The Locket (14) MG FF, new thread link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 107

Originally posted by: Onir

Part 62: Tum hi ho... ❤️

Apt song for this couple at this point in their story 👏

Loved the way you connected nature and their coming together in such beautiful words... the rain drops washing away all the pain and hurt for the time being, while his kiss the promise that thsi can never be her a goodbye was like the rainbow that will colour their lives after the storm of misunderstandings, ego, and insecurities... 😳👏

Me and my love for the rains..😆 can't help it.

The last line "maanegi toh acche se mannoonga nahi toh utha ke le javoonga" 😆 Waah majnu kya detemination hai... all the best for it 😉

The song was well amalgamated with the scenes ... and the kiss and verbal confession for the first time was awesome ... I won't use words to describe it just 😳

Ek mystery solve hui of all the faltu misunderstandings by the great team work of Watson, Sherlock and CID ... so Avi has kept another mystery solving for this couple ---- the mystery of the unread letter 👏 I'm loving it Maan has a great task ahead to solve this cause Geet is the one who can answer it, but first he has to make her talk to him... 🤣

Great update... a long one and I am loving the length of the updates with all the couples coming together.

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Originally posted by: Onir

Part 63: 😆 Lovely!

The initial Geet's monologue was quite impactful and spoke of all that she is going through ... her pain, anger, hurt and all her fears and insecurities as well as her broken heart and dreams that she felt in those moments and days when he was distant form her and when he distrusted her. She feels she can't forgive him for his distrust on her and is mainly angry because of it, that she would forgive anyone but Maan ... But then keeping that anger against Maan as a shield is also a sign of how much she feels for him and that she unconsciously uses her right on him, cause one gets affected so much only by the ones who matter the most and the ones you yourself right to hurt you.

This is so true. We expect so much from the one closest to us. As they say, the closer you are, the deeper the stab. In a way, it is his love that makes her feel so much rights over him that she would be angry with him.

I loved the revenge of paratha less breakfast and also the retorts Geet was ready with for each of Maan's try to have a way with her... 😆 But Maan is no less he has his own tactics and is discovering the full sherni avatar of his lady love 😉

Silent love story, sort of silent war story...😆

Naureen's shayari as usual 👏👏

Nauri is the best..😃

The team D-D (Darji-Daadi) is super cool 👍🏼

Maan banna Emran Hashmi 🤣 loved this scene and Geet's dialogue ... Maan ne dry toast ke compensation mein li mishty taste ... 😳

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Originally posted by: impoojaverma

superb update

OMG!!! that kiss left geet in complete shock😆😆

Originally posted by: GurmeetsMaha

Oh my God am back after a long exams break (well thats how it seemed to me) and see so many parts to read..yayyy and I have a full mouth smile on my face😃will read them tonight hayeee

Chapter 63 Part 1

Both Maan and Geet are paying for Maan's indifference and misunderstanding now...

I loved their individual POVs and monologues a lot but seriously did Maan think that he will come and say "I love you" and it will be all ok. Sorry but that was a frivolous expectation from such a profound man...He may have loved her truly but he broke her heart too terribly...

Itna attitude...i am sure you will make him suffer at least a teeny weeny bit...

Originally posted by: prettyji

awesome