the best"hopping at the place like a kid she hugged him tight placing numerous kisses on his cheek not knowing what she's planting in him!!A completely new sensation which he never felt before.

Geet felt his hands tightening around her waist almost being crushed against his hard frame.She trembled with the way his hands caressing her back to waist ever so sensually.


Tucking her tendrils he pressed a soft kiss on her right temple followed on eye.Her lips shivered in anticipation as his hard yet sensual lips moved further down to her sensitive spot near the ear and to her red cheek.He kissed her nose and stopped right at her lips staring at her whilst she pressed her lids tight with the pleasure she felt.


Geet frowned at him as he didnt make any move but continued to stare at her lips followed by her eyes.


His hot breath fanning her lips taking away her senses.she didnt know when her body according to his tunes.


Maan caressed her cheek with his thumb pad ever so softly whilst his other hand pulled her closer enjoying the intimacy..Though he didnt say any his eyes bored in to hers as if asking her something."ofoo Maan why dont you say that you want to kiss me?"she bit out irked with his eye talks.
"what??"A shocked gasp escaped his lips...After all he didnt expect her to say that!!
Oh god!!she is one of a kind.

"so you too want me to kiss u arent u?"For the first time she blushed with his naughty and teasing gaze the reason was unware to her!!"leave me"she squealed out when he wasnt leaving her instead his hold grew only stronger..She slightly moved her head back when he leaned closer..All the while smile didnt leave neither him nor her!!

unable to look at him in such intimately she closed her eyes with a shy smile.."I love you geet!!I love u so much"with that he kissed softly at the corner of her lips.

Precap:
You want to see more of maaneet??then suggestion please😆
Else..
I may proceed with twist!!can I?😳


Note:


I guess many of you are aware of my ss "Dosti ya pyaar"
Iam planning for season2 only if you want??let me know in comments or pm
I'd soon finish angel(i'l update it sn),'tmls'and start with my new ss 'tere ishq mein' n dosti 2 if u wish me to do..
Here is prologue of tere ishq mein if u had missed!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99588607

-Mona🤗


Edited by -Mounika- - 11 years ago

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