LUST FOR REVENGE 2 Thread 3 Updated Pt16 Pg 103 6/3/2014

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

I am afraid what will happen in the morning. Will this be revenge, lust, passion or love???

Fantastic update!

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

awesome.. already waiting for next

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

PROLOGUE

Crushed like ice,

Like twenty tons have been thrown on my soul,

You spoke those words that emitted through your vocal cords like venom,

A snake you were,

Looking through my eyes into my core,

So delicately,

You devised your plan,

to kill everything inside me,

Skillfully you weaved your web,

planted your trap,

And with your love decoy

blindfolded my logic,

All which was open was my trust,

Your weapon,You deceived,

I believed Your arms were so warm,

Now the only warmth I feel,

Is that of my blood,

Spilling from my soul,

As my life swings carelessly,

Like a pendulum,Back and forth,

Higher and higher,

But going nowhere,

The 5 senses have gone numb,

I scream louder and louder,

But no one hears me,

They speak they call out to help,

I cannot hear,

Look at me look at the,

nothingness you have brought onto me,T

he well hath run dry,

As she lay,Crippled from loves fangs,

Until nothing remains,

But her backbone,

He hath eternally forsaken her,

Her life has become,

Life's lesson to women,

Better to have Loved,

Then never at all
This poem says everything. from begining maan has plan to trap her it was understand, he has carefully weaved web around her and in next update he will definitely make mockery of her and will kick her out of job
but in the end of the day he will miss her but i want her not to come back to him as-
jidgi ke safar me chale jate hai jo mukam wo fir nahi aate wo fir nahi aate...
pyyar dhokha hai, kya bharosa hai dosto usko ruth ke na jaane do
patzad me jo fool murza jate hai wo baharo ke aane se khilte nahi
badme tum pukaro hazaro bar uska naam wo phir nahi aate wo phir nahi aate...

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

nice update
maan's indifference's towards geet and
geet being very affected by it

then her confession to their being one is ver nice

geet knew it is not right but still let it happen

wonder what will be maan's reaction next morning.
is he going to leave geet 😕😕

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

part 15
nice...
some thing is bothering Geet...
OMG what did she do...
will Maan remember?
cont soon dear...

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Oh no what happened
hope maan wont hurt her but i doubt maan is just taking his revenge

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ylaraib

@ylaraib

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

awesome update
That syra is out of office
Geet said i L u to maan
But y i m getting scared ?
I think maan don't love hr
He is taking revenge 4m hr . .
Lets hope for the best
Waiting for next

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

richa dear

"he trying to stop him which is quite not possible. He glance in her eyes. She couldnt look away from the greedy,smoldering look of hunger in his eyes,his irises glowing warm at her glowing skin."

now you look like that :- richu jaanu

update dede

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

After reading the whole update the only thing i can say is tht Maan has got wht he wanted..fr which he was doing all tht...
& i can see ab Geet ka haal kya hoga iske baad...
Let's see...kaun kitne dard me hoga..