MG FF- STILL WAITING #3 Part 39 Page 104 (5/7) - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice story dear. I read all parts in one go. Please when you update send me a Pm. I already sent you a buddy request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update soon. Waiting for the update!
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Posted: 11 years ago


will try to update dear as soon as possible
busy in college so not getting tym to write updates
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile



will try to update dear as soon as possible
busy in college so not getting tym to write updates



take your time will be wait dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
dear college is too hetic nowdays not getting single day free to write update .,..n I really need time for this ff
plzzz be paitent I will update as I will get time pakkka
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

dear college is too hetic nowdays not getting single day free to write update .,..n I really need time for this ff
plzzz be paitent I will update as I will get time pakkka

thanks 4 da reply, np will wait!
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Posted: 10 years ago

THANKS TO ALL WHO LIKED N COMMENTED N WAITED PAITENLY, BUT I CANT UPDATE REGULARLY HAVING SOO MANY ASSIGNMENST, AS MY WHOLE STUDY IS BASED ON PRACTICALS NO BOOKS N ALL, SO NEED TO GIVE 1000% THAT Y M UNABLE SORRY GALS FOR MAKING U WAIT



Part 34




PAST

Kho dia aaj phir se sab kuch, yeh mere sath hi ku hota h baba ji, pahle mumma ko chin lia aapne ab mere bache kaese jiugi mai baba ji, maan ji ne aesa ku kia he broke every promise of his, he promised me that nobody will part my kids from me but he only did that, kisse kahu what i feel, what i want, mere bachee bhookhe hoge na baba ji, unke maa hote hue v woh akele hogae, jaanti hu maan ji h unke pass shayad mujhse jada pyar karte h usne but maine kya galti ki baba ji, maine jaan bhoojh ke apni tabiyat kharab thode ki, plzzz mujhe mere bache de do na babaji, kaha jau kiske pass, mujhe mere bache cahie, i will die without them plzzz baba ji reham karo. But as usual nobody was there to hear her pled.

With every passing min she was geeting weak, her body was giving up, she took her small bag n stand near gate to get the glipse of her babies but she wasnt getting anything at last she thought to take help from father. Every child needs her/his parents when she/he is in trouble, today geet need her father, but her innnerself was saying her he wont help her as he always scolded her only without mistakes too. But her motherhood forced to take help from her father

She went to handa haveli, all security was suprised to see her after 1 n half years, that to alone n worn out, they tried to ask her something but she only asked "papa hai" n one of servent nodded her head n went to call mohinder. Geet came near the door of house when aditi stopped her at door only, geet didnt said anything to her just asked "can i meet papa" on which aditi shouted "no u r not allowded to meet him" "chooti maa plzz ek baar milne do na papa se, i need his help plzz" on which aditi said "koi help nahi milegi tumhe yaha se, itni bezetti karwai h, kam h kya chali jao yaha se, ur father dont want to see ur face tooo, akhir apni aukad dika dii na tumne, pahle mere bacho ki zindi se khela phir disha ki, or sharam aati h mujhe kehte hue v tumne apne bachoo ke sath hi kaese kar sakti ho tum yeh geet, ek baar sochna nahi tumne"

(see whoo is giving lecture) "choti maa maine kuch nahi kia, plzz mere bache mujhe dila doo plzzz" tears started to flow from her eyes but aditi harshly dragged her out of gate n ordered all to not to let her enter. In whole way geet was pleading her to let her meet her papa, she didnt did anything, she want her kids but she dint head ear to her words, she throwed her out n said "humne tumhari shaddi kar di h, ab humara bhoj khatam hua, hum nahi jante tum kaun ho ab, so stop coming in our life bht saal jhela h maine tumhe ab or nahi bardast kar sakti di, yeh mera ghar h or tumhare lie yaha koi jagah nahi h" saying this aditi went inside, security people looked at geet with pity.

Geet looked at her house n thought "ab kha jau, kise kahu yeh maa apne bacho ke lie tadap rahi h, mumma ku chali gae aap mujhe chod ke, koi nahi h aaj humare pass, mumma laut aao humare paas aapki pari ko aapki jarurt hai aaj mumma, maan ji hume nahi milne de rahe h humare bacho se, mere bache bhookhe hoge, roe rahe hoge mere bache plzzz koi laa do mujhe, kuch nahi kia maine kaese kar sakti hu ek maa apne bache ko kaese gira sakti h, plzzz de do mere bacho ko meri mithi mera ammy, ku kia aapne aesa maan ji, in der saalo me maine aapse kuch nahi maanga, aapne iss shaddi ko ek bhoj mana maine kuch nahi kaha, aap kisi or se pyar karte ho yeh v swikar kar lia maine, u always behaved rudely with me, whenever u was angry, u showed ur anger on me, u locked me in that 4 walls, i never complained u, u promised me na mere bache sirf mere h phir ku chin lia mujhse, ku kia aapne kya maanga tha maine aapse, kya galti ki thi maine, jiski saaza mere bacho ko de rahe ho, agar aap naraj the toh mujhe maarte, gussa hote, but esa ku kia ku kiaaa aapne, aap sab jaante the na papa or choti maa v mujhe pasand nahi karte kaha jaau mai kiske pass jau mai bolo na jawab do na maan ji, i know u dont care for me but y cant u care for me for a single tym aesa kya kia h maine, yeh shaddi ku ki aapne maan ji jab aap kisi or se pyar karte tha ku kia yeh sab kuuu pata nahi mere sawal ka jawab mujhe kavi milega ya nahi, mere bache mujhe milege ya nahi haar gae mai puri tarah se haar gae.

