The Locket (14) MG FF, new thread link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 33

Originally posted by: paponecon

dev nw knows abt maans lv...what was into th print out...tara is too gd so munda is nw jealous n ne expressing his feelings in front of evryone...geets thinking abt her hot maan..whn maan will knw abt it..

Originally posted by: srikrithi

Finally dev & Tara know.

Tara's plan was good.

Possessive Maan!! Hay!!

Worried about that 🤬 presence.

Pls don't trash my hope in his punishment. Keep geet safe.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

I want to write so much on your updates coz they are so painstakingly beautiful... I still have the most recent chapter to read ..and I will do so .. just that for the third time in 2months I'm burning in fever for the past few days ... And still can't stop myself from coming here and checking on your updates ... Will write my thoughts when I have some more energy to look at the blaring the screen lol ... Get better soon. I enjoy reading your comments just as much😃
Btw a small note on previous chapter ...I am just in awe of how well u depicted and disclosed those wounds of our Bambi which she has kept hidden behind her smile in her innocent heart for these few years without her Maan... Aaahh its so hurtful to read and yet with every chapter my hopes increase with how Maan will make it up to her yet again ...

I think Geet is perhaps the most underwhelming character in my stories but that is what I want to show. You don't have to shout to be heard. You don't have to throw tantrums to get your way. Beauty is in her simplicity, in her innocent heart, in the trust and love she gives out without conditions. Her love is unconditional and in that fact alone, she is overwhelmingly beautiful to everyone she meets whether it be Daarji, Daadima, Dev, NT, Kabir, Megha, Maithili, Sona and even Maan. Sort of in real life too, these are the type of women who touch my heart when I see them.

And another side note ! Lol my words are flowing away ! I just read the end of Mayyo's beautiful story 'If only you ever saw me' ...and this phase of Maaneet love story which ended with them parting ways right now for me holds the same sentiments as I hold for the current condition of your Maaneet love story... That parting is temporal for those whose hearts are moulded in love for each other ... Mari is very talented and the finesse with which she can create a character; it makes you feel that you know every cell of that person. I think that makes them all the more relatable and you root for them because you understand them and can empathize with them.
But sadly I learnt something new ... That love is always Bittersweet... No matter how strong one's love is ..it still needs to be proven and tested against time ... A part of nature I guess ! But sth I deeply familiarised with in both of your work ...
Sure there are some pains in love but I would walk on fire to keep it in my life as would anyone who is blessed with it in their life.
Man ! I don't want this story to end ! What will I do in the coming new year !

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Amazing updats Awww i am in love this akdu , saadu n DD( Dhak DHak-dhust danav ) maan

MMM-JK memories so cutee

I-star ka new face i love her here ,...Meh BP rise in this after reading about that arhhh rapist person , kill him

waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Jannat94

why u feel disappointed Dear
u did a great work and u write perfectly awesome

update was amazing and I loved it
waiting for next part
update soon
thanx 4the PM

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

stupendously,fantabulously, fantastical. my god wat do i say ????

loved this maan he is back to being him and dev and tara i just hope they are able to make maan and geet come together and fast cant wait for maaneet reunion and missing update of devtara please if possible next update on devtara. cant wait for the next keep it up

Originally posted by: maanland

😳very nice part

so at last Sherlock Holmes his dear Watson are in action

so excited for them

and even nt is all set to see her geet in her man's arm

so now no ranbir, sharukh or salman can keep maan away from his geet

loved ur last line in bold

Maan ki Geet for eternity

indeed😃

Originally posted by: sona-rai

THUD Me Dead Officially :)

hehehehehehehe

Awesome As always Avi:)

Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely update. A full package with, sadness, love, jealousy, romance, goodness and evil.

Thanks for sending Maan to the graduation ceremony. Geet's babaji will never let her nor her faith in him, down.😊 She asked for him and there he is. The breaking of the thread is a temporary setback, very soon she will set it right ( hopefully with some threats if he tries to do it again).

So Dev comes to know, yes! Now the game begins. Tara's idea is great and Maan had to fall for it.😆.

Maan could not resist after seeing Geet in a saree. Lovely

And at last the idiot...🤬( all the gallis). Judgement day is very near.