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SunRahaHainaTu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

even I have to get back to my books... they are calling from along time 😔

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

husband...blush...shy...janam...lips...hai me really maar jawa...

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

First things first... thanks for the PM.

Now my appreciation about chap 55: love your writing style, an update about Poonam and Chandan, bringing all the characters to same time frame, giving each character its identity, story & POV 👏. But I got a bit confused here, how did they get to a desert? Did I miss reading some chapter? 😳Hopefully not! Quiet possibly I don't remember the chapter!! 😳 I have an inkling to re-read the entire story so far once again 😳

Poonam has taken a decision, a firm one finally!! Lets see if and when she realises he was a victim rather than a culprit!! It will be interesting to see how the family unites. I have a feeling the Mosquito will play a pivotal role here... let's see wat u have planned it out!!

Finally Kabir and Megha are official 👏 yay!!!

Geet is the only one who could call it a mosquito bite 😃. Poor Naintara 😆 she got bit by a very big mosquito 😆

Chap 56: I understand most of the readers and writers in this forum are for Mann and Geet, but me thinks you should stick to your storyline.

Loved their reaction to each other 😊 poor Mann doesn't know she is doing everything for him and he will repent so much once all of it is cleared 😆 silly geet has no clue about his thought process 😛

Brilliant entry of manish-a 👏😃 I imagined the guy in the serial and found it so hilarious 😆 mum saw me and asked wat happened😳😃

Poor Mann the more he wants to keep away from him, the more he finds her entwined in his life. Poor "devarji" is being assumed to be behind her change and her "love interest" 😆

I am looking forward to your idea of MSK. I only hope its a different treatment, many writers stick and weave it around the tele character!!!

Awaiting your teaser and next update!!!

Keep it coming on :)

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Oopsie forget another aspect 😳 absolutely brilliant and perfect song selection 👏👍🏼

Torn dress and sense of fashion 😆😆

She thinks of taking her to pinky's store 😆😆 can only imagine sasha's reaction when she gets to know it 😆

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Go Geet. Wow she's becom a very professional business woman. Maan you better watch out MSK might have met his match. It'll be interesting to see how she deals with his MSK avatar. But love that Geet is still the simple and innocent Geet - she thinks Sasha is wearing ajeeb phutti clothes! Hahaha! Loved it. Finally Manishaji makes his entry - brilliant! Maan babu your izzatt needs saving!

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

amazing update...👏 👏

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Ameera.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

how was your vacation avi😊

good update

miss dev tara

geet is super cute barbie doll

maan aap to gaya manishaa

jaisa aapny plan kiya hai waisa hi kijiye story 😊

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ameeranalikhan
how was your vacation avi😊
good update
miss dev tara
geet is super cute barbie doll
maan aap to gaya manishaa
jaisa aapny plan kiya hai waisa hi kijiye story 😊

Vacation accha tha...

Dev Tara will be in next update but so will others...😃

Thanks

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: --Fairy--
Amazing update ...oOps maan atleast talk wid her why dis MU
but waiitng for office romance , where is NT once she come all doubts cleared in light speed

Office romance?😲 Aisa maine kaha socha hai...😆

Thanks Fairy..

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: gurti30
awesome dear
geet is wearing dress and maan as much as he try cant ignore his innocent beauty
loved geet's comment about sasha's dress🤣
and manish was too good🤣 adhi raaat ko bhi bula lena🤣

Thank you😆

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