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Posted: 11 years ago

yay! we r getting an update 2day!😃
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Originally posted by: maansee



so our waiting starts ...😆.

waiting,,,,😛
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yay! we r getting an update 2day!😃

hi rashmi,,,knha ho yaar,,??hw r u doing,,??missing ur writings,,,
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hi rashmi,,,knha ho yaar,,??hw r u doing,,??missing ur writings,,,


hey lily?? whats up🤗
aww! that's so swt of u!
As of nw, i m jst a reader of remya's stry!😳
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hawww PM kahan hai grrr i missed 2 updates:(
oye FB group main entry de:) hehehehehe
awesome mindblowing updates muahhh:)
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hey lily?? whats up🤗
aww! that's so swt of u!
As of nw, i m jst a reader of remya's stry!😳

rder ke saath mein writr mode mein bhi aa jau noe 2 in one like b4,,,,fir aur mja aayega,,,,😛hw s ur stdy going on,,,,,,??
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rder ke saath mein writr mode mein bhi aa jau noe 2 in one like b4,,,,fir aur mja aayega,,,,😛hw s ur stdy going on,,,,,,??


ha ha! will try!😆
my vacations r going on then 4th sem wil start!
n wat abt u?
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Posted: 11 years ago

missed 2 parts

oh god
read all the missing parts
at last geet as maan secreatery
oved it
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its awesome yar oye hoye geet also drooling over maan hmmm not bad , i thought maan caught her when she drool over him hena di
waiting for next part update soon dear
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4. Intoxicated


I wonder what flying in a private jet would be like!! Sure I have travelled in plane before, but this will be a different experience. After that beautiful kiss, I was frantically avoiding him so that I wouldn't jump into his bones. But what surprised me was, he behaved normally, like the kiss meant nothing to him. May be it was like a friendly gesture. The thot depressed me.

Ready to go?

Yup.

I stole a glance at him as we walked towards the private jet. He looks adorable in tux. The relaxed look made him more sexy. As I was about to take our bags, he stopped me.

No need. The driver will get it.

Okay

We entered the private jet and I was amazed to see the luxury. There were eight single seated leather seats in total, 4 at one side and 4 at the opposites. 2 monitor Tvs were planted on each side and at the back of each seat contains small tv with headphone jacks. We took face to face seats and in between us there was a table decorated with fruits, flowers and juice. I looked around and saw 2 rooms at the farthest corner, may be washroom and a private room.


After we tucked in our seatbelt, the final announcement was made for the jet to be in air. I looked through the window and enjoyed the feeling of clouds passing by as Maan indulged himself in laptop.
Lucas.. Good to c u again.

His warm smile told that Lucas is more than a partner to him.

Meet my assistant Geet.. Geet, this is Lucas, my business partner, mentor, friend and above all my brother in law.

I looked at him surprised. He has a sis??

Yea. My elder sis Maya Khurrana's husband.

He said as if reading my thots.

Good morning Mr. Lucas.

No need of formality. U can call me Luc, my beautiful lady.

I blushed at his comment while Maan looked at us amusingly.

So can we proceed?

Maan place his hand at the small of my back in a protective manner and led us through the airport.
A white limo was waiting for us and within 10 minutes we reached the most beautiful 5 star hotel in Italy.

Be ready within 5 minutes.

He replied arrogantly walking to his room while I mimicked his words and stormed in.

He is such an ass.

So true. do u noe how he made me suffer when i was dating his baby sis.

we made small talks and within minutes, Luc was in my team.

The first 2 days in Italy were so busy. We were running around the clients office with installation and other technical works. Lots of meetings were held before the release. Today was the day of release and after the inauguration of the software Maan addressed everyone and briefed about it.

By Noon, we headed towards Luc's house for lunch. I heard Maya fussing over phone how her brother doesn't love her and all. She has a five year old kid and from the talks I knew that Maan is so much fond of him. he bought all types of toys available and headed to her home.

Hello sissy..

Next second, a straight punch landed on Maan's face.

Whoa!! What is that?

U will come to c me only if there is a meeting ?

I looked at them amusingly while Luc grinned.

Uh-Oh!! Its nothing like that doll.

Don't call me that and I hate u.

But I love u Uncle Maan.

Aww!! This kid is so adorable. He has got sea blue eyes similar to Luc's. But he looks like Maya a lot.

That's my buddy. How are u champ?

Then he started to narrate all the things that he had done in school, parks etc. I stood there awkwardly since no introductions have been done.

How rude of u maan, u dint introduce that beautiful lady.

She said slapping Maan on shoulders.

Oops sorry!!

A boyish look covered his face making him look like a cute kid.

Doll, this is geet, my assistant and geet, u already noe who she is from talks.

Assistant? Y I feel so hard to believe that?

He ignored her comment.

This is Sam, my cute nephew.

Don't call me cute Uncle Maan. I m handsome.

Oooh!! He is just like his dad! Say hi to Geet.

Hello Geet.

He said shyly.

Hello handsome.

Oh god!! where is my manners! Come inside guys.


Maya was fun to talk with. she shared almost all secrets and embarrassing moments of him. I was trying to control my laugh when she showed me the pic of a little Maan dressed as Cindrella. He did that only to make his sis smile, when she was angry at him.

After lunch we had dessert. Sam and I became buddies within 5 minutes. He was feeding me icecream when a small portion fell in my dress.

Hey.. u r not sharing it with me.

I licked the vanilla that was smeared across my mouth when I saw Maan staring at me intently.

There is some left for u Uncle.

His gaze dint waver from me and his eyes darkened with feelings that I have never witnessed. He swallowed a lump and I watch fascinated as it moved down to his throat. Damn this man! He eats so sexily. I tried to avert my gaze but something in my eyes was not allowing me to do so.

That s when I realized he did eat from the same spoon that I ate. It felt so intimate.

Oops! Its finished. I vl get a new tube.

Sam said getting down from my lap.

I vl come with u.

No Geet. I m a big man. I vl get it.

He pushed me back on my seat and ran away and this sudden act misbalanced me and I landed straightly on Maan's lap.

Geet.

Yeah?

But I dint meet his eyes as I was busy trying to get off from his lap. He lifted my face with his thumb and forefinger and my heart beat quickened when I saw his face descending. I licked my lips nervously and closed my eyes ready to receive that beautiful moment.

Suddenly some one cleared throat breaking the spell b/w us and we came back to reality. Maya was grinning like a Cheshire cat and Maan walked away embarrassed saying that he had to make an urgent call. I looked at his retreating figure. Was he really going to kiss me? does he feel something or am I just his passing fancy?




@all: I enjoyed reading all ur comments and i m happy to c some long comments which is not so often in my stories. Thanx a lot guys.

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