MG FF- STILL WAITING #3 Part 39 Page 104 (5/7) - Page 55

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Part 39

The past which is full of pain remorse not a single moments of happiness in their life. Their past made them part and this past will made them together too... maan believed it he know his sin but there in some corner of his heart always loved the cute chubby Geet whose smile was one of the best smile he has ever seen n he Is the not only to snatch it, It was snatched when she lost her mumma.

It was the same day when Arjun has promised Geet to show her kids.. aniee was getting restless becoz maan was not leaving the side of kids n they need to make geet see otherwise she will be not taking any medicine. Arjun tried to convince her but she was not listening anything her motherly heart wanted to see her kids but this distance was making her more shattered at last she cried her heart to Arjun "plzz Bhaiya laa do na mere Bache...3 din ho gae h unhe dekha v nahi h..kitna roe rahe hoge woh Bhaiya Mai nahi reh sakti unke bina...kuu kia maan ji ne aesa Ku Toda woh promise Ku nahi Kar sakte woh mujhpe bharosha ek maa kaese apne Bache ko chot pahuchaegi...har baar Ku humpe yeh eljaam lagta h kya bigara h Maine pahle aarav Aayush ko chot pahuchane ka phir disha ab mithi...kisi KO v Kuch nahi Kia maine Bhaiya. Mai bas 10 saal Ki thi jab woh dono aae the ghar me bht dil kar raha tha unhe dekhne ka par chotti maa me bola hum maar rahe the unhe...Kuch nahi Kia tha Maine Bhaiya Kuch nahi papa v nahi pyaar karte Hume...mumma Ki bht yaad aati h mujhe unke pass Jana h Bhaiya...she cried until her body gave her at last doc have to give her injection to calm her body.

Arjun went km after making sure Geet is sleeping...he was frustrated because he was unable to do anything for geet the gal who was crying for her kids. He straight went to maan's room to see him working on lappy, he angrily marched toward him n snatched his laptop from him n held him from his collar when maan growled in anger n said in angry voice as he cant shout as kids were sleeping "have u lost it arjun" arjun just dragged him in next room n shouted "yes i have lost it, and it is all becoz of u, how could u do this maan, how could u, u believe all short of crap of them but not a single time u can hear the gal whom u married, mana kia than a maine mat karo usse shaddi, jassi v thi she was atleast happy there na but what u gave her after marriage just pain pain and pain. Y ur doing this to her haan, kya bigara hai usne tera bol kya bigara hai, aaj tak kuch nahi manga hai usne but jab tune khud usse kuch promise kia tha ku tod dia tune maan ku toda tune" maan replied "i didn't broke any promise" arjun smile sarcastically n replied "kitna jhooth bolne laga h tu maan, chal aacha tu bhul gaya h toh let me remind u, kya tune bacho ke janam ke time yeh nahi bola tha usse ki uske bache kabhi nahi chinega tu phir joy eh 3 din pahle kia woh kya tha maan jawab de na".

"Shayad tu toh yeh v nahi janta kya haal h teri biwi ka, tere bacho ki maa ka, hospital me padi h tadap rahi h apne bacho ke lie, asi saza mat de maan usse hath jodta hu mai" with this arjun folded his hands to him n said "plzz maan mar jaegi woh, bahot chooti hai itne dardo ko apne andar le ke jeene ke lie, daya kar usspe maan, thodi daya kar, teri behan se v choti h, ya yeh kahu bahot chooti h woh. Agar tu use pyaar, samaan(respect) nahi de sakta toh kamse kam dard na de plzzz" arjun cried sitting on his knee still folding his hands in front of maan.

Maan took deep breath n spoke "kya cahta h tu" arjun looked at him n replied "she wanted to see kids" on which maan spoke "nahi m not letting kids to go anywhere and she is not coming in mansion" on which arjun spoke "let her at least see kids from video chat plzzz, mere lie yeh kar de maan plzzz for ur best frnd just say yes plzzz" maan at last nodded his head n said "but just from few minutes" arjun nodded n spoke "i will call u once i reach near her" maan don't want her to see kids but seeing his best friend begging he cant but he know somewhere deep inside his heart he too wanted to see as after checking doc. Had told him that kids are suffering from fever due to Geet as she feed them and her viral fever came inside them. His helplessness is too much that he cant give kids to Geet only he knows he was never strong hearted man but circumstances made him one who need to do every sin for her only, for his love(chalo sochte raho Geet ya Sam till 1-2 parts more :P).😛

