THE LOCKET (13) MG FF,new thread link pg 1,COMPLETED - Page 17

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sweetsampa39 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipppeee!!!!!!!!!!!

The Maan thud is back.I jumping like a crazy ball or riding a pogo stick.The feeling is jst like that.How much I love all the other couples of d fic but cant deny my immense happiness when I read Maan.Total description of Maan and Geet and then their legendary collision,each and word that u used to descriae that part,immersed my thots into the scene and I cud actually visualise it.The way Maan was lost in her instead of his anger,the way geet put the kala teeka,haiii jaan le leetta yaar.Maar daala.
Baki update ka kya kahu iss scene ki khumaari se ubhar hi nai paa rahi.

Yet I wud say the Manish-a wala scene was outstandingly hilarious.

waiting eagerly how the MSK uses his futile efforts to kick Geet out of the khuranas' life.


outstanding update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update
Geet is so cute & innocent
MSK the khadoos
Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Well Geet has just read his diary acouple of days ago that he loves her.. dreamy toh banta hai😆


Maan has seen Dev upset in London because of some girl and he is being protective for that reason.

buddhu toh hai.. kya karu iska?😆

Fikar not, Avi pura badla legi😃

Thanks for the support.

actually .. i was enjoying ur update while reading ..
wen i came to the portion of maan's thoughts it just upset me ..
but nw i'm ok with it .. 😊..

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Posted: 11 years ago
nooo way u r cutting down 4 chapters or changing the story...😕😕
haa finally geet atleast found the lil change in NT...

grrr sasha😡😡 how dare she goor him soo much...he is for geet to ghoor...ugly lady😡

even in his anger he couldnt stop himself from noticing her in so much detail😳 lovv him for that😃

haha maan thud !!!

huh yeh geet toh impossible hai...seriously was she planning to get sasha a discount

waiting to see the msk in action...thanku for the update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

don stop d update plz i beg u... u noe ur update's length neva satisfies me... awesom, mindblowin... words r not ter 2 describe.. eagerly waitin fa d nxt one... !! do giv a biggg 1 !!


😆 you always complain about the length of the update... chalo ek kaam karo..

find me a writer or two who updates twice every week that writes longer updates than me😃

thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Yipppeee!!!!!!!!!!!

The Maan thud is back.I jumping like a crazy ball or riding a pogo stick.The feeling is jst like that.How much I love all the other couples of d fic but cant deny my immense happiness when I read Maan.Total description of Maan and Geet and then their legendary collision,each and word that u used to descriae that part,immersed my thots into the scene and I cud actually visualise it.The way Maan was lost in her instead of his anger,the way geet put the kala teeka,haiii jaan le leetta yaar.Maar daala.
Baki update ka kya kahu iss scene ki khumaari se ubhar hi nai paa rahi.

Yet I wud say the Manish-a wala scene was outstandingly hilarious.

waiting eagerly how the MSK uses his futile efforts to kick Geet out of the khuranas' life.


outstanding update.



Thanks Sampa😃, the true Maan bhakt😆

all the stories were leading to this only so am glad you are liking it...

ab se Maan in every part😳 Geet bhi aayegi, chalega na?😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cutesriju

Wonderful update
Geet is so cute & innocent
MSK the khadoos
Eagerly waiting for next update.


Thank you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update get is so cute and sweet and that sasha is such a witch and maan the idiot is misunderstanding geet so sad awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

nooo way u r cutting down 4 chapters or changing the story...😕😕

haa finally geet atleast found the lil change in NT...

grrr sasha😡😡 how dare she goor him soo much...he is for geet to ghoor...ugly lady😡

even in his anger he couldnt stop himself from noticing her in so much detail😳 lovv him for that😃

haha maan thud !!!

huh yeh geet toh impossible hai...seriously was she planning to get sasha a discount

waiting to see the msk in action...thanku for the update😊


Geet bholi hai and pure hearted

Sasha is a female who is into powerful rich and handsome guys. I guess desire without love is what I am trying to portray for her.

Glad you are liking it Purvi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update get is so cute and sweet and that sasha is such a witch and maan the idiot is misunderstanding geet so sad awesome update thanks for the pm



Thanks Kathrina.

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