SS-GOSH!!She Is Different-MG(Part 3-Pg 27) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
nice part
loved both maaneet character...continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
nice update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jab tak read karna shuru kiya update khatam...

I am liking this Maan-Geet...

next update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow.. nice concept.. Geet belives in love & Maan not.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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both maaneet characters are good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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terrific update! Well written! Pls cahnge it to chap 1 (its says Chap 2) ! Geet is bubbly! awesum characters!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaar
Maan doesn't belived in love
N geet has full trust in love
Totally opposite :P
Eagerly waiting for farther updates
It reminded I hate love stories song
If possible include this song sequence for maan :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-2


Note at the end..please read

" when anyone thinks about parties, they think about me, off course without me there is no fun in the party".. Today there is a party at sameera's house..oh sam..i forgot to introduce her.. she is modern girl with modern thought.. like me she also doesn't believe in relationship ,love , commitment etc etc drama.. i went home early, quickly freshen up and went to the dining table.. like other families.. my families too follows the rule that everyone will have lunch together .. I quietly took my seat , and saw CD coming.. no no not that typical computer CD.. but my own personal Buddy.. my dad... means Cool Dad / CD... me and dad share a great bond.. he is friend , my guide , my inspiration everything... he quickly took the seat... he quickly asked "what is in menu maan??" he asked worriedly.. you will wonder why worriedly.. because we both are health conscious people...(actually I got this habit from dad only)...you must me wondering, what's the thing to worry here.. the thing is.. wait wait here comes the thing.. sorry sorry not the thing.. But the queen.. my mom... she is typical Punjabi... whenever I and dad ask for something healthy like sandwich etc... she gave us aloo ke paratha.. According to her that gaass phuss' will give no energy.. Really energy lies in these food... she came with nakul, who was holding a big tray.. I and dad gulped a saliva and said we are gone today, 2 hrs extra gyming'...she smiled and served the food.. and as expected it was something called dal makhani and matar ki sabji'... why these name so dangerous.. name was dangerous.. what about the taste.. my dad said " we have to eat it kya"... oh dad you are so gone... mom said " I know you don't like my cooking, leave it , don't eat".. mom again angry, papa again saying sorry.. not a new scene in my house...

I quietly ate my food and dad too... I heard mom say " I will such a DIL, who like Punjabi food like me".. again that DIL topic.. oh god.. dad smirked.. I quickly said " finished, got to go, party at sam house bye"..i heard mom said "sam sam, jab dekho sam, I don't want her as my DIL, she doesn't even know how to wear proper dress, dekhiya ji, I don't want sam as my DIL".. again dad calming mom, mom ke kuch nahi hosakta, I laughed.. if I ever told her that I will never marry, she will faint out of shock..

I went to my room, and started getting ready for party... I came downstairs saw mom dad busy with work.. I quickly bye to them, took the car and went to the party.. Sam's Party here I come...

I reached her house late, when I entered, I heard "thank god he came, without him party was such a bore"..after all I am Maan Singh Khurana... I quickly spotted sam and said hi.. we have normal talk..when she said "come on, let's dance na, party getting bored, even after you being here".. I laughed and winked at her.. she smiled devilishly..i came DJ and order him something... when the music changed...

Spotlight on me, and my back was facing the people... music started...

I know you like me,
You know i like you
Lets get together girl
You know you want to

I know you like me,
You know i like you
Lets get together girl
You know you want to

I signaled sam, spotlight on her.. I moved my body according to rhythms.. sam came close to me.. and we started dancing..

Raat din aate jaate
Hoti hai.. sau mulaquatein
Aage badti hai baatein
Peeche chhod de
Raaste mein hai thehre
Aur bhi kitne chehre
Aaj phir apni aankhein
Unse jod lee...kho jaayega
Lamha yeh kho jaayega
Mudke naa phir aayega
Rahi mein usko raklee
Ho jaayega hoga jo ho jaayega
You know you're so hot
You're on fire
1..2..3..4... Go

I danced with other girls...but made them understand about my thought and came close to sam again and asked by expression is she agree.. she smirked.. and she came more closer to me.. when me heard loud music and we started dancing according to line, making the world understand what we think

Milgaye jo chora chori
Hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate luv stories

Milgaye jo chora chori
Hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate luv stories

Sam excused herself.. I said okay, I felt empty, so opened my arms.. asking any girl to join me... when 6-7 rushed.. some even there partner, I laughed.. this is so called love'..and I started dancing with other girls..

I know you like me
You know i like you
Let's get together girl
You know you want to

Koi aas paas ho
Samjhe jo dil ki baat ko
Soche na aaj yaar voh
Kal ki baatein
Pal do pal ka saath ho
Phir na haaton mein haath ho
Bhule naa yaad aayein
Phir beeti raatein
Aankho se kehke yeh
Sapnaa gaya hai
Subha ko jaage toh
Raasta naya hai

I was joined my other friends, adi, Sameer, Rahul and many more... everyone started dancing together, this is called, no complication, just nothing..

I m the man whose got a plan
Need a girl who'll understand
You could be the one for sure
1..2..3..4... Go

Milgaye jo chora chori
Hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate love storys

The music stopped, we enjoyed for some for time.. uff these girls sticking to me like anything.. I know I hard to resist but still.. after sometime.. everyone started leaving.. I also left saying bye to sam and telling her that party was awesome... I left home... I was driving when i heard the radio saying.. "time is 11:45, and we are telling all news of today"... oh god I am dead... mom will kill me.. please god, save your child.. and I reached with lot was courage... dad will also be asleep, who will save me now...I gulped my saliva...

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...RIDDHIMA...-I thought the same, I was going to include the song in this chapter.. anyway thanks for liking my work..

Next will be geet life, her house, her family and her friends..

Hope you like

Please please motivate me, do comment on my work please.. your single comment makes my day..

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Edited by angelwords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
uff that song is appropriate for maan
but then lets see if she cant change him
oh ho so punjabi kudi for maa
and none for maan
lets wait shall we
wow his parents sure are cute
lovely little family huh
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Wow just loved it loved maan familly

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