He once again came back in room to find ammy awake n trying to make mithi also awake from his legs, maan smiled to see his cute son n kissed his forehead, ammy to gave big smile to him but once again start troubling his twin sister who is still sleeping. After 2-3 attempts he looked at maan who was sitting beside him n smiling then forwarded his hand to him. Maan happily took him in his arm, whereas ammy was turning his head in every corner of room till he can do, maan was looking at him what he is doing but after 2-3 mins ammy started crying. Maan woke up from bed n paced in room to calm him try to feed him water, milk but he was just looking here and there n crying. At last maan took him out of room but still keeping one eye on goonj who was sleeping on bed.

He was trying his best to make ammy calm but he crying nonstop untill maan's phone rang, before maan pick it he tried to snatch it from maan's hands using his tiny miny hand and made his hold tight on phone maan tried to take it from his hand as he was not prepared that ammy will do that. He tried to take but ammy nodded his face in no n started looking at phone which was still ringing with using his small hand he started touching phone as it was smart phone it went on answering n Arjun face came in screen as he did video calling n ammy seeing Arjun shouted in excitement but hearing ammy shouting from phone geet's eye turned towards screen n seeing her jaan smiling face geet caressed screen but more than Geet ammy started shouting in excitement seeing his mom on screen that's when maan noticed geet's pale face, she with tears in eyes spoke "ammy mela bacha" tears were flowing from geet's eyes to see her baby after whole 3 days but Arjun turned the screen from her n forwarded medicine to her Geet looked at him angrily when Arjun spoke"chup chap dawa le lo warna call cut kar duga" Geet pouted but gulped the medicine n took tab from Arjun hand to hear ammy shouting and saying something in alien language "aaa...iuiiiee...uuuiaaa" Geet smiled and kissed on screen like kissing her baby and then spoke "mithi kaha hai" on the same time maan took phone in his hand and seeing him Geet stiffened n looked at Arjun. Arjun sat beside her n spoke to maan "maan mithi kaha h" maan replied "andar hai" on which Arjun spoke "camera uske pass v le jaa" maan nodded n took ammy inside n made him lye beside his sister and made camera face them soo that Geet can see both together. Seeing mithi sleeping Geet in soft voice called her "mithi bacha" all the while tears were flowing from her eyes.

Mithi too woke up hearing the voice which she was yearning to hear from last 3 days ...she opened her eyes n found her mother on screen n shouted with happiness "aaa...iiieee" Geet smiled n kissed again on screen like giving her kiss. Both the kids were looking at Geet n shouting and Geet to saying sweet noting to them to make them smile but her heart were crying to touch them. She cried more when both kids forwarded their hands towards screen like asking their mom to took them in her warm n caring arms to make them sleep in their arms. Getting no response from Geet both kids started crying loudly n Geet to cried at her helplessness not to be with her kids. Maan tried to calm them but they were just looking at Geet with hopeful eyes. Their cry were bleeding her heart and she was unable to do anything. Hearing both kids crying loudly aniee came in room only to see heart wrenching scene kids were crying for their mom while forwarding their hands where as Geet was crying other side keeping both hands on screen like she wanted to hold them in her safe arms.

Maan was about to cut the call when Geet started singing lullaby for kids to make them calm and in between signalled aniee to give them milk bottle which she was holding in her arms.

Aa jaa re aa nidiyaa tu aa

Aa jaa re aa nidiyaa tu aa

Aa jaa re aa nidiyaa tu aa

Jhilamil sitaaro se utar

Aankho me aa sapane sajaa

Aa jaa re aa nidiyaa tu aa

Hearing the sweet voice of their mumma both kids looked at kids ..they stopped crying as this the lullaby they are not hearing from the day of their birth but they used to hear it inside their mom too. Geet always sang this lullaby for herself too sometime...whenever age used to miss her mom or feel alone...not able to sleep,she used to sing this to make herself calm as this lullaby is sang by her mother for her. Soo kids are soo much familiar with this lullaby and hearing this in geet's voice always made them calm n sleep.

Geet cried more seeing her kids not taking bottle milk whereas she felt heavy in her br***t. She cried but in between told kids to drink that milk in her sweet voice n asked aniee to feed them forcefully. Aniee nodded with tears in her eyes whereas Arjun hugged geet side ways n sat beside her. She kept her head on his shoulder n sang for her jaans with tears in her eyes.