Thinking all this she was walking somewhere she too didn't know, at last she was a temple n went inside n sat in a corner while starring at idol like asking question "why always she only". Her body was buring with fever n she was latching, she was feeling immense pain in her heart, she know her kids were crying, they must be humgry but she cant do anything, she knows if maan have once decided he wont let her see her kids, this all was breaking her from inside her chest was heavy, she spread her duppata in her front to hide it, her tears were contionusly flowing, freed her body on wall n hided her face in her kness n cried out her heart, as it was gng to night very less people were there, n no one noticed her too.

In km

After spending good tym arjun, aniee n disha returned, but they were welcomed by babies crying voice, aniee panicked as ammy n mithi never cry this loudly, she holded arjun arm, fear developed inside her, both went toward geet's room only to find maan struggling with kids, maan was consoling mithi where as ammy was crying hard, aniee at once picked him in her arm n tried to calm him, but he was crying his heart, missing the warmth of his mumma. At last aniee asked "bhai geet kaha, bache itna roe rahe hai" maan kept mum, he didn't said a word. At the same tym tara n sneha entered with two bottles of milk. Aniee n arjun gave a confusing look to them n asked about bottle milk when tara explained everything. Arjun n aniee was standing still like land slips from their feet, both looked at maan with acusing look, like u really did this bhai to her. Aniee didn't said anything to maan just went near arjun n said "arjun, today ur sister needs u go, n search her jao arjun, before she do anything" on which maan said "arjun kahi nahi jaega aniee, no one is gng to search her, woh ab iss ghar me wapash nahi aaegi, due to her my kids life was on sake" on which aniee shouted "bass bhai bass ek word v nahi suna mujhe aapse, or yeh bache aapke kab se hue haan, in 6 months me kaha the aaap when ur kids needed u, or aaj yeh aapke ho gae, how can u do this bhai, itna kuch dekhne ke bad v aap ek ma ape ungli utha di, maan lia aaj maine gira dia usne mithi ko toh theekh h na janam dia h usne, aap sab se jada haq h uska impe, aapni jaan ko khatre me daal ke janam dia h usne inhe, aapne aesa ku kia bhai, aaj apne apne jindagi ki sabse badi galti ki h bhai pachtoge ek din yaad rakh what u did to her god too will not forgive u" aniee said all this with tears n cursed herself for leaving her alone, she knows that geet was not feeling well from 1-2 days she again came near arjun n gave him a look which he understands n went out.

They tried to feed babies bottle milk but it was too difficult for them, but after some tries they made babies drink milk n made them sleep. Aniee was still looking at maan with sheer hate, n again said "aapne galti kia h bhai, aaj mujhe aapko apna bhai kehte hue v sharam aa raha u broke her completely yehi cahte the na aap sab, jinda maarna cahte the na use lo ho gaya aapka kam, shayad ab tak maar chuki hogi woh" maan ignored her every word n said "aniee stop talking about her she did one of the biggest mistake of her life" on which aniee said "nahi bhai uski sabse badi galti yeh thi ki woh iss ghar me aapki patni ban kar aae, uski sabse badi galti yeh thi ki yeh jante hue v aap kisi or se pyar karte ho appse pyar kia, aapka saman kia, aapke har gusse ko jhelti aae, uski sabse badi galti yeh thi she trusted u or use v badi galti yeh thi that she gave birth to ur kids knowing about her health, her gae on mere age of 19th she gave birth to 2 kids, excepted ur all rudness, yeh thi uski galti bhai, thi uski galti bht galt thi woh ki kabhi na kabhi aap use pasand karoge, bacho ke aane ke baad shayad uske lie thoda pyar aaega aapke dil me, thoda care aaega, but she was worng on every aspect. U won bhai jeet gae aap but haar gae apni zindagi me" saying this she went to her room crying thinking about geet.

Precap - geet living isolated life, missing her babies. Maan taking care of babies

hopefully 1-2 parts more of past then present parts as i need to make maan confess his deeds soon n complete this ff.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly want to tell u kiddo thst i thougjt it will be happy update but when i recalled the previous part then this update is appropriate
Now abt the update
Life is not bed of roses for geet as it takes all her efforts to prove herself
Maan is sooo rude
Choti maa is tooo cruel
Annie n arjun are the only petsons who cared for.
Thankfully past will end n want some goody goody moments of maaneet with their kids
Thanks a lot
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg what a past. How could maan be so rude to geet. That is so. It donr
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Posted: 10 years ago
painful past of geet
omg maan ki ego is at top
disgusting
annie anger is right

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