The Locket (14) MG FF, new thread link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 105

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhanyabinu

, i finished reading this ff till you have written.i don't have words to say about this ff. your writting is very different from others. you have described each and every person equally,every person in this ff have a story to tell . i loved the relation you picturised between maan and his mother. i loved it . thanks a lot for giving such a wonderful ff. keep updating .waiting for the other romantic moments of maneet.

Thank you. Glad you liked it. I think everyone in life has a story to tell so for me it is interesting to know them like that.
Maaneet romance? 😲 Okay..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

Jz awesom... wonderin if I read d whole update, will I be able 2 describe it... pl update sooon!!!!!!

Bas? itna hi? Kuch acche sa comment do phir main update karti hu.. Deal?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

Acha tu sirf chakna Chakana hoga kya 😆

😳😳 Abhi toh Mishty ko manana padega...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


Uski band bajne mein bhi toh maza hi hai! 😆

Yup.. especially for me...😆 Tedhe khayaal aasani se aate hai..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
he he i lov this " giit"... im waiting to c her karate skills...
superb update... waiting 4 more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
omggg kya sach mein updating
meri aankho ko yakeen nahin ho raha avi😆😆😆

will it be on if or blog
if it is on blog pls pm me because i am going to work now sooo I will read at work via pm😉😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Part 61: Hayee what a roller coaster of emotions as well as characters

I felt pain for Geet, anger on Maan.,.. satisfied with Brij's punishment of public bashing (though its very less for his deeds... but atleast something) Laughed for CID Daadi's khurafati dimaag and her bonding with Darji, loved Darji's protection and love for Geet... And Dev's plan of the truth being uttered by the man himself 👏 Pinky's heartbreak (which I feel she is misinterpreting things here) and Sujal's own story ...

Actually there was so much so happening altogether in one single update that I had to keep up with everything and remain clear on what is the end of each parallel story... 😆 But yet loved the whole combination and culmination.

Ranbir was a small baby 😆 good one ... but what a mess Maan has created for himself, bahut papad belne padege ... I hope Geet doesn't let him off so easily when he comes to apologize.

I loved how the promise which was unsaid between both yet was sacred to both ... Maan breaking that had led to all of those insecurities to pop in Geet's mind that got the final blow with just a name Sameera ... She misunderstood it all.. I hope Maan doesn't feel annoyed when she puts her own version of betrayal in front of her when he himself is acting like a big khotta.

2 more left... and I am lucky that I don't have to wait in suspense as there are pending updates for me 😃


Men generally will not accept blame. He is making mistakes all along but until he is faced with the consequences of his actions, it will not sink in. Ego must be a male thing Onir.. The more powerful the man, the larger the ego.
Love has to conquer and for that his ego has to surrender to it.
Valid point, right, but trying to put it into a story though is the hard part.
Thanks Onir🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

omggg kya sach mein updating
meri aankho ko yakeen nahin ho raha avi😆😆😆

will it be on if or blog
if it is on blog pls pm me because i am going to work now sooo I will read at work via pm😉😉


this is not a blog part... bohut chotu sa update hai.. .still part of the prev chapter..😃
Agar yakeen nahi ho raha, toh kal karti hu update?😲
😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zafarahim

he he i lov this " giit"... im waiting to c her karate skills...

superb update... waiting 4 more...

Thanks Zaf.😃 Karate? Maan ke samne? Kar payegi kya Bambi?😆

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