Soi kali soyaa chaman

Pipal tale soi havaa

Sab rang gaye ik rag me

Tune ye kyaa jaadu kiyaa

Aa jaa re aa nidiyaa tu aa

Kids too started sucking bottle nipple because of hunger and finished their drink...whereas Arjun tried to make Geet eat something but she just nodded her face in no n gave her whole concentration on kids who were in aniee n maan's arm n going in dreamland. Maan who was sitting helping goonj in feed looked at Geet as this lullaby matter to him soo much...there are soo many sweet moments with these and today he were remembering those moments.

Sasaar ki raani hai tu

Raajaa hai meraa laadalaa

Duniyaa hai meri god me

Soyaa huaa sapanaa meraa

Aa jaa re aa nidiyaa tu aa

Aa jaa re aa nidiyaa tu aa.

When she sang last stranger tears were flowing like rain from her eyes as she don't have her babies in her arm like always today her kids are tooo far away from their mother... Aaj ek maa roe rahi h apne hi bacho ke lie jiske Nam usne apni zindagi kar di...jinhe pane ke lie khud ko khone tak taiyar thi...har dukh haste haste lene ko taiyar thi aaj wahi zindagi nahi h uske pass.

Aaj uske saare sapne adhure lagne hai phir se use ... Dard Jo bachpan me tha woh wapash aa Gaya hai uske dil me...wahi akelapan phir sunae de raha h use.

At last kids slept and maan cut the call giving last glance to Geet who was looking at screen without a blink. After that Geet cried her heart out seeing her kids like that...her loneliness once again engulfed her at last doc. Injected her to sleep n glucose were attached to her as she hadn't eaten anything. Arjun once again looked defeated in front of her love for kids he is unable to do anything. Geet have to learn to live once again alone.

Whereas as aniee looked at maan with accused eyes n said "u must be happy to bring this situation for ur kids and wife congrats bhai u did every damn thing to broke ur wife and today u won becoz she is broken daughter, broken wife, broken dil of this house and at last a broken mother too. Congrats go and party with all those who are happy for this. Pata h kya bhai m just thinking what u will answer ur kids when one day they will ask for their mother but m sure u must be prepared for that too also u must be having some short of answer for that too." Saying this aniee left the room.

Maan sat beside kids n kissed their forehead n wiped the tears trails from their face n covered them in warm blanket n lye beside them thinking something which he need to do.

Present

That day was horrible for me n u too Shona but I know as a wife u have forgiven me but not as a mother. I have hurted u too extend but I know once u know every thing u will forgive me as a mother too. I was not that strong too take ur side that time n now I will be not that weak to leave u ever m ready to hear ur anger happily. Bas tum theekh Ho jao sab batauga tumhe ab or nahi chupa pauga tumse yeh sab maan. Love u soo much...yeh v nahi bola hai tumse kabhi...yeh v batna h tumhe bht Kuch share karna h tumse with that maan kissed her forehead n settled beside her on bed n cocooned her in his arm n slept for sometime as he was awake full night.

Precap - Geet asking for something from km for herself.

Complete this thread I wanted to update next part in new thread n more over not happy with decreased likes but no prob. Thanks who alll commented n like n those who are thinking m gng to leave this in between plzzz don't think that I will complete this ff with each thing I have thought about it...abhi toh happy journey bakki h maaneet or mere ammy or mithi ke sath...just need ur all support in my this journey thanksss to every one.

Painful update
Feeling soo bad for geet
Maan I hate him in past
He never trusts his wife
Disgusting
Keep kids away from their mother
Atleast feel kids pain
Disgusting person

very painful update... geet suffered a lot because of maan and his family... why he tortured her that much... geet and kids condition is horrible both are suffering because of the separation... present maan wants to say why he did all that... what made him to torture geet so cruelly...waiting for next...

aaahhh...i want to cry...

Emotional update..It's a crime to keep the little ones away from their mother and Maan was heartless to do so..When Arjun could feel Geet's pain, why Maan couldn't? Annie too felt hurt with his behavior.. Waiting for next..

really lovwd it read the whole in one go
i really feel maan behaves like that with geet due to some reason
n hope nothing happens to geet
really love ammy n mitti
pls do pm me whenever u update next

very painful update... geet suffered a lot because of maan and his